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Posted: 12 years ago

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superp letter..

their friendship was potrayed perfectly...
eagerly waiting for the next update

do pm me plz





yeah sure i willl pm u thnx for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
LETTER TO RATHORE SIR


Here Arjun sir enters his cabin and opens the recent case files and started reading it suddenly a envelope falls. He noticed and took it and read To Arjun Sir .He think who could be he was just opening it suddenly his phone rings and he put the envelope in the file and receive the call and went outside... Here Rathore sir enter his cabin and he was about to take the coffee mug but he noticed the envelope under his coffee mug. He took it and read To Rathore Sir. He wondered who could be... He opens it and start reading it...


To Rathore sir

Hope ye letter aapko mil gya ho... kyunki Shree ka dimaag kam chlta hai kuch dhundhne mein par lgta hai iss baar usne jyaada time nhi liya letter dhundhne mein aapki training ka jo asar hai...

Vaise sir aapko Shree coffee de deta hai time pe ya nhi maine usse bola toh tha mgr uske dimaag slow kaam krta hai. Uska dimaag sirf gadgets mein hi daudta hai vo bhi ussain bolt ki trh... Vaise sir usne kasam khaayi hai aapse Portable Lie Detector machine approve kraane ke liye. He really wants that he always pouts on that y u dont want it to be here he really thinks it will be helpful. Bechaara dar gya tha jab aapne dhamki di thi ki uske gadget ki upgradation rukwa denge.

Sir you are really a gem and very supportive to me... jab mera first case tha how u said chotu to help me as it was my first case you really cared for your team. Kaash main b aapke team ke saath todha aur waqt reh paati kuch seekh paati mgr aisa ho nhi paaya..

Sir, aap kitne gusse vale hai and mujhe fasa diya tha aapne vo b pehle case mein unn new officer Acp Arjun ke saath pehle hi maine unse pnga le liya tha unpe attack krke or fir aapne mujhe unke saath khade rehne ko kaha ye kehke "Udta hua teer mein khula nhi chod skta" aur "Request nhi kar rha order hai yeh mera". Sir aap b naa vo kya mere kehne pe ruk skte hai vo Arjun hai unka teer toh main toh kya khudh bhagwaan b nhi rok skte... aakhir ki toh apne man ki hi... Saath mein mujhe b fasa diya...

Anyway sir aap sahi kehte the ki iss field mein rehke sab badal jaata hai "Lekin iss shehar se zurm ki gandagi saaf krte krte shayad hum hum nhi rhe shayad tum b tum nhi rahoge". Kbhi kbhi logon ko insaaf dilaate dilaate khudh ke jasbaat ko b nazar andaaz kar jaate hai kaise vo aurat apni hi beti.. Maa thi vo... uski beti b toh pyaar krti thi... Anyway kya kar skte hai...

Sorry sir kbhi kbhi aapki coffee interchange krne ke liye pta hi nhi chlta tha ki kaunsa cup shree ka hai. Baad mein toh maine uspe shree aur aapke cup pe mark lga rkha hai taaki confusion na ho. Par ab sir uski jarurat nhi padegi naa, kyunki ab ye gadbad krne vaali jo nhi hai.. Vaise meri gadbad ne help b kar di thi... case mein..

Sir, ek baat merko humesha pareshaan krti thi... khair ab puch skti hun vo kya hai naa ab aap mujhe daant nhi skte naa isliye... mujhe humesha se ye baat pareshaan krti hai aapki berukhi Arjun sir ke trf... kbhi kbhi toh lgta hai ki aap dono pehle se ek dusre ko jaante hai yaa fir koi connection hai aap dono ke beech.. Vo kya hai ye smjh nhi aaya... jaise ki aap unse naraaz hai jaise ki kuch hua ho aapke beech mein... tab bhi mujhe laga tha jab Arjun sir car mein fasse the aur aap pareshaan ho gye the aur kaise aapne kaha tha "Hadd hoti hai laparwahi ki... apne alawa kisi aur ke barey sochta hi nahi hai ye aadmi...Damn itt" aur "wo jo kuch bhi ho... ETF ka chief hone ke naatey is team ki security ki zimmedari bhi meri hai Rawte...aur aaj ke baad tum aisi koi pagalpan ki harkat nahi karoge"

