New Arakshi OS: Home again.. 15/7 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi avantika di...🤗...🤗... i can't thank you enough 🤗...aaj lagta hai joh mangugi woh mill jayega...😉...mill gaya... haye can't tell yo u di how terribely i was missing ur lovely dovely romantic os😉... u know just beore like ariya wala arjun love and this time arakshi wala arjun love was too same...and i loveddd it😉...loved it n missed it too😉... this os was like treat to me...just loved ur work di...arjun ji ke bare mein kuch kehane ki zarorat hai kya😉...so sakshi was too good😉...haye ab koi jaye bhi toh kaise agar arjun ho saath mei toh😆😉... the last part was awe...🤗... continue it na plz...or any more romantic ss/ff on the way?😉... love u avani di🤗
Edited by life93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome awesome awesome loved it
so nicee
😳 😊
enjoyed it
keep writing more of arjun and sakshi Arakshi OS
you rock :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Hey ...
You deserve like the best of cupcakes after writing such a beautiful OS !!! :D

I'm just awed by the way you manage to write such a wonderful story in just a OS ?! :)

But honestly this was just flawless ...

Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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diii😊, after a very long time u hve written something, chalo woh maaf hai with this OS...
haaaiii... what a complete OS.. you have described basically everything from sakshi's past and insecurities to hotwa's ego, passion (for his work, no dirty minds😆) & also well hotwa's hotness😉

the line that choked tears in me was the one abt sakshi completing the painting that roshini started, it was sooo deep, touching & emotional .. instead of me throwing anything at u, u should throw me a pack of tissues, coz i can't seem to find any here (& am tooo lazy to get up)😆😆
and lolz, they did "it" when he was wounded??!!?? ouch!!! sorry dirty mind activated🤪and agn lolz, pregnant (🥳)ayesha holding rathore under house arrest🤣.. i had to find something find funny, in this very serious that goes to a light, romantic OS!!!!
thnx for pm di & sorry for a very long comment, tissues ke saath saath aap chappal bhi throw kaar sakti hai, no probs😃


Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
loved it...😊 loved it.. 😊 loved it...😊 loved the roothna manana of arjun and sakshi...😊 loved every word of this lovely os😊
Edited by swathi93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! That was awesome. I loved the way Arjun talked so much.. lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
such a beautiful OS...
loved it dear...
the insecurities and the comeback were bang on...
loved the way you expressed it...
was missing u in action for a while...
great to see you back
PS: like button not working
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Awesome OS 😊 loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was such a cute and lovely story😳
What's more is that anyone can relate to it, because ego, insecurities and sometimes fear can easily put distance between any couple, no matter how much each may love the other
and some never get a second chance, and this was very sweetly written😳
Awesome Sweet Poison😉😆😛
Do give us heartwarming stories as thus😳
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awww B2...that was brilliant

The suspenseful start...Arjun's thoughts, Sakshi's feelings...superbly written!

Sakshi's insecurities and then the consequences which made her go away from him

Awww, lovely...loved it...it was mind blowing and amazing!

Home coming was awesome! Beautiful!
And the last part was just wonderful! Aisha pregnant..aww and her dialog to Rathod about Mrs Rawte is home again was so cute!

Yes cops do have a life and they know to live it too...just that some ruthless criminals have to allow them to do it rather than poking into it!

main jo kehtha hoom kartha hoom aur main jo nahi kehtha woh main zaroor kartha hoom!
I guess thats a SYS lesson for all us BBs...right B1?


Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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