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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


don't tell me u buttered my BF google🤣

hmmm...something like that!!! 😆
btw google mera bhi BF hai okay!! 😛 kyunki har ek friend zaroori ho tha hai!! 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Live-life


Darrne ki koi zarurat nahi hai balike!! I am harmless!! 😆 unless of course
you want me to be harmful! 😛
And here is my biggest smile!!! 😃😃


😃 I certainly don't want to be on your bad side:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

I have, Madona!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Amri-



<font size="2">Haha, Vampu- your sense of humour is unrivalled. Abb tumhara comment ki baari hai:) I am still reading and replying😆</font>


ha ha!
Well its nt sense of humor, i ws shocked seeing those names!
My sterams is related with biochemistry so! !
Hmm just 3 days back i completed reading last two parts! So mujhe jada intezaar karna nahi pada!
But i missed you a lott😔

welcome back🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

I read this all in one go and all I can say is hats off to such a fine piece of work. Your integration of a plot in the romance is mind blowing. The fact that there is a test of loyalty as well as severe angst is what had got me hooked onto this FF. Please do accept my buddy request and send me a PM for the next update for I am dying to know what happens next.

Thanks and lots of love.


Thanks a lot!!! A new reader? And you read my story at one go? That's such a great compliment!!!

And I really appreciate your critique of the story...your analysis was bang on!!

The main idea was to have a viable plot to work with along with the lovey-dovey bits😊 I am glad you liked it:)

Sent you the PM for this chapter!!! And I have to say this- I love your username😛

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

And BOOM indeed missy. Gave me a heart attack this one did. Fell out of my chair as Riya was revealed to be Roshni's cousin. Then the last sentence, it had only been a few seconds before I fell offy chair again.

Oo la la, Mr. Arjun is angry and hurt, aww my poor baby. Hell, I would be too if I found out that my wife's...er...husband's cousin was the person who was slowly becoming very close to my heart.

Atta girl, Riya! Speaking to Arjun like a boss! You go girl! I still feel bad for my baby though.

Gah! Please update soon, I'm dying to read what happens next!! Arjun's reaction to the last statement is what I want to read.


Yayy, I am glad to have kept the suspense alive and provide a jhatka to you guys😃

And yes, poor baby. Attack pe attack hua hai uspe😆 Even I am feeling very bad for him.

Aur Riya bilkul bindaas hai...so her speaking to Arjun this way is not a big surprise!!!

The next one will be up in a couple of days...keep stalking:) And thanks a lot for the awesome comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Amri-


😃 I certainly don't want to be on your bad side:)

Don't worry!!
main to bas mazak kar rahi thi!! 😆
as I said I am harmless!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


ha ha!
Well its nt sense of humor, i ws shocked seeing those names!
My sterams is related with biochemistry so! !
Hmm just 3 days back i completed reading last two parts! So mujhe jada intezaar karna nahi pada!
But i missed you a lott😔

welcome back🤗


Mujhe saare sciences se bahut darr lagta hai...so I have a healthy respect for people like yo who study them:)

And I missed you a lot too!!! And right now, I am reading your comment only. Your comments always make my day😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


ha ha!
Well its nt sense of humor, i ws shocked seeing those names!
My sterams is related with biochemistry so! !
Hmm just 3 days back i completed reading last two parts! So mujhe jada intezaar karna nahi pada!
But i missed you a lott😔

welcome back🤗

Well I am sorry to shock you like this!!
but you know I was just trying to be smart!! 😆
warna mein tehri ek bholi bhali ladki, sirf 14 ki to hoon...well almost 15!
Honestly, I don't even know what half of those mean!! 😆
Main to bas smart act kar rahi thi!! AS I said! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Live-life

Don't worry!!
main to bas mazak kar rahi thi!! 😆
as I said I am harmless!!! 😃


I will take your word for that, behna:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Amri-


Mujhe saare sciences se bahut darr lagta hai...so I have a healthy respect for people like yo who study them:)

And I missed you a lot too!!! And right now, I am reading your comment only. Your comments always make my day😛

Coincidence much!
Mein kal ji science ka exam de kar ayi hoon!! Sach mujhe bhi science seee bohuthe dar lagta hai!!
Maa kasam!! 😆 Par kya karein!! Don't have a choice! Study to karna hi padega! 😭 😛

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