story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25 - Page 9

Originally posted by: bgargate

Stalker comes...even before the update 😉

Unres 😉

ahaaa... mind blowing update...👏

Full on entertainment...

Payal ka FB... to Payal Roshni ke murder ki eye-witness hai...

Bechari... she is doing all this to get justice for her bhai-bhabhi 😭😭😭

Arjun's FB... rakshabandhan scene was sooo cute... 🤗

Shaitan bhai-behen 😆

OMG... ye kya... Sam ko pata hai ki Payal hi unko ye sab proofs bhej rahi hai? 😲

Aur ye baat usne Arjun ko nahi batayi...😡

Arjun to pagal ho jayega...

Jaldi jaldi update karooo ...warna...

Mai tum dono ka Bhains wala OS likh dungi... SYS... 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

SORRY
SORRY
SORRY
SORRY
SORRY

MY TWO CUTIE PIES...

apni sis ko maaf kardo...

pls forgivee me for cmmnting late...ok very late...ook very vey late...

pr teeno parts k liye abhi cmmnt karti hu

awsm storyline nd concept payal nd pari

its smthng diff...unique nd worth reading..

i m in love vid this story..

only i feel bad cz i dnt hv a brother...

i wish i had one...

plz continue soon

nd plz dnt stop my pms...

love
Aisha

roshni's FB 😭 dat kamina pranav !! disgusting! 😡 ...so gud to hear dat payal is dng all dis fr a reason... poor gal... Arjun-Payal FB <3 ..cont soon 😊

i hate that bloody pranav aweee m so worried for payal now :( i hope evrything is gona b ok :(
awee i loved arjun n payal's FB thy r really cuteee m reallyyy waitng for d nxt part plz post it soon itz suppa

hey just so sorry for the late comment..!!

Yeaa...
my guess was correct..
I knew that Payal knows something..so she knows the real Pranav.
He's none other than Sikandar..
She had seen him murdering her bhabhi..
Sweet flashbacks..
Rakhi day..it was beautifully written..
Pranav so angry..he came to know something..awww<3
poor Payal..
Loved the update..
Didi..plz twitter par post mat karna..
mai IF par aap logo ka intazar karungi..

Read chapter 2 and 3 on a go..both are fabulous,just love the brother-sister bond😛 and then how payal got married just to give her SIL justice and punish sikander is just mindblowing...you both doing an amazing job👏..thank you🤗

Dun Discontinue the ff guys pwease...!!!! ITs amazing! Dun knw abt others bt I luv it...I read n Also cmnt on it! Oki...Now to Update...Awesome Work Payaliyu n Pari!!! Kya? Kya? Kya????? Payal knws abt her Bhabhi's Murder n Murderer!!!! What??? She married him jus to get a confession frm him...Kya?? She works in Police Department...???? Ahaaannn...Toh she is trapping Pranav! Gud Job Payaliyu!! So Arjun ko pata chal hi gya abt her...!!!!! Awww...The Arjun-Payal fb ws cuteee! Lovd der chemistry n luv!!! ❤️ N yeh Pranav ko kya hua??? Kahin yeh ise sabkuch pata toh nhi chal gaya???? 😕 Thanxxx fr d pm...pls continuee Soon!

Peeps who reserve their cments
kindly edit it
we wil waiting to unres..of ur cments
pari n payal

Awesome update dear.
Continue soon.
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