PYaar Ka DArd--15 DAYS OF SEPARATION n LOVE last - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

time to reveal the truth...


will shaleen accept the truth and go back to sana or respect her


decision to be separated?



Day 12:



At 2pm:Once in the market neha saw shaleen and went to meet



him. She decided she would tell him the truth..



Neha: hi ?



Shaleen: sorry do I knw u?



Neha: mein neha hoon sana ki dost. Tum mujhe nahi jaante bt I


knw u.



Shaleen:sana kaise hai? I knw u are in touch with her. Woooh


thik to hai na, uski health. Sab kuch?.



Neha: hum kahin bathkar baat kare.



Shaleen: ha.



They go to a coffee shop



Neha: mujhe tumhe kuch pochna hai.



Shaleen: ha boliyen.



Neha: sana ko bohot yaad karte hona.??



She saw tears forming in his eyes.



Shaleen: ha par wooh nahi chahti ki mein uske saath raho toh


mein kya kar sakta hoon.



I love her very much and she will the only 1 bt I dnt want to force


her into anythng. i have never said a no to her... n even now...



If she wants break up she will get it even if It kills me from within



I dnt mind



Neha: sana is lucky she have u.



Shaleen: no I m the lucky one I have had her. App kuch keh rahi


thi?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neha:she stills love u and is jst pushing u coz she doesn't want


her problems to ruin ur life and career.


She told him abt their convo. I knw u must be angry on me coz I


asked to breakup bt whn on phone she told me abt ur relationship


I found u truly loving her.


I thought u will force her and convince her somehw.bt she told me


that u have that u never force her for anything.


she wanted u to be happy and successful without any tensions abt


her. So she decided to push u away from her.


Bt she is broken she cries out of limits whn home.


She had gvn herself many wounds too. Just because u gt trashed


with the piller she took the pillar and trashed hers.


she cant live without u. she will kill herself without u.Please go


and hold her before she kills her self.



Shaleen: he was speachless to hear this. She loved him to such an


extent. Thnk u for tellng me everythng. Bt I cnt go to her. I


promised that I will never force her for anythng. please I request


take care of her.


Neha gets a call from sme1 and she turns white.


time to go back... or separate for ever...


hope u all like it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Super awesome update loveit thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Again sorry for late comments.

Yippiee its Ariya.

All the three updates r equally amazing n heart houching.

Awww thy both madly love eachother tht can do anything for eachother happiness.

Loved Shaaa's care n concern For Sana.

Finally he knw the complt truth behind their break up but he respects her decision.

Wht going to happen nxt?????

I hope evrythng btwn thm will clear soon n thy bcme togethr again.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

superb... plzzz don't separate them... hope they get together soon...

continue soon... Thanks 4 the PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I read all parts ur update hrt touching boss

Claps 4 u

Yr teshu paper ki factory khol lo😉

Qki yeh parts read kr k me cryinggg

Thanx 4 pm me

Yr patch up krvaday boss

Shana and Ariya rock

Update soon

I want share something when I read all parts u make me speechless

Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
lovely...high respect for shaa he respects the decision of sana nd dnt want to force her in nyway even though he is hurting...awww y to trouble them more...kitna dard dete rehnge dono aapne aapko...milwa di na plzzz...pretty plzz...one thing is for sure U write about emotions vry well...awesome...hats off:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
superb yar...
so beautifully written...
feeling so bad for shana...
sana forced shaleen to break up with him...
and shaleen he cried... he loves her so much... uski khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar lega wo...
omg both are hurting themselves... shaleen ko dekh ke sana hurted herself... :'(
glad that neha told everything to shaleen... aww he loves her so much... ki uska promise todna nai chahta...
hope everything gets sorted out soon...
whose call was at the end?? why neha was scared after receving call??
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Aw... Neha's plan back-fired..! Hope sana doesn't do anything to herself!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Nice update... finally he knws reason behind her decision to break up... hmmm lets c wat happens nw... continue soon

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