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this is so so amazing..by the time sakshi's cd finished i had goosebumps...this is the most emotional story i had ever read...Oh god she cannot die..plz plz plz dont show her dead..I hope when he reaches hospital, he sees her alive and there...i know u just updated but you have to update soon...plz plz plz...You are such a amazing amazing and talented writer and you deserve all the applaud dear...Plz let sakshi survive ..she have to live for her arjun and she has to say those words that she loves him...awesome work and take my salute...Let me tell u honestly..i dont have words to express how i feel after reading this story..I could feel the pain for Arjun and Sakshi and hope they both find happiness in the end...plz plz

It was awsome tahi
Was crying really
And that video tape felt like so real...
I hope that its a happy ending...
Cont soon

hey angel...rulake choda na...ab har baar aise rulaogi...to mai tumhe koi aur naam de dungi...

bt cnt...ur angel na...

this update...it ws so deeply affecting nd emotional...loved dat night scene of stars...beautifully written...

lovely altogether...

bt angels r made nd meant to create miracles na...

so?

sakshi?

arjun's future?

i hope u got it...!!!!!!!!

continue soon

love
Aisha

You can't let her die!!! Sakshi has to live...for Arjun...

I have no words to describe this, honestly !!! I cannot say what I feel, I am only crying and crying buckets.
This is so brilliantly written , it seems as if the scene is unfolding before my eyes
Gosh...wht do I say ?! You have tremendous talent...this is so so beautiful

If something like this would happen in the show ( which I hope will), I think I would keep my fingers on the rewind button
Simply outstanding !!!!
There are so many talented writers in this forum and CV's are struggling with the show, I think they should come and take a look here and see what you all are capable of

Plsss update soon

This is so damn gud Tahi ... Arjun and Sakhshi ki friendship ... Sakhshi ki CD and uski baatein bahut hi emotional thi... Rula diya yaar tumne ...But I m confused Sakhshi is alive or not ... Plz update it soon ...thanks for this update and for the PM also :)

gosh!!

Resss... Unres tomr 😉 .. whatever u wanna throw at me, am ready *squints her eyes* 😆