Sir aap dono ki behas mein humein bahut pareshaan kiya hai kiski sunne ye smjh hi nhi paate the hum. Hope ab aisa na ho aapke aur Arjun sir ke relation sudhre ho. Sir kbhi kbhi toh lgta tha aap dono ki behas mein hi ye ETF apna silver jublee bhi celebrate kar degi. Maine toh naam b soch liye hai aap dono ke jab aap log behas krte the South Pole aur North Pole... naa dur reh skte hai naa paas aa skte hai... totally opposite yet be with each other.

Sir, aapne kaise mujhe kaha tha "Humein kuch din aur yaha rukna chahiye...shayad Riya ki shooting sudhar jaye...ya fir agar ye bajoo wale par nishana lagaye to shayayd sahi aadmi udd jaye" .aapko pta nhi shree ne mujhe kitna tease kiya tha iss pe. I am sorry sir agr maine kbhi aapko let down kiya ho sir maine kbhi btaya nhi mujhe humesha lgta tha agr main kisi pe goli chalaun toh I would be a killer. Mujhe ye baat humesha se pareshaan krti thi... isliye shayad main kisi ko shoot nhi kar paati thi... kaash zindagi mujhe todha aur waqt deti mgr kismet ko kuch aur hi manjur tha..

Sir mujhe nhi pata tha ki aap kbhi kbhi mazaak b krte hain jab vo case tha jisme hum mein se kisi ko undercover jaana tha aur aapne chotu ko bola tha "Chotu humein unhe apne paas bulaana hai naaki unhe humse dur bhejna hai". Uss case mein bechaara shree acha fasaya tha aap logon ne humesha gadgets mein duba rehta tha naa.

Sir, aap kya Arjun sir ko bol nhi skte ki vo todha normal behave karein kbhi kbhi toh criminal se kam unke tarikon se jyaada dar lgta hai... pta nhi kya kar baithe kaise vo drug vaali coffee pila di thi chotu ko... maine toh soch liya tha iske baad Arjun sir ke haath ki coffee toh kya paani b nhi lena...

Sir, hum mein se kisi ko nahi laga tha ki Pathan Lala wale case ki enquiry mein aap Arjun sir ko support karenge... humein humesha lagta tha ki aap unhe pasand nahi kartey aur ye ek mauka tha aapke paas unhe ETF se bahar nikalne ka...Shree ne bola bhi tha "ki jo insaan Arjun sir ko bacha sakta hai... Bad-kismati se uska naam 'Sameer Daam Singh Rathore' hai" Par nahi... aap ne wo hi kiya jo ek achchhe leader ko karna chahiye... apni team k ek kaabil officer ko support kiya kyunki Arjun sir bhi poori tarah se galat nahi they. Aur sabse achi baat jab aapne unhe ye kehke support kiya "He is an assest for the team sir... yeh team ka ek ahem hissa hai..ye hissa tbhi kaam krta hai jab isse bahar nikaalne ki kosish krte hai..." Thnx sir hum sabke saath rehne ke liye humesha support krne ke liye..

Sir, Ho sake toh jo maine aapke aur Arjun sir ke beech feel kiya hai uspe dhyan dijeyaga Arjun sir toh first step lene se rhe aap hi le skte hai main hoti toh baat hi kuch aur hoti... Sir aap jab b mere dad se mile toh unhe btana main ek brave police officer thi main bilkul dari nhi thi.. aur main bahut brave hun...

