Raesha OS : Trust *Complete* - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
The prologue was superb.
Waiting for this chupaya mystery to be solved.
Please PM me if possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

update type toh karne do yaar😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 1


"Aayesha...how could you? I just can't believe ki tumne itni badi baat chupayi mujhse...mujhe laga tha ki humein humare rishte ko ab ik naam dena chahiye...par mein galat tha...I was wrong!" Sameer said.

"Sameer, ik minute...let me explain!" Aayesha replied.

"Mujhe kuch nahi sunn na...aur sunun bhi toh kya? Jo ladki mujh par trust tak nahi karti woh mujhse pyaar kya karegi? Aayesha ik baar sach bol kar toh dekhti..." he replied her back and walked away.

Aayesha stood there, freezed at her place, as those tears mixed up with rain droplets.

Sameer walked upto the SUV, and leaned his back against the SUV,

"Why Aayesha...aakhir kyun nahi batayi tumne yeh baat mujhe aaj tak...ik baar bata kar toh dekhti...kyun chupaya tumne yeh sab...aakhir kyun?"

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Te Sukke Sukke Sapne Vi Pijj Gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rove Palkan De Kone Vich Neend Meri
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Hanju Digde Ne Chot Lage Dil Te
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut Birha De Badlan Di Chhaa Gayi

**********

Aayesha was standing with her hands resting at the railings, when she heard Sameer calling for her,

"Aayesha...Aayesha..."

Aayesha turned towards the direction of the voice, and found Sameer walking towards her, yelling her name.

"Kya huya Sameer?" she asked.

"Aayesha...kyun nahi bataya tumne mujhe Aarohi ke baare mein?" he asked.

And Aayesha looked at him shocked,

"Aarohi?"

"Haan...tumhari beti Aarohi Kapoor, Aayesha..." he replied, and dragged her to the SUV.

In the passenger seat, was sitting a cute 2-year old girl.

(I know she isn't looking like a 2 year old, par imagine karne mein kya jaata hai?)

A lone tear escaped Aayesha's eyes. She couldn't hold anymore and ran back to where she was standing.

Sam too left behind her,

"Aayesha...ik saal...ik saal ho chuka hai humein ik doosre ke saath...par tumne aaj tak mujhe Aarohi ke baare mein nahi bataya? Kyun nahi bataya Aayesha, aakhir kyun?"

"Kaise batati mein Sameer? Kaise? (she turns away) Mujhe iss baat ka darr laga ki shayad yeh sach jann ne ke baad aap mujhe akela na chod do...(Turns back and looks at Sameer) Badi mushkil se kissi se sacha pyaar huya tha...koi aisa mila tha jiske saath mein apni baki ki zindagi jee sakti thi...aur shayad sahi waqt aane par mein aapko Aarohi ke baare mein bata bhi deti...aur shayad aap Aarohi ko apna bhi lete" she replied.

"Haan...apna leta mein Aarohi ko...par ab nahi...Aayesha ik baar trust karkar yeh sach batati toh sahi...mein khushi khushi Aarohi ko apna leta..."

Suddenly, it started raining cats and dogs.

"Sameer..."

"Don't call me Sameer..." he yelled.

(And the rest of the scene is what u read in prologue)

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Sameer sat down on the road, with his back and head still leaning onto the SUV.

Aayesha somehow gathered all her courage and walked upto the SUV. She looked around and found Sameer sitting their, crying his heart out.

She ran upto him, and reached his level.

"Sameer...please mujhe maaf kardijiye...please..."

"Aayesha tumne koi galti nahi ki...galti toh meine ki hai ki meine tumse pyaar kiya..." he said and got up.

Seconds later,

"Aayesha gaadi mein beitho..." he said.

Aayesha got up, and placed her hand on his shoulder,

"Sameer..."

He jerked her hand away,

"Meine kaha gaadi mein baitho..."

Aayesha lowered her face and and sat on the back seat. As soon as Sameer sat on the driver seat, Aarohi giggled at his appearance.

He was fully drenched in the rain!

He turned his face towards her, and she giggled more.

Aayesha was just looking at Sameer. Sam's hand reluctantly went and ruffled Aarohi's cute lil hair.

Aarohi giggled for few more seconds, and her giggles brought a lil smile on Sameer's lips.

Sameer turned and looked at Aayesha, as they shared an intense eye-lock. All she could see was hatred for herself.

Sameer turned his face away and drove away...

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti

Khoya khoya inn raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi

Har pal har lamha
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khudh se yeh kehta rehta hoon

Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya...

Tujhe Bhula Diya...

~~Sorry for the mistakes. Likes n cmnts plz~~

Should I continue? Or end it here itself? 😆

Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
res😳
*edited*
ye kya twist daala hai JB...!!😲
aisha has a daughter...!!! aww she is such a cutie...!! <3 <3 the way she was giggling 😆
wow her giggling bought a smile on sameer's face... cool...!!
but whose arohi's father?😲
aur song used ... lovely... 😳
continue soon...!!
can't wait to read more...!!😉

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Great update!!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
uff mujhe samjjh nhi aata

story shuru hone se pehle khatm kyun kr dete ho part

ab next part ka wait krte raho

yahi kaam pacha hai kya 😊

coming to the story

too good...start...awee arohi kapoor...so cute...aur sam itne guse me tha fir bhi arohi ko dekh kr uske face pr choti hi sahi smile to aayi

pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Wat aisha has a daughter ?
Plz soon clr all dis mazra (matter).
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wattt aisha has daughter????????!!!!

nyc stryy dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Amaizing mridu...
Such an emotional prologue dear...
start it soon egarly waiting for first chap😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
mast hai ..!!! different story wid unique concept... cont soon

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