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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Interesting concept and nice title 😊

Part 1:
So Arjun is remembering his moments with Riya
I feel really sorry for her; that poor girl tried to surprise Arjun but got shouted at instead when she didn't really make a mistake or know about Roshni's barsi!

Part 2:
I'm glad that Arjun was regretting about the way he behaved with Riya.
Riya must be hurt a lot cause only then would she leave Arjun and ETF!
Aww Arjun was crying when Riya left him.
OMG Arjun couldn't find Riya after 6 months of searching her.
OMG some terrorists have attacked a school

Precap's interesting
I hope the ETF saves the children, everything gets sorted out between Ariya and that Arjun doesn't get hurt a lot when he gets shot!
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
It was awesome blossom and yet emotional update dear.
So arjun is thinking about flashback so riya left him.
Rathore and all are angry on arjun.
Arjun brust into tears.
He was missing riya very much.
Continue soon.
Eagerly witing for next part.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
awesome update...1!
hmm.. so arjun regrets for his behaviour...!!
everyone were so angry with arjun...!!!
precap is interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

It was awesome blossom and yet emotional update dear.
So arjun is thinking about flashback so riya left him.
Rathore and all are angry on arjun.
Arjun brust into tears.
He was missing riya very much.
Continue soon.
Eagerly witing for next part.
And thanx for pm.


welcome ...
3 baar network problem ki waja se delete hone k baad ye post hue hai ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: krinal5chhayal

Interesting concept and nice title😊


<font color="#ff0000">Part 1:</font>

So Arjun is remembering his moments with Riya

I feel really sorry for her; that poor girl tried to
surprise Arjun but got shouted at instead when she didn't really make a mistake
or know about Roshni's barsi!


<font color="#ff0000">Part 2:</font>

I'm glad that Arjun was regretting about the way he behaved
with Riya.

Riya must be hurt a lot cause only then would she leave
Arjun and ETF!

Aww Arjun was crying when Riya left him.

OMG Arjun couldn't find Riya after 6 months of searching her.

OMG some terrorists have attacked a school



Precap's interesting

I hope the ETF saves the children, everything gets sorted
out between Ariya and that Arjun doesn't get hurt a lot when he gets shot!

Update soon😊


i will update it soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Superb update.
Arjun ne Riya ko itna kuch suna diya.
Riya was not at fault,at all.
Riya ko toh yeh bhi nahi pata thha,ki,ussdin Roshni ki barsi thhi.
Baad mein Arjun ko realise huya jab sab kuch khatam hogaya.
Everybody angry on Arjun.
Loved Sam bhai's outburst.
What????
Riya left Mumbai and ETF????
Thats sad...
He even went to Kolkata to search for her,but,she was not even there.
ETF gets a case from Dehradun.
Arjun remembers abt that day and is upset.
Some terrorists attacked a school bus.
Precap is interesting.
Please continue soon.
If possible,do pm me,when u update next time.


Thax 4 ur luvly comment .i will try 2 continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Nice story
Arjun and his anger uff
Precap looks interesting
Can't wait to read the next part! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Hai guyz !!!!back again ...thax 4 likes & luvly comments 😃
As i m a bengali i have some problem with hindi pronounsiation .plz adjust karlena 🥱

Here is the 3rd part of my story .enjoy it -

Part -3

Etf team reached at dehradun .they made a plan according 2 the school map .they decided 2 enter through the back door as the terrorists can not b alert abt their presence .
They entered safely 4m the back door .rathod order the team 2 get spreaded .so chotu & shree went 2 the 1st floor .rathod & ayesha went 2 the 2nd floor .arjun went 2 the 3rd floor .they immediately took their position & start firing .at first moment the terrorists get shock at this sudden action .after few moments they also started firing .
Shree & chotu killed almost 7-8 terrorists .
At the 2nd floor rathod & ayesha also kept their firing & almost all terrorists r killed .suddenly one man pointed a gun toward rathod 4m behind .he didn't notice it but ayesha noticed & she immediately shot the man
.rathod turned back & found the man lying on the floor .he looked toward ayesha & gave a thankful smile .ayesha
also smiled back .


arjun is at 3rd floor ...he found about 6-7 terrorists r moving here & there in one class room & there r almost 30 students r stucked .arjun move 2ward them silently .after taking position he started firing at the men as that the students can not get harmed .After finishing his task he came 2 the students & took them out safely .but one small girl came 2 him -

Girl(holding his shirt corner ):uncle !!!uncle !!!

Arjun turned 2 her -

Arjun :kya hua beta ???

Girl :uncle ,humari teacher didi ko bacha lijiye ...(almost cryingly )

Arjun :kyu kya hua ???

Girl :un logo ne humari teacher didi ko pakad kar let gayi .teacher didi ne un logo ki 2 admiyo ko bohot mara .par aur 3rd admi ne akar teacher didi ki sar pe bohot jor se mara aur wo behosh ho gayi .phir un logo ne unhe kisi room me lekar band kar di .plz unhe bacha lijiye ...

Arjun :don't worry beta .mein apki teacher didi ko kuch nehi hone dungi .

He immediately left & started 2 search her .finally he came 2 the store room .he opened the door & found a girl was tied with chair .he went 2 her & move hair 4m her face .but he was shocked 2 see her .it was non other than
riya !!!
😲
Arjun want 2 see her 4 6months .but not in that condition.she was senseless ,tied up with chair & bleeding 4m the corner of her lip .
Arjun immediately untied her -

Arjun (pathing her cheeks):riya akhe kholo apna ...riya plz meri taraf dekho ...

Riya slowly opened her eyes .at first moment she could not recognize him .after few minutes her visualisation get clear .she was shocked 2 see him .but arjun was so happy that he hugged her .

Arjun :riya tum kaha chale gaye the

Riya also want 2 hug him back but suddenly he remembered his harsh words .she pushed him away & shouted "

Riya :bas bohot ho gayi !!!!!ap khud ko samajhte kya hai ...ha !!!!jab chaha pas bulali jab chaha dur kardi .akhir ap chahte kya ho ????

Arjun :riya i know ki meine tumhe ...

Suddenly arjun 's gaze fell on the man standing at the door pointing gun 2ward riya .riya was facing back so she didn't notice .unfortunately arjun kept his gun down when he was untieing riya .so he has no other option 2 save riya .& he did the same .he came infront of riya .in the meantime the man presss the trigger .bullet hit arjun .riya turned back & found arjun was shot !!!!she immediately picked the gun & shoot the man .arjun was going 2 fall down
but riya hold him & sat on the ground .

Arjun :riya ...i m sry .meine tumhe bohot dukh pouchaya .ho sake to mujhe maaf kardena ...
Riya :no arjun sir .myjhe apse koi shikayat nehi hain ... riya started shouting 4 help -shree ,chotu ,rathod sir ,ayesha plz come ...they heard her voice & immediately came there .they were shocked 2 see her after a long tym .but they found arjun was shot .shree called the ambulance .they took him 2 hospital .


Enough 4 2day .plz give likes & do comments .jitna likes utna comments chahiye .

Precap :last part-what do u think kya arjun laut ayega ya usse riya ko dukh pouchana ka saja milega ... 😕
Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome update dear.
so riya is a teacher.
finally ariya met.
omg arjun life is in danger.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Super amazing update dr.

The way thy all tackled goons was fab.

Loved the little girl's concern about her teacher.

Awww Arjun was shocked to see her there.

OMG he tried to say something but before that Riya yelled on him.

Wow Arjun saved her by getting himself shot.

I hope he will be fine.

Last part cme that soon 😭 😭.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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