Sir, Aapko aur ETF Team ko bahut miss karungi... Sir, Apni student ko humesha yaad rkhna ek achi aur khushi deni vaali yaad ke taur pe... Sir shree aur chotu ka b dhyan rkhna they consider you as their mentor todhi masti krte hain sir par aapke liye kaam krne ke liye apni jaan b dete hai sir... jyaada daatna mat unhe vrna kya pta shree ETF ki site hack kar le ek dhamki de rha tha ki mere gadget ko approve krne main time lgaate hai... anyway ye sirf mzaak tha aisa krne vaala toh nhi par fir b technical dimaag ka bahorsa nhi..

At the end, Yhi soch rhe ho naa Sir ki ye letter kaise likha hai vo kya hai na sir main todhi crazy hun aur pagal bhi... roz aise letter likhti thi vo kya hai naa kab mere aakhri mission ho!!! Toh ye aakhri vaala hai Jo destroy nhi ho paaya aur aapke paas aa gya... Aur aap pad rhe hain.. aise hi letter maine Shree,Chotu aur Arjun sir ke liye b likhe hain.. Shree aur Chotu ne toh pad liye honge agr Shree ko meri hideout vaali jgh mil gyi hogi par Arjun sir ka pta nhi... Hope unhone ne bhi pad liya ho...

Aakhri baar aapko bye bol rhi hun... ab iske baad ye Riya Mukherjee sirf yaadon mein rahegi... ab chalti hun agla letter humaare Khadoos ACP Arjun sir ke liye jo likhna hai...

Yours Riya Mukherjee

(Imperfect Student)



Rathore Sirs eyes got moist reading the letter... He remembered the last time what riya said to him "Sir, mai jeena chahti hoon... par sab kuch safed sa hota ja raha hai...mere papa... papa ko bata dijiyega ... ki mai... dari nahi thi" aur "Rathod sir... sir.. agar maine apko.. kabhi bhi let down kiya ... to... uske liye aap mujh maaf kar dijiye" aur "Mujhe.. mujhe agar dusra mauka mila to... mai apki training... bekar nahi jane dungi"

He was feeling sad and want to talk to Shree about this. But he is a team leader he know he cant do that so he just let it be and composed himself and little bit smiles on the antique of his late colleague who has written a few words for him he was also surprised to know that she figured about the Arjun and his rift anyway some relation are not meant to mend soon but in future who can imagine... He waited for some time and then went to Shree's cabin and ask about this... and make him feel better as he know Shree will be feeling low as he is the one who is most close to the Riya so that Shree will not feel low to boost him and make him feel wherever she is she is looking us from there. So, he left for Shrees Tech world...






Thnx To Bhavna di who helped me in the some of the dialogues and in figuring out my mistakes...


still i miss and have committed a mistake sorry for that...


please do comment and tell me hows is it????


Sorry for any mistake and ignore spelling mistake

Edited by ila_tanwar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow😭
beautiful
love it
awesome update
Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear awesome update
thnx 4 such a wounderful update
loved it😊
finally rathore's letter
aww arjun doesnt read it
coming to rathore's letter
way to emtional
the way u wrote that is riya wrote about arjun and sam relation was great
talking of coffee part was amazing
writing of shree's dhamki was wounderful
finally rathore had also water in his eyes
as a leader he proved himself by composing himself
he is goind to shree to boost him up...loved it
u made me cry literally😭😭😭😭😭😭
😭thnx once again 4 rathore's letter
will be waiting 4 arjun to read his letter
continue soon
will be waiting



Edited by sharmaayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey lia tu hasati bhi he or rulati bhi he. I really miss riya n I am crying now because I miss riya wo sab dialogs jo riya ne bole the its heart touching
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice letter...

included all details... lvd it to bits...

saari dialogues bhi the...

update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing writing..

salutes and bows to u..


u again made me cry..

love ur writing..


thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and emot update thanks for pm cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
rula dia!!
the letter was so emotional...
really nyc!!
loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written! You made me cry😭 Thanks for the pm and please continue soon...😊

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