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despicable_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

Okies.. so this is my second last work I shall be writing for this forum. 😊And yes, I will be discontinuing my other works too.
Though a few of them will be written till the end..otherwise, people have threaten me to house arrest until I do so. 😕😆
How vulgar! 🤪
Anyhu, coming to this one.. erm, I don't know why I am writing this.. as there are many fics based on the same plot. Boom, goli and gone 😆
Was listening to a sad bangla song..and this thought popped in.
Khair, dimaag mein kira ghusafied so had to write it 😛
And it's super duper long 🤪 which is why I have split it into parts! 😉
So, yeah..leave your reviews and love.. otherwise I won't post the next part. 😈
as always, dedicated to you all and my seven ladies 😉
Love,the very inphamous and hatedT 😎
INDEX

Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 7
Part 3: page 10, 11Part 4(a) : Page 16Part 4(b) : Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

I am not crying... there's just something in my eye.. No maybe slighty crying 😭

50 shades wali tahi di, yeh itna sad sad kyu??? well it was amazingly written & beautifully emoted.. but why so serious (joker ishytle 😉 )... love the back story of sakshi in this OS.. added alot of depth.. & arjun-sam friendship!! awww, the bromance is back on 😆

but, why cant hotwa seem catch a break 😕 .. first roshini , then riya & now sakshi!! Anyways, awesome OS!! i was hoping for a funny one coz i love your funny OS's & needed something light to help me concentrate.. well i'll be needig icecream after this.. to hell with a diet 😉 😆

another thing, am meant to be inactive till 12th nov bcoz of study overload 🤢.. so pls dont waste effort on sending me pms... people send me pms & i cant gt back & its making me feel guilty .. Pls rmbr pm issue & awesome OS!!!!

Loadsa love pari

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Posted: 13 years ago

PS: why r u leaving the forum??!?? :-S

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PoohLover

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG OMG techie..this is sooo emotional,rula diya tune mujhe😭 ,happy that sikander is finally dead,which means that both Roshni and Sakshi family gor justice...but then sakshi being shot and the way Arjun was hurt,fear of losing her,panicking is soo emotional,the way arjun saying no,then sakshi wanting to talk surely prick my heart...you really write soo well,conveying each emotion soo perfectly⭐️,kudos to you👏...jaldi update karo techie,ab intezaar nahi kar sakte please please😳😳

Aur what is this about being your second last post..are you going somewhere...dont you dare stop all your story techie😭pleaseee😒

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despicable_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari
I am not crying... there's just something in my eye.. No maybe slighty crying 😭

50 shades wali tahi di, yeh itna sad sad kyu??? well it was amazingly written & beautifully emoted.. but why so serious (joker ishytle 😉 )... love the back story of sakshi in this OS.. added alot of depth.. & arjun-sam friendship!! awww, the bromance is back on 😆

but, why cant hotwa seem catch a break 😕 .. first roshini , then riya & now sakshi!! Anyways, awesome OS!! i was hoping for a funny one coz i love your funny OS's & needed something light to help me concentrate.. well i'll be needig icecream after this.. to hell with a diet 😉 😆

another thing, am meant to be inactive till 12th nov bcoz of study overload 🤢.. so pls dont waste effort on sending me pms... people send me pms & i cant gt back & its making me feel guilty .. Pls rmbr pm issue & awesome OS!!!!

Loadsa love pari

humesha funny funny likhti hu na..so tried sad sad this time 😉😆 and it wasn't fun 🤪 I miss my corny heroes and crazy heroines as well 😆

But glad..you liked it 😆 was worth it then!

Don't worry..won't be updating anytime soon..so no PM ka jhanjhat 😛

and no, I am not leaving the forum.. but yes, will be limiting my time for sure. Too much pressure you see! 😊

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despicable_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohLover
OMG OMG techie..this is sooo emotional,rula diya tune mujhe😭 ,happy that sikander is finally dead,which means that both Roshni and Sakshi family gor justice...but then sakshi being shot and the way Arjun was hurt,fear of losing her,panicking is soo emotional,the way arjun saying no,then sakshi wanting to talk surely prick my heart...you really write soo well,conveying each emotion soo perfectly⭐️,kudos to you👏...jaldi update karo techie,ab intezaar nahi kar sakte please please😳😳

Aur what is this about being your second last post..are you going somewhere...dont you dare stop all your story techie😭pleaseee😒

puhlease.. 😆too much hui gawa kya? 😉 but thank you so much. 😳

reviews se khush nehi hui toh blog mein update de dungi..no worries, tumhe pm mill jayegi. 😉

Yes.. I am actually...from october, I won't have time to do something other then work..work..and work. So, yeah..pata nehi.

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shararatisuhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

REALY NC AN EMOTNL PIECE

OF WRITING..WTNG FOR NXT UPDT😊

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 13 years ago

😉 unres
di beautifuly writen
heart touching
lov it
emotionally drained
finally sik dead bt
sakshi bi omg
really dnt give up on bhaiya
rr bro dosti tere dam se h
lov it
claps di
ps. missing u loads
next pm kr dena
ur pagal payali
love u tc
n al d best 😃

Edited by Payal_156 - 13 years ago