PYaar Ka DArd--15 DAYS OF SEPARATION n LOVE last - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
that was such an emotional update 😭 loved it
omg sana again hurted herself 😭
even in that condition she was saying i love you and was asking for forgiveness :(
both sana and shaleen are so hurt
finaly shaleen came to meet her
awww she was crying holding shaleen's shirt
love the way sana reacted seeing shaleen there
oh no sana had a panic attack
hope shaleen forgives her
thanks for the pm
please continue soon




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional part...aww Sana... continue soon
Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
1st of all Thanx 4 pm me

U make me again speechless

Update is hrt touching boss

Sana hurt herself

Omg he saved her

Plss patch up krvado

Me crying

Update soon

Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74



Part 6



She starts to cough and he goes near her and gv her water.



Sana: I m sorry baby. Please mujhe maaf kardo. Please cme back


to me.



Shaleen: please stress mat lo rest karo.



Sana: sha. i… n… u………. sha... aaa..aaa.

He held her by her shoulders and sat beside her. She immediately


hide in his arms more and more. Her grip on him is getting


tighter.she started placing kisses where evr she could. she hugged


him more tightly and pulled him towards her.



Shaleen: sana mat karo. Stop it. u vl regret it later. Please just rest.



Sana: I love u and I m sorry for pushing u hard. Cme back to me. I



need u.



Shaleen: sana chodo mujhe and get sme rest.



She was in her senses nw.



Sana: I know I was wrong. I knw wat I did to u bt please dnt leave



me. Cme back here to our house. Ths place was a heaven once in



ur arms bt its worst then hell without u.



Shaleen: u need rest nw. v cn talk later abt this.



Sana: u dnt want to be with me right. Cnt forgive me for wat I did.



Shaleen: tke rest vl cn talk later.



Sana: I wnt to talk nw. nw. nw. get it. punish me if u want. Do



watever u want bt please speak out ur true feelngs.



Shaleen: I cnt punish u I dnt have any rights on u to say anything.



Sana: u have all bloody rights on me. Rights to love, to touchme,



make me feel urs, make me feel special and if u cant cme back to



me then why didn't let me die. I dnt want to live without u.



She got up with from the bed . he was confused wat she was up to



nw. she took the scissors from the cupboard and again try to cut



her other hand's veins.



Sana: if u cant cme back to me I dnt want to live. I vl die.



Shaleen: sana stop kya kar rahe ho yeh pagal ho gai ho kya. Leave



the scissors. Chodo usseee.



Sana: nahin, jana chahte ho mujhe chod kar , nahin maaf kar



sakte tum mujhe toh phir mar jane do mujhe. Waise bhi hain



kaun meri zindagi mein jiske jeu mein. Leave my hand and let me


die.



This was too much for him nw. his controlled anger burst and he


slapped her on her face.



Shaleen: sanaaa. Bas bohot hua.



Hadd hoti hai har cheese ki.



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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Aur kya keh rahi thi tum, Rights??ha????haq mera haq?



If I have right to love, to touch make u feel mine, make u feel



special thn I have all rights to share ur pains and troubles too



which u didn't let me. Wat u thought that day jst proves a simple


thing that u dnt trust me.



Or may be my love was nt strong enough to make to realise that if



I can love u madly thn I can also share the worst side of ur life. I



failed in my love my first love.



Sana: nahi aisa nahi hai I trust blindly I knw hw much u love me. I



knw u would stand by me in any situation bt if that would affect ur



life and career negatively then I wont be able to forgive myself.



why dnt u understand I wanted u to be happy always with me or


without me.



Shaleen: ha isliye tum mein mujhe khud se dur kar diya. Khatam



hamara rishta right. Khud ko chot poochati rahi mujhe khushi



dene ke liye. Kya tum nahi jaanti thi ki tum mere kya ho tum ho



meri sabse badi khushi mere jene ki wajah. Phir bhi tumne.



Sana: I m sorry please maaf kar do mujhe. Please.



