Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
First of all congratulation for the new thread🤗Thanks darling!
I will say , you are one the person who always made me breathless by every word that comes from your thread. This story define the pure perfection of your writings. Hats off woman😃. My skin constantly resembles a tomato these days because of comments like these😉
Secondly accept my heartly apology for being this much late ! I am sorry *vampy face*😔🤢
no excuses haan😉No problem!
Coming to the update. First tell me why the heck you stopped at this point, for toturting for till the next update😡. Vampu ka gussa, mein toh darr gayi!
Well life is unpredictable , but it is too much unpreditable for Arjun I guess. That shocks & surprises life is giving him , if any comman man would have been in his place , no idea what he would have done. But this man is enough capable for handeling this . Yes, poor guy. All my sympathies are with him:)
This part as a whole was a roller coaster ride of emotions, pains , some realities and beliefs. Man i could hardly imagines chotu in such trauma. Poor he!! And the thoughts his best friend held for him.
After that rathod. Gosh!! This situation is being worse for everyone man. Poor chief tried to maintain himself infornt of his juniors but for how much time. Finally he he vent out his anger for the sake of his own peace. Yes, poor Rathore and Choree. They've been definitely having some of the worst days of their lives thanks to Riya!
But later what happend, left me shocked. Shree slapped her??? Don't know if have done the wrong or right. But i am sure the situation complelled him do so! I really felt bad writing that:(
Between , I like the way you expressed the phrases in the perfect and accurate time span. Awesome job dear. Thanks a ton, dear!
Ah this lady Anita amazed me this time. The attitude of leading the team, and the way she handeled the situation. Hats off to this lady. And the way Dustin behaved with her was awe to read. I am really impressed with her. For certain agent of her department she was ready to expose themselves and she did too. And this a pure example of the intensity of the relation between Riya with her. Claps for this. Aww, I am so glad that you liked the character! Thanks.
Then loved the way she expressed her department and being humorous that time. And sameer , haha.. Man he termed the department as bullshit..haha. Means they are doing they job perfectly. Yup:)
Now comes to ACP Rawte.. How perfectly this man kicked aside the Arjun who have the desire and longing for his love and the true Acp took control over. Hats off to the way he maintained the professionalism. Sam supporting him and his thoughts of being selfish was beautifully written. Thanks, your description of Arjun's feelings is bang on:) And I miss Rathore!
I was also amazed by shree when he said james bondish style haha! This is the best part as they maintained the professionalism. My horrible sense of humor at work:)
And poor riya. She was silent at first just waiting for everyones retreating back! Poor she even thought Arjun would kill her instantly. Not so easy gal! He won't do that in any way! He is not that fool when he behaved as a mad man ..lol. Haha. Yes, Riya has immense courage. Way to go, gal!
And the silent sensation, his anger, her helplessness , his feeling of bitrayl and her guilty emotion portrayed very well. Aww, thanks Vampu!
And then the way Riya accepted herslef being the culprit of her best friends, of the man whom she termed as her brother, and the finally the man , for whom she have her love and desire.
That was the best part you expressed the increasing desire of Riya for this man! He have this effect on her. This gal did all ths to save him without even caring about her job or what! And he was thinking , she never cared about what they shared. Gosh!
Rather he is shooting daggers on her as question. HuffYour comment on Riya's character was spot on. You rock, woman!
I am just imagining when finally they will confess their love. Well i am imagining too much but i would love to see their real passion dude. This is gona make me crazy. It's made us all crazy! That's d reason y we all are here😉
And finally he came to the actual point and burst out everything! But the answer that came was unexpected! Yeah dude let the game begin. I guess he have never thought about this point. And now he is speechless afet barking all the things! Lol
i only could laugh at the last part. You know why? Yes you better know. Yes, I know😛
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