Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#3:New thread link:P 47 - Page 26

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

no dear u are nt trying to smart!
U are trying gain to as much knowledge , you can!
I really appreciate it!
Well soon ur days come when u have to cover chapters over chapter only with caption of any of those names you took, if you have choosen ur way in the path of scienec😃.
Heck, don't think i am lecturing u🤣

Originally posted by: -Amri-

@ Live-life

Your science teacher sounds like a funny man:)

@ Vampu

Wah! Kya baat kahi hai tumne! *claps*

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
beautiful update
amazing
love it

Originally posted by: shah10

Waiting

Originally posted by: Leki

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OK stop glaring at me... i know i'm late by more than one month😲 well you are responsible for that one after other you gave updates which left me speechless and numb... so finally today i decided to write down comments for this shapter and then type... I dnt know how much justice i can do but i will try my best... It's really fine, yaar! And your comments always do full justice!

Gosh Girl what have you done... the way you portrayed Arjun's thoughts emotions WOW!!!! The way he was scrutinising her even made me hell nervous and that smile at the end God i'm dead... well No, more shocks on the way right and i know you won't let us die that easily...* i can see evil smile of ur's*😡 Haha...*Gives evil smile*

So he is gonna make her pay for all those she put them through... put HIM through...So it is no more Arjun but ACP Arjun Rawte vs Riya Mukerjee... i feel for her Me too:)

Shree's POV about what three of them Rathore, Shree and Chotu went through was well written... Shree even in his grief could understand what his mentor/boss and his friend is going through... all coz of one lady!!!! his PoV show's how much influence Riya had on these people's life just in a matter of 3 months... Well i always thought in show they will show something similar atleast 1% of what u wrote but they disappointed me high time😡 Thanks for writing about it... I am glad that you liked it:) These people are equally important as our hero and heroine. And I am missing Rathore and Shree in the show

So finally Riya is back to ETF...hell girl you are not gonna get out from there easily... You have so much to answer for hurting them beyond repair... Shree Chotu and Rathore's reactio on seeing her...hmmm nothing more to say!!!!Me neither😆

Riya's POV on Arjun and her feelings for him or what she felt on his mere presence well i dnt have words to describe how i felt after reading that... Take a bow Girl!!! but but only one question i want to ask her " THEN WHY THE HELL YOU DID THIS TO HIM?????"

He was slowly coming out of his shell or estrangement but u ruined it RIYA!!!!!

One thing i would disagree Arjun wouldnt kill her just like that... he will make sure she pay for the emotional turmoil they went through!!!

Yes! Our Arjunwa is in bad shape, and I really don't blame him! Riya has a lot of work ahead of her:(

Chotu he is the one who havent shown what he felt hearing the news or truth about his best buddy, atleast Rathore showed his anger pain... Chotu was silent through out the whole revelation... he reacted way more mature than others when they saw Riya,,,,Yes, Chottu is the mature one in my story! And I suspect, in the show as well😊

Shree he slapped her well she deserves it... his outburst is fully justified... Thank God Rathore and Chotu stopped him otherwise it would have been him who killed Riya not Arjun...

Even Chotu felt cheated and disgusted seeing Riya... the way Rathore mocked while introducing Riya clearly shows how hurt he is...they are...

Anitha Shukla wow that lady is one powerful female... even Cohelo cnt manage his team but she did it smoothly...Thanks:)

So finally ETF team get to know about some of the facts about their own department... NIB cool...Shocking revelations for team!!!!

the way Sam- Shree- Chotu was worried for Arjun and Arjun realising whatever happens his team is with him was such a nice moment...😊 he could count them on any situation... I just love their bonding! I just had to put that part in.

Riya she couldnot deny or avoid effect Arjun have on her whatever the situation maybe... Arjun he also had undivided attention towards his lady love... Haha...the two are hopelessly in love with each other:)

Arjun's reaction on knowing she is not his and Rathore's student rather someone else is her boss...lol

Riya she acted really well, played with their feelings and emotions... wow lady well done👏🤢😡 I really pity both of them...they are in really bad shape

Arjun's outburst on knowing Riya's real identity... the way he burst out was fully justifiable... well how more decite they will take... that too from a person they trusted with their life soul...Yes, his reaction is really justified, I don't blame him!

Riya's relpy to Arjun's outburst... she know how much she hurt them... hurt HIM...

One for shock to Arjun... it was all related to him his life... Arjun and Sikki!!!! every damn thing had to do with his life and he didnt know he was kept in dark!!! haww

WHY HIM... WHY HIM ALWAYS????!!!!

Continue Soon... How that man has suffered! My heart goes out to him.

i'm sorry if i disappointed you with my comments... Are you kidding me? Your comments are like soul food for me! I loved it!!!

I Did It!!!!! Finally i posted my comments...Yipee🥳 Me too celebrating😳

Originally posted by: Aks13

For late comments dr...but wht to do...busy coz of exams...!!!

Wow... Wht a Mind Blasting update swthrt...!!!!

Thanks a lot, sweetheart! And hope your exams went well! And I always ADORE your graphics and images😊

I think that's the most difficult situation for her as she had to see disgust n hatred for herself in their eyes whm she loved a lot...!!! OMG she has already been feeling so guilty n their cold behavior wasn't helping her much...!!!!! Very true, yaar! She is really going through a tough time.

You wrote Riya's POV remarkably well...!!!! It's outstanding dr...!!!!! Awww her feelings about Sam n Choree showed that how much she respected thm n lved thm...!! Thanks a ton, darling!

Wht went wrong in her life????? It's the greatest mystery to solve for our Acp..!!!!! And for you guys too😉

OMG Arjun was constantly looking at her... !!!! Wow his soul piercing eyes send shivers down her spine...!!!! Poor gal... this is just the beginning for him...!!! I don't think that he will let her go that easily...!!!! Haha...so true!!!😛

Phew..!!! Arjun's side of a story was a little scary... I m glad that he controlled himself n didn't chop her into pieces...!! Knowing our ACP, he's very much capable of that

Hmm... so akdu rawte accepted his folly n realized that thy all were worried for him...!!! It's great that he finally realized the worth of team...!!!! I just love the ETF team and their bonding:)

OMG it took him hell lot of efforts to subside his inner turmoil n listen to that lady who pretended as Riya's mother before but he did it perfectly well...which itself is a big shock...!!!!!LOL:)

OMG Dustin Coelho was hell nervous...I can't believe this...!!!! Me neither😃

Hm...interesting...he felt a pang of jealousy whn he realised that Ankita Shulka was her mentor n not him n Rathod...!!!!

Poor guys continuously getting one shock after another...!!So true. This is the very definition of a bad day!

Loved the mystery n suspense u created...!!!! The way u describe highly secretive firm NIB n their work process was super exciting...n I m too agreed with Shree just like james blondish...!! Aww, thanks a lot, my dear, it means a lot to me.

Wow impatient rawte cut her short n cme straight to the point n in reply thy got the shock of their lives which had shaken thm to the core...!!! Bilkul sahi baat kahi hai tumne!

OMG he was again thinking on the wrong line...!!! Wht the...!!! Thy all reacted the same way...!! For god sake thy all r officers themselves n thy hv to understand the nature of her job...!!!!Yes, but is it so easy for them?

Phew...finally Riya took the charge n told thm the reason behind her joining ETF...n that is Sik...!!!

How will Arjun react on this...?????? It's getting way too much exciting...!!!! Let's just say that it's going to be bad!

Thanks for pm dr... You are very much welcome! And go read Ch 8A now😃

Continue soon...