OS:Letter's To ETF By Riya(Important Note at Page-25)

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

nice work ila

superb

aisa lg rha tha k riya wale sare episodes ko flashback me likhne ki planning hai tumhari

sare dialogue raatte mare hai kya tumne

full on emotional waise ek question hai

marne se pehle hi riya ko kaise pta...k kaun letter pehle padhega aur kaun baad me

baki everything is perfect...like starting episodes k flashback ki tarah hai

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

ye riya ka point of view nhi hai Chulbuli annu ki kaun padega uska sirf ye idea tha ki shree hi dhundhega... aur usne dhundh liya ye readers ki demands kiska pehla pada jaayega and its like shree ne rkhe aur scene depict kiya kaise vo letter unke haath mein aayenge thnx a lot... for the comment..

with regards

ila😃

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu
nice work ila

superb

aisa lg rha tha k riya wale sare episodes ko flashback me likhne ki planning hai tumhari

sare dialogue raatte mare hai kya tumne

full on emotional waise ek question hai

marne se pehle hi riya ko kaise pta...k kaun letter pehle padhega aur kaun baad me

baki everything is perfect...like starting episodes k flashback ki tarah hai

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roshsam

@roshsam

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

plz update the nxt letter soon

Waiting for her letter to arjun 😊

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

aww so emotional.i am crying now.this story rili touched my heart.do update soon

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Hey Ila!
very well written...
Continue karo na plz

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Important Note

Hey guys!! I wonder you guys are waiting for the next update or not??? Please do let me know as i m not getting the feedback properly... please buck up guys...

i want my feedback long not the one liners... i know u like it or nice i want your opinion what you think of it whats your view what you feel...

i will update when i get the feedback properly... i will wait till upcoming friday if i dont get the satisfactory feedback... i will think over it whether to post it or not...

Sorry guys if i was being rude but what should i do this OS is really close to my heart... i have coped with less feedback on FF kahani Adhure Pyaar ki but not this one... This OS is really close to me i have written it whole heatidly..

Sorry if i said something wrong...

with Regards

ila