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Posted: 12 years ago
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day 1:



In the evening he gt up and found her cooking. He hugged her


from back and kissed her shoulder..



Shaleen: aree u need to rest please rest karo chalo.



Sana: enough of rest I m tired I want to cook cnt I do smethng I


like.



He was shocked by the tone she used bt he thought she may be


tired of resting. So he let her do wat she want.



She cooked dinner bt she sat near the tv with her plate. He felt


alone on the table and didn't eat much. He was always used to be


eating with her, discussing abt work, their love , and random


things…He cleaned the kitchen and headed towards the room to


sleep(they used to sleep together),. She changed and came to bed.



Sana: will u do me a favour?



Shaleen: ha bolo.



Sana: please sleep in outside?



Another shock he couldn't believe his ears that she wanted him to



sleep outside. Bt still he thought its her health.



Shaleen: ok I l take the bedding and go. And ya we r nt gng home.



(they decided to go to his hometown for 2 days bt he cancelled it


due to her health… infact in past few months he cancelled it the


5th time..)



Sana: u can go if u want, I vl be resuming my work.



Shaleen: no I dnt want to go.



He took the bedding and went outside to sleep on the counch. He


was teary abt the way she behaved with him. Even she cried hard


in her room bt she thought she would be strong for him.



Shaleen pov: kya hua tumhe sana kyon aise behave kar rahi ho…


bt I vl manofy u in the morning..


aaj ke liye think itna shock kafi hai,,,,, day 2 jaldi update karungi...


only if like this,,,,

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice one dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so emotional yar...shaleen or sana i thought its gonna be arjun and riya...aweee why is sana so rude to him shaleen is hurt...nice update yar...thanx for pm
Edited by Barun__pardeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
woah!!!awesome...
lagtha hai dher saare tissues lagane padegne side mein if all updates are this touching...
Hum yehi galathi karthe hai pyaar mein we take decisions for our loved one also without knowing their view...har cyeez discuss karni chahiye...
Hayeee one more shana...
Tum toh Shana ke cute stories se mar dalogi:-D
Loved both the parts and both the parts R heart touching and awesome...
Eager for nxt part:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome update.
Feeling bad for shana.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar...!!
so its on shana yayy...!!!
feeling bad for both of them... they are so much hurting inside...!!!
she is trying to be rude with him and he is hurt by her behaviour...!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved ur update...

so emotional... bt really heart touching...


love the best feeling and yeh its shana my love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice... oh feeling bad for sana and shaleen... plzzz continue soon... nd send me a PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amez update loveit thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3

Next day:day 2


She talked very less. Didn't even arrange for his regular things.


Both resumed work and went for the shot. The whole day went bt


they hardly talked. I was unusual for him bt he kept quite.



They reach home and she prepared dinner.



Shaleen: we need to talk.



Sana: wat?



Shaleen: r u ok? Tum odd behave kar rahi ho? Have I hurted u in


any way?



Sana: look I m fine. bt ths is the wy I m. take it or leave it. Lets


have dinner.


Shaleen: u wnt sit with me for dinner even today?



Sana: I want to watch tv



She again sat in front of tv and he sat alone.


Shaleen: baby tumhari medicines.


Sana: why r u troubling me wid ths medicines? I vl take it when I


want. N pl stop calling me baby , I m nt a kid and my name is sana


call it.



Shaleen: bt always liked when I called u baby and jaan so wats


wrong nw?


Sana: