FF-choodiyan (removed) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Live-life

Hey Again!

That was yet another cute and awesome update dude.thank u so much dear 😊I seriously really love the way you write about each character and portray them. It seems so real you know like I am actually watching in from of my eyes instead of just reading words.

It's like the scene comes alive in my senses. Plus the way you portray Riya...I have to say this again it's just sooo damn beautifully done by you. So pure and innocent her character is. And you do full justice with it. Be it her way of talking or her innocent looks. It makes me smile every single time. *sigh* It's really beautifull! yaar it feels so grt wen ur work is appreciated...thank u so much once again

I liked the Chotu and Shree's scene in the beginning. Haha. They can never change. Chotu ko hamesha bhook lagti ahi. Lol but I guess food is awesome ain't it? 😆 And Shree apni ahem Biwi ke saath busy hai. Wow! Something never change. Lol. as i said i am doing experiments with chotu and shree character something new bt nice one you will enjoy it..

And then comes Shree ki shayari...Lol...I found it hilarious...no wonder everyone else started laughing. God...That was aawesome part...Hehe. And it makes me miss the ETF team more *sob* 😊😊 ha ha ha u r liking it i am happy

Anyway...Awww Riya was in tears cause her Sameer Bhai wasn't there to eat noodles with ehr. So sweet Purva...brings Riya to the acciddent site. That was really sweet of her. And bechara Shree and Chotu khoobsurat ladki ne unhe jawani mein hi uncle bana diya! hEHE. Poor them 😆 And the way Riya hugged Arjun1

sooo cuteee! And the way she was playing with hs button..hayeee. kuch kuch hota hai!

Aw...Riya ko achanack kya hua? Hope she will be fine.

That was yet another update, which made me smile! And it was just beautifully written!

Continue soon sure i will once again thank u dear

and Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: whitelily

Brilliant update 😛

Originally posted by: sonycs001

Nice part thank u so much dear
Ria came to crime spot to eat with her brother so cute
Hehehe she calls choree uncles 😛
Chlree confused seeing ariya close 😛
Ria fainted n arjun handled nicely yes he has to afterall riya is his sweetheart
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

lovely really very nyc... thank u so much


i can imagine riya , looking cute in that dress.. and shrrtu uncle?????😆😆😆 ya its hillarious


and sakshi feel jelous... yo yo jealous singh

and va va va.. for shree's shayri... kaha se dhund ke laati ho yaar?????? ha ha ha efforts buddy for shree character...new experiment on him


and omg riya fainted????????? feel very bad for her... 😭😭 crying while writting


riya love sammer so much... sis bro bond

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome superb update

loved it

shree ka shayari was😆

shreetu uncle🤣 bechara dill tuut gaya dono ka

riya was so cute

last part was emotional

thnx 4 pm

cont soon

Originally posted by: tiakhan98

dear lovely part love ariya conv thanks a lot
love shree chotu talk he he he
dear plz Riya ko chaldi thik kardo plzzz it wil take some dear..have patience
thanks for pm 😊