PYaar Ka DArd--15 DAYS OF SEPARATION n LOVE last - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awww yaar he respects her decision
sometimes we take a decsion without consulting our loved ones ...without thinking of wht the consequences cld be
sometimes it is better to tell them the truth and let them decide
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
superb update :) loved it
both arjun and riya hurted themselves
feeling bad for both of them
riya is hurt herself for the pain she is giving to shaleen :(
shaleen really loves her so much even riya loves him as much
finally shaleen knows the reason behind riya's decision of breaking up wit him
aww shaleen doesn't even want to break his promise
wonder who called neha in the end
hope riya is ok
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
awesome update
feel bad for both of them
both hurt themselves
omg what happened at the end? whose call is that???
cont soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Read all the four updates in one go...

Yaaar,tu na ek tissue box ki godown kholle...
It was damn very much emotional and heart wrenching.
Just becoz Shaa's career will get affected,thats why Sana broke up...
Aaarggghhh...
Enha,i will kill u and cut u into pieces for saying abt this plan...
God...
Both are hurting themselves a lot...
Shaa respects her decision a lot.
He did not and wont force her for anything...
I am crying like hell...
Finally,the truth has been revealed...
What???
What was that in the ending?????
Hope,everything is ok and also,Sana is ok...
Please,Shana ki mel karado.
Waiting for ur next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
nice part. Loved it dear. Thanks for pms n sorry for late comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Nice story read all part togather pls continue soon and pls pm me your updates pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Superb update...both are suffering and to less their emotional pain they are hurting themselves physically...good neha conforted shalin and told him truth...and loved shaleen that he still kept his promise...dont tell me sana is going to comit suicide...update soon...thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Part 5


Neha: nahin I cmg



Shaleen: app thik hai?



Neha: sana she has cut cut



He was dead then and there, his love , his jaan no. he always had a



spare key to her house... When neha and he reached home her



hand was bleeding badly and she had fainted due to loss of blood…



Bt still she was uttering smthing.



Sana: shaa I love u. forgive me for ur hurt.



(repeated again)



He picked her up in his arms and take her to doc with neha along.



Hospital:



Shaleen: doc she has lost lot of blood please treat her fast.



Doc: ok bt the formalities and how r u connected to the patient?




Shaleen: I vl do wat it takes bt please save her. She is my life…



Aftr smetime…..




Doc: we have dne necessary bt she is still very weak to respond



and it feels like she doesn't want to respond. Hw r u connected to



her?



Shaleen: I m , I was .mmm



Neha: he is her fiancee



He looked shockingly at neha.



Neha: sorry par I dnt want more questions raised on u n her. so…



please tell every1 here that u r her fiance.



She was given blood bt was unconscious. he asked neha to sit by



her and he stood at the door watching her from the window.



he hated himself for the helplessness to see his love in such a


condition. The biggest pity is he cant even go and hold her.



Sana gaining consciousness. And muttering shaleen's name.



Neha: pagal hai tu kyon kiya aise?



Sana: he is hurt he hurted himself coz of me. I dnt want to live



seeing him hurt. Why did u save me? Wat is the reason for my



living if I cnt gve him happiness. He Is worsining his condition. I



dnt deserve to live I have hurted him so much.



Neha: I didnt do anythng. He saved u. the person u love so much



saved u.



Sana: shaleen he he saved me. Where is he? Is he still here?he



will hate me so much. He wnt see my face.



Neha: he is outside want to meet him?



Sana: bas ek baar use dekh lo.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bt shaleen had already left .



Neha: sana wooh



Sana: chala gaya. I knew he would. He would be so angry with me ,



even more.



neha: chal ab hum bhi chalte hai. U r gvn ur discharged.



neha takes sana home and she is still crying. She gt up went to



room and slept on his side feeling him. His cologne his


presence.his love and their moments.



Neha: sana shaleen ka number de I l call him.



Sana: nahi dnt call him. He wnt cme. He would not even wish to



see my face.



Still neha took the number and called him.



Neha: ha shaleen this is neha. Chale kyon aye tum. She wanted to


see u. she is still crying. She is very bad condition.We are at the


house. She is in the room and crying and saying smethng. Please


cme here its tough for me to handle.



Shaleen cmes to her house. Bt he didn't go in to the room.all their


memories flooded in his mind...


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Shaleen: ab bhi ro rahe hai?



Neha: ha. Bohot. Please stop her, uski health and u knw usne



kuch khaya bhi nhi kal se. uski medicines bhi heavy hai.



Shaleen: mein room mein jakar dekhta hoon.



He entered the room and all their moments flashed in front of


him. Their hugs, kisses and love.



He saw her sleeping on his side , crying bitterly.she was holding


one of his shirt hugging it. He goes near her bt scared tht she will


be more angry.



Shaleen: sanaaa.



She turned hearing his voice. She thought she is dreaming. She


smiled.



Shaleen: hw r u ? does u wound hurt much?



Nw she felt he is real. She jumpd out of the bed.



Sana: shaaa tum yahan.



Shaleen: ha kaise ho tum?(tears rolling down his eyes)



Sana: thik hoon . aur tum ? tumhari chot? Bohot jal raha hoga na?


Shaleen: bas thik hai tumhare dard se toh kam hi hai.


neha ne bataya tumne kya kiya par kyon kiya yeh tum bataogi?



She could nt control nw. she ran and hugged him. She cried like


she had seen him aftr years.



Sana: I m sorry baby. I m really sorry. I hurted u insulted u stayed


away from u. I did it for u bt I cant live without u. I love u soo



much. I love …….. she couldn't speak more as she has fainted in



his arms.


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