Ariya ss : piya aye na(last part -page -8)27/8 completed - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thax all 4 likes & comments !!!!! 😃
Here is last part of my ss .enjoy it !!!!

Last part -

All r waiting in hospital corridor .
Riya is standing silenty .tears drops falling 4 m her eyes .
Shree & chotu standing behind her .

Rathod signal ayesha 2 go 2 riya .so went 2 her & make riya sitting on the chair .she also sat bside her .

Ayesha (holding riya 's cheek ):riya ,tumhe apna pyaar pe varosa hai na ...fir unhe kuch nehi hoga .bas bhagwan par varosa rakho .
Riya (sobbingly ):ayesha ,i can't live without him ... 😭 😭 😭
She hugged ayesha & crying badly .

After abt one hour doctor came out 4m the operation theater .
Every one went 2 the doctor .

Rathod :doctor ,arjun kaisa hai ?????
Doctor :he is alright .goli fortunately heart ki pas se gujar gaya hai .but now nothing 2 wry .
Rathod kya hum usse ab mil sakte hai ???
Doctor :ya sure !!!!but ek week tak no movement ...

Doctor smiled & left .
They all went into arjun cabin .
Arjun was lying on the bed looking his team .
Rathod :arjun ,ab kaisa lag raha hai tumhe .
Arjun :i m fine sam .aur waise v ab mere pas jeene ki waajah hai ...(looking at riya )

every one was giggling & riya starts blushing 😳 😳 😳
Ayesha whispered at rathod ear
Ayesha :sam ,tumhe nehi lagta ab hume in dono luving birds ko akele chod dena chahiye 😉
Rathod :u r right ashu ... 😳

Rathod :guyz hume ab chalna chahiye .terrorists ki interrogation v to karni hai .riya,tum arjun k pass hi ruko .hum log sham tak aa yayenge 😃
Tc arjun (gave a smirk 2 him )

the trio also gave a smirk 2 riya & left .

after their leaving riya came & sat near 2 arjun .arjun just looking her .
Arjun :riya ,i m sry .meine aj tak tumhe bohot chot pouchaya hai .us din tomari koi galti na rehne ki wajood v meine tumhe daanta .humesha keh ti rehti thi ki tum meri zindega ka hissa ho .tumse hi itni baadi baat chupai .plz khadoos arjun sir ko maaf kar do ...
Riya :nehi arjun sir galti sirf apki nehi thi meri v to thi ...meine apse na milkar hi chaali ayi .apki jaasbaat ko saamaj neki koshish nehi ki .ulta apna maan maani ki ...
Arjun :ek baat poochu ???
Riya :kya !!!
Arjun :will u marry me ???

Riya just nodded her head in yes & hugged him .but mistakely she kept her hand on arjun 's wound -
Arjun :auchhh !!!!!
Riya pulled her back & realised what she did -
Riya :i m so sry .bohot dard ho raha hai na !!!!!mein avi doctor ko bulati hu ...
she just going 2 leave .suddenly arjun hold her hand & pulled her 2 him -
she was shocked at his sudden act .
Arjun (luvingly ):dard to ho raha hai .par medicine doctor k pass nehi tumare pass hai ...
she looked at him with questiony eyes .before she could understand arjun placed his lips on her . 😳
First riya was shocked but after few minutes she also kissed him back .

After that ariya live happily 4ever ...

The happy ending ... 😃

Guyz how was the ending ????give ur opinion .aur ha !!!jitna likes utna comments chahiye ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Superb update dr.

Loved the way Aisha consoled Riya.

Yayyy Arjun was fine.

Arjuns that line where he said that nw he hv a reason to live was so sweet.

Loved the way Arjun apologized to her n proposed her.

Wow bymistake she hurted him.

Aww Arjun was so naughty.

The kiss in the end was sweet.

Adorable ending!!!!!!

Plzzz dr gv epilogue also.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Oh Wow...
Superb and awesome ending.
Beautiful.
Ariya forever...
Lovely.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Waoo dr lvly ss reald all part one to go...
ariya as a couple...
arjun yelled on riya..bez its a rosh barsiii day..
riya left etf..
n arjun missing her badaly..
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terrilist aatact n finaly arjun. found her ..ohh poor arjun got hurt,.
at last ariya r together lvly story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
hey dear
thnx 4 awesome and wounderful update
poor crying crying
so arjun is safe ...thnk god
arjun got the reason to live
aisha really understood the feelings of love birds
finally ariya r together
ending was awesome dear
hope it continued
thnx 4 such a lovely and fantastic story
will be waiting 4 more stories like such
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
great update...
finally ariya together... arjun is safe yayy...
lovely ending...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Lovely ending 😃
Love the way Ayesha consoled Riya
I'm glad Arjun is safe
Aww Arjun apologised and proposed Riya
Loved the naughty side of Arjun
Finally Ariya are together in the end 😊
Nice ending once again although I said 'lovely ending' before 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome ss

beautiful ending

loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
just read this SS, impressed by the title. arjun riya fight, but riya didnt have to be so harsh to leave everything for him. then the situation in school, their meeting, and at last reunion. liked it

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