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Sia

@satanslove

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Haila !!

Me first ..yeh kaisa ho gaya 😆

Now thats a intelligent part...i really like how you visualized...

Getting Sakshi to Understand Arjun ..trying to understand what he is upto..and then ofcourse she knew tht Arjun..is required ...

Shree helped her ..to change the Footages...too much of emotional attyachar on Hotwa ...

Ab kitna guilt main rahega 😆

Next part to be updated soon

Edited by -Siyaa- - 12 years ago

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Wow...I loved it Tahi di...you wrote it really beautifully,,,Shree helped Sakshi to change the CCTv footage!!!!

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through

@through

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I read it even before i got the PM. And it was mind blowing. Even i was having the same thoughts about how would it be like when arjun gets caught for his wrong doing. I had also concluded that why not make sakshi take up all the blame for what he did. You "technically" made sakshi the culprit. Awesome thinking. Continue soon. Wanted to comment for the 1st chapter too bit couldn't do it because i was busy with my studies. The first chapter was very beautiful. And the rain added some magic to the whole situation. You showed the emotional turmoil that everyone was going through magnificently.
Claps and hugs for you. Since i've logged in from my phone i can't use the emoticons.
:-)

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Yeh kya thi techie sen,haila itni emotional update...roula diya tune mujhe but but tu cheez hain mast mast tu cheez hain mast mast😆 ...meaning that it was just incredible this update...soo very very well written,Sakshi did all that because she loves him a lot❤️ continue soon please please😳🤗

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Hey seksy!

Sorry.. Bohot late hui gawa.. 😕

Anyway, behna that was fantastic! No other word..
Sakshi, the mastermind! 😉
Everything right from how she judged his every action and acted accordingly, even to the extent of seeking Shree's help in manipulating the tapes was per..fect!
My brave, strong girl..
Haaye.. Main toh iski fan bann gayi hoon, ab! 😆😉

tch tch.. She's going to be minced meat if left alone in a room with Hotwa.. Roast karke, nimbu maarke kha jayega usse! 😆😛

I pity Shree already too!

Anyway, please rid him of the guilt.. Nahi saha jaata yaar.. Kuch kuch hota hai, behna.. I'm sure tum samajh gayi.. 😉

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Amazing
loved it
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Tahi ... Awesome update... Why she is doing ... Why she is saving Arjun ... Waiting for the next part eagerly ... Plz-2 update as soon as early 😛 ... Thanks for the update and for the pm also ...:)

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Great update! Loved how Sakshi saved asr from getting hid cute behind booted from etf. But why would she do that?

And why tell them now about her dad? So many questions that need answers, jaldi update karna :P

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Actually I was a little bit upset with the first part..I was really unhappy with such an ending of
this
awesome pair, because I thought its an os..But ,thank god, you wants to continue
and for me its a good
news..coming to the update...its really admirable..
full of care and affection..
Very nice..keep going and thanks for the pm..

Edited by mital276 - 12 years ago