Shaleen: aur tumne yeh jo kiya khud ki jaan lene chali thi wooh



sahi tha. Ha. Kabhi socha hai mujhe kaisa laga ho yeh sun kar ke



tumhe. Tum kyon sochoge? Tumne kya fark padta hai? Tumhe



toh ghutan hoti hai mujhse isliye?



Sana: bas karo kya kaha tumne mein tumhare baare mein nahi



sochti mujhe tumhare taklif se fark nahi padta kya itna hi jaante



ho tum apni sana ko. Aur haa maine khud ko chot pochai kyonki



kal tumhe bhi toh chot lagi thi. Jab se hum alag tab se tum aise



tough and dangerous stunts karne lage khud ko chot poochane



lage.




Mujhe laga agar mein tumhare dard ki wajah hoon toh



mujhe zinda rehne ka haq nahi hai. Bas isiliye.



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Shaleen: how could u hurt my jaan. Hw could u? kaise tumne



khud ko hurt ke bare mein socha bhi. Ek baar bhi mera khayal



nahi aya.



Sana: sirf tumhara hi khayal aya har baar aur bohot achcha laga



tumhare muh se jaan sun kar. Taras gai thi ise sunne ke liye.



sana:. Baby meri ek aur baat manoge?



Shaleen: tumhare har baat manunga bas vada karo tum aaj ke



baad aisa kabhi nahi karoge.



Sana: kabhi nahi karungi. Tum wapas aa jao kabhi ek asoon bhi



nahi bahaungi I promise. Par tum nahi to I wnt.




He hugged her tightly



Shaleen: bas sana. Ab rona band karo. Dekho mein hona tumhare



paas.



Sana: I craved for this too much. I lve u. I wnt leave u ever my



promise.



Shaleen: sorry mein bhi tumse rude ho gaya. Jaanta tha ki tum ne



sab kuch mere liye kiya phir tumse aise behave kiya.


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Sana: tumhe nahi lagta hum bohot time se bohot dur rahe hai.



please I want my love back my romantic baby back and ha dnt


ever call me sana in our house . I dnt like it.



Shaleen: nahi kahunga jaan. Bt U r inviting trouble wanting ur



romantic baby back.



Sana: I want all my love me back. Please love me like u always. I



hv badly craved for ur love for our intimacy.



Shaleen: my love was, is , and will always for u. ul get everythng



wat u have craved for.



Sana: u did nt miss our love moments?



Shaleen: u have no idea hw much hv I missed it. want a demo of



that?



Sana: no I want the full course, do u mind it?



Shaleen: would I ever mind it?



Sana: thn wat r u waitng for u?



He came closer nd kissed her forehead. She placed her arms



around his neck and pulled him closer. He kissed all her face


intimately, then he kissed near her lips. She moaned.



Sana: I loved it. I missed it so much.



He nuzzled her jawline. He gently starts kissing her lips. she also


responded back him...& then the gentle kiss becomes the


passionate one.. After some time they broke off due to lack of


breath..He hug her immediately as he don't want to stay away


from her..



They remain in hug for almost a minute..he mutters in her ears.



" I missed u soo much"



Shaleen:-promise me jaan..you never ever think to part us..you



never ever leave me alone..



Sana(looking to his eyes):-I promise..



Shaleen:-I just can't leave without you..



Sana(lost in him):-I also can't..



After a long time they were again in each others arms. Their




perfect heaven. He knew she was weak nw so he stopped.



Shaleen: baby thoda relax ho jao. Tum still bohot weak ho



Sana: I felt like heaven aftr so many days. Remain like this for


ever.


u knw i used to be scared to lose u before and nw I even feel more


scared. It feels like a dream whn I open my eyes it will vanish.



Shaleen: shh baby its nt a dream nthng vl go away from u. I m here ..



Vl be together always. Cme sleep for smetime


nw.



Sana: u make me sleep as u do always.



She had the best sleep aftr a long time. He felt happy that their



first love will never remain incomplete.



hope all are happy nw.. patch up bhi kara diya and itna hot



moment bhi diya...thanks for reading



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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome part loveit thaks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awesome... awesome...

both each other so much...


finally they are back in their heaven...


thanks for bringing them back
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice reunion. Loved it. Thanks for pms.

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