OS:Letter's To ETF By Riya(Important Note at Page-25) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
really nyc wrk...
👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... first of all A big hug for mentioning my name 🤗
But maine koi bahut bada kaam nahi kiya... isi bahane se mujhe mere favourite Rathore ke kuch purane scenes dekhne ka mauka dobara mil gaya ☺️☺️☺️
So I was happy ☺️☺️☺️☺️
So here is the answer to my question... Riya apne har mission par jane ke pehle ye aise letter likhti thi aur wapas aane k baad faad deti thi...
Letter... yes that's very interesting... 😊... very touching... sare purane episodes yaad aa gaye...😳
I felt so bad when I read "ab gadbad karne wali hi nahi rahi" 😭😭😭
North pole - South pole 🤣
The fun moments that Rathore had with team were so cute...🤗🤗
Isiliye to wo mera favourite hai 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
End mein mujhe Riya ki death wala scene yaad aa gaya ...😭😭😭
And the song "mujhko ye Zindagi " 😭😭😭😭
Very touching... now waiting for her letter to Arjun 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for her letter to Arjun...
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

hey dear awesome update
thnx 4 such a wounderful update
loved it😊
finally rathore's letter
aww arjun doesnt read it
coming to rathore's letter
way to emtional
the way u wrote that is riya wrote about arjun and sam relation was great
talking of coffee part was amazing
writing of shree's dhamki was wounderful
finally rathore had also water in his eyes
as a leader he proved himself by composing himself
he is goind to shree to boost him up...loved it
u made me cry literally😭
😭thnx once again 4 rathore's letter
will be waiting 4 arjun to read his letter
continue soon
will be waiting






thnxxx for the comment 😳


i will try to update it soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago



My Dear Shayamala Aunty,

thanks for your comment. i was waiting for your comment from the start atlast i got one.. i really feeling wonderful you liked my this little OS...

"No Aunty, Riya never had any premonitions... she had the habit of writing these letters addressed to everyone in the team just before going on any mission. After coming back alive she used to destroy them and write new ones. This time she sacrificed her life and Shree found those letters after her death. I have mentioned this in her letter to Rathore sir". I want the reason be mentioned in the rathore sir aur arjun's letter as they are the ones more curious about how she write aur y???

sorry for using Krta in place of karta as its a sms language makin the words short i will keep this in my mind thanks for letting me know..

but i was happy that you liked myt work..

with regards
ila😃


Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Ila,
Just to let you know, after reading all the three of Riya's letters at one go, that you do not need to feel in the least hesitant or concerned about how good they are, or about whether you have left something out. They are moving and entirely plausible, and as far as I can remember, you have not left out anything of any importance.

What I liked best was the matter of fact and unsentimental tone of the messages, though the depth of the underlying emotion, and her attachment to each of them, comes thru clearly. You have done a very good job of the drafting.

The basic question of why Riya would write such farewell letters when she had no way of knowing that she was going to die so suddenly, remains, and many have asked you that question. You had better tell them that she had a premonition!

I shall look out for the last one, the letter to Arjun. For now, you have every reason to be pleased with your effort, though I personally do not like the contractions of the Hindi words - like krta for karta - that so many of you seem to prefer.

Shyamala Aunty

Edited by ila_tanwar - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993

I always want ki riya ko dedicate karkar ek episode telacast ho ...
ila meri request hai ki tum ye forum 32 per post karo aur un logo ko request karo ki wo log riya ko dedicate kar kar ek episode telecast kare ... 😕




thnx for your comment my OS is not that gud yaar besides i m a shy writer never share my works so its best its remain here..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alee001

remembered the good old days while reading this story!!!

the perfect letters!!!!

ila u rocked!!!

waitng for arjun's one!!!




glad you replied thnx... phewww
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Posted: 12 years ago
phew now atlast i got my comment from you...

i have to pester a lot sorry for that😛... thnx you liked my work and thnx for such a big comment u... phew yeah your question are answered... well i have to thnx for your help... yaar di my net is too slow damn cant able to surf youtube... idiot connection... 😡

so thnx for dialogue surfing... kaam bada hi tha... awwh i made you remember the song i also remember the song...


and atlast for your comment my dil goes like dancing...







Originally posted by: bgargate

Hey... first of all A big hug for mentioning my name 🤗

But maine koi bahut bada kaam nahi kiya... isi bahane se mujhe mere favourite Rathore ke kuch purane scenes dekhne ka mauka dobara mil gaya ☺️☺️☺️
So I was happy ☺️
So here is the answer to my question... Riya apne har mission par jane ke pehle ye aise letter likhti thi aur wapas aane k baad faad deti thi...
Letter... yes that's very interesting... 😊... very touching... sare purane episodes yaad aa gaye...😳
I felt so bad when I read "ab gadbad karne wali hi nahi rahi" 😭😭😭
North pole - South pole 🤣
The fun moments that Rathore had with team were so cute...🤗🤗
Isiliye to wo mera favourite hai 🤗
End mein mujhe Riya ki death wala scene yaad aa gaya ...😭😭😭
And the song "mujhko ye Zindagi " 😭
Very touching... now waiting for her letter to Arjun 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
First, Sorry for being too late... & you know the cause.
And I think you don't need my feed back on this now, as it's too late.
Anyways, nice letter. Waiting for next letter.
Keep writing.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

First, Sorry for being too late... & you know the cause.
And I think you don't need my feed back on this now, as it's too late.
Anyways, nice letter. Waiting for next letter.
Keep writing.
Thanks for PM.



😡 i always need a feedback whether a bad one or good one

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