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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Awesome update
loved it
Sakshi's emotions and her pain were written beautifully
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Awesome awesome update...loove it very much ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

The way sakshi trying to hide her pains from her family and then arjun feeling bad about it was soo beautifully penned down by you 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Do continue soon and thank you soo much 🤗 🤗

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome update...

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Gurpreetasi7

@Gurpreetasi7

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Awesome
The way you show arjuns realisation and sakshis emitions is absoloutely amazing

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shymali

@shymali

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

awesome update 👍🏼

continue soon...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

awesome...
i am love with sakshi...
Arjun ready to give a chance...
do update soon...
waiting for next part...

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maisha

@maisha1995

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

nice update pls continue soon

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

The last part of Arjun remembering the past conversation was really a great idea.Arjun has finally convienced that he wants it.
Though, Sakshi is trying her best to make her marriage work and trying to be happy, she has a lot hidden pain and it was so well potrayed.
The father-daughter moment was really beautiful:)
Great update.
Well written.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Awesome update
daughter father moment was really lovely
Sakshi's pain and emotion were beautifully potrayed
the last part was amazing..Arjun finally accepted that he really wants it
thanks for the pm..continue soon