ARIYA:Tere ishq pe jaan kurbaan..last part pg 58 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
owsom and lovely
eager to know more...
continue soon

n plz do pm me next time u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
riya hurt
but thank god she's fine
n arjun was present there
riya was amazing
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read ur 4 part together.
Awsm concept.
Realy nice written...
Awsm updts also. Cont soon.
Do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...

riya shot and in hospital...

riya supporting arjun...

mission sikander begins...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was awesome

thanx a lot fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update.



OMG... Riya got hurt.



Arjun ne Riya ko hospital le gaya...



So much care and love...




Rathod-Riya ka argument was excellent and highlight of



this part.




Excellent portrayal...




Just loved it a lot.



So,Sikander ki lead mil gayi.



So,Rathod bhai bhi saath denge Arjun aur Riya ka.



Well Done...



So,mission Sikander dead begins.


Precap is too much interesting.

Loved Riya's determination.



Superb.


Continue soon.



Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mission sikander dead begins..

Part 5

Now the whole etf is involved.. €




shree prepares micro chips and other transmiting




equipments to fit in riya€™s costume..




He prepared a glove which riya wears and gives a reason




tht portion of her hand is burnt..bt it has a transmitter fit





in €so that arjun and rathod could track their movement..




Ayesha takes riya to the gang she belongs to and




introduces her as ruhi..




Gang member: par nadia iss ladki bharosa kaise kare..??




Riya: bharosa karke dekho sir,..ruhi kabhi kisi ko nirash





nahi karte€




Gang member: par hum tumhare checking karne





padegi.. koi record hoga tumhara..



Riya goes to that man like a proper seductress..rubbs her





finger from his forehead to his chin..




Riya: kiska record chahiye tapkane ka ya drug bechneka




ya phir..




Riya: reh de nadiya.. mein inke faiyde ke liye aai thi par




yeh log.. chal chalte hoon mein€ kaam hai mujhe..





Riya and ayesha walked to the door.




Gang member.. ruko .ladki kaam ki lagti hoon..thik hai





tum hamare liye ek kaam karo..





Riya: ab aye na line pe.. bolo kya hai kaam hai..





Gang member: kal hamara ek consignment aa raha hai..




aur usme hum kuch ladkiyon yahan se bhejna so kar




paugi yeh kaam..




Riya: hoon.. hogaya samjho.. ruhi koi kaam adhura nahi




chodti.. badlme mujhe kya milega..???





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Riya: sultan..




Gang member: sultan sahab?




Riya: ha sultan ki gang ka hissa ban na chahti hoon aur





iss desh se bahar jana chahti hoon..




Bolo deal final karni hai ya mein jau?




Gang member: sultan sahab se baat karne padegi..




Riya: lagta hai tu, sarein fatttu ho..chodo nadiya yeh




pappuao se kaam nahi hoga.. mein xyz gang se haath




milate hoon toh mujhe double fayda hoga..




Ayesha: waat laga di meri izaat ki yeh ladki dobaara




haath nahi lagegi..




Finally thy agree to make riya meet sultan the next day..




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Riya and ayesha reach etf..




Ayesha: riya arjun sir itna pyar karti hoon tum ki unke




liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar ho?





Riya: pyar mein kya karungi ayesha




pyar toh arjun sir karte roshni se




itna ki uss haadd jana bhi mere bas ki baat nahi hai..




roshni bohot lucky thi apne pyar ke saath itna waqt





guzara unhone..



warna apne pyar ki ek nazar pana bhi mere liye toh





zindagi bhar ka sapna bankar reh jayega..




(riya n ayesha forgot that they can be heard to everyone




in the etf..)





Arjun heard wat riya said about her love.all were looking




at arjun as telling to accept riya€™s love and move on in





life..




Riya: sir kal wooh log mujhe sultan se milvaenge..




Rathod gave them their final plan and all headed towards





their houses..





Arjun: riya tumhe ghar chod deta ho mein€




Riya: jee sir..




They were silent the whole way..





finally they reach riya€™s house..




Arjun : riya..




Riya: jee sir..




Arjun could not help bt hug her tightly in his arms.. just





making a shield around her € unknowingly promising to





protect her from the world..





ria could not first believe that arjun has hugged her this




way.. bt she knew he is scared for her..





may be he is scared to lose her..




She was happy that she could feel her love in her arms..




and felt at solace that atleast she means something to





him..





They parted the hug after sometime..





Arjun: riya..bohot kuch kar rahi ho tum..




hamesha kia hai tumne..



par please riya apna khayal rakhna..




ab kisi apne ko khone ke himmat nahi hai mujhme..





Riya: sir I vl safe..atleast for u. I promise..




Thy shared a eyelock.. sharing their feelings, pain, and




unknown promise of belonging to each other..




arjun never came to know wat relation has this been he





was always worried and concerned about riya..




after roshni if he was scared to lose someone it was riya..




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Next day riya has gone to meet sultan.. as ruhi..





Sultan: bohot sunna hia tumhare barein mein..




mere chokre log ko bohot fatkara tumne?




Riya: dekho sir.. apna ek funda hai apan kam pe time pe




faltu baat karta hai..



apne deal apke chokre log ne bata do diya hai na..???




Sultan: ha ..par tere pe doubt hai mere ko..





Riya: aree sahab kahan zindagi bhar rehna hai saath..




ap mera kam karo mein apka. Phir zindagi mein shakal





nahi dekhane ke dubara samjha..





Sultan: tere ko kisise darr nahi lagta?





Riya: mein aaj tak apne baap se nahi dari toh baki sab





kaunse khet ki mule hai..




Sultan: kam hone ke baad..tera 25% muil jayega.. wooh




ladkiyan lana tera kam hai aur drugs yahin chodna bhi..





Riya: fikar nahi sahab .. hojayega..




par mere ko abhi yahi rehna padega..




police ko shakh hogaya toh plan ki waat lag jayegi..





aur lage haath sikander sahab se hi hello bol dungi.




Sultan€™s face went white listening sik name..



coz he shocked that this girl knows almost everything




about the plan,,





Riya: kya hua. Totte udd gai kya?




Tumko kya laga apun koi are geri ladki hai..ruhi ko





janane mein galati ki tumne..




Sultan: tum idhar reh sakte hai..




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