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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
It was so beautifully written. I felt like sakshi is actually sitting there on my computer screen and telling those stuff. She nearly blurted out that she loved him. I just hope that sakshi survives and arjun can spend the rest of his life in her couch listening to 'balam pichkari'.
You are such a wonderful writer. Please continue soon. CV's dekho... Look at all these wonderful works on arakshi. Hope you guys get inspired from such works and bring us something beautiful. :-)
Update soon.:-)
Edited by swathi93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Really I dont know what to say now...its very emotive..just '' a perfect one ''...
Thank you...and thanks for such a long part...
Edited by mital276 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Haww.. *facepalm*

Ki kar ditta tussi?! 😲

No words behna.. no words.. 🤔 😃

No offense to anyone around, but for me this is the single-most best piece of work, I've ever read on Arakshi.. 👍🏼

Why?! Coz this is the Sakshi Anand and Arjun Rawte, I have always pictured in mind right since Day 1.. A fun-filled, mature and strong friendship silently transforming into something much more deep and beautiful..

And for that you get a jaadu ki jhappi.. 🤗 And a pappi (From Hotwa) 😉

Please do write more soon.. I don't want her to die.. Else he'd die.
She has to live; for him.. For them.. She has to feel and see his love.. . 😭

Funny how we get attached to fiction, but seriously you really left me teary-eyed with this one.. 😭

P.S. Ho sakey toh link na twitter pe post kar diyo.. with text in CAPS reading , 'This is it!' 😉

P.P.S: The song! Maar daala..
Gum le ja tere, jo bhi tune diye..
Ya phir mujhko bata, inko kaise sahein..

Toh phir aao mujhko satao..
Toh phir aao mujhko rulao..

Aa bhi jaao..

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesome PC..out of the world!

That whole scene and Arjun seeing the CD played before me...it was such a beautiful vision

and i know u wont kill her...bring her alive for him for us...

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Damn ...Its soo good!!!

Rula dita yaar!!!😭😭😭😭
How could you kill her after all this !!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
U made me cry
it was heart touching
i cnt believe it that shakshi z no more
i loved it
bt still hoping
kash shakshi wapas lout ati
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
No, she can't be dead, Tahi, she better not be dead!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
You've taken the responsibily of making us cry kya😭...sooo emotional it was..rula diya tune mujhe rula diya techie sen😭

Lekin ek baat kahu,chori chori chupke chupke😆😆😆...mindblowing update it is,tussi kamaal ho...you're just a great writer,and trust me i'll never be tired to tell you this..supeb superb and absolutely superb...update soon techie !dont leave us at a cliffhanger...😆😆

Please dont make sakshi dead techie,pretty please,im being a big despo now,saach saachi😭😳😆

Famous tacky,you're already famous and loved,now you want proof too😲😉😆toh phir yeh loh proof😳
Edited by PoohLover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
i had tears in my eyes the entire time. I hope arjun makes it in time and she doesnt die. Lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Awesome... Hope Sakshi Is Fine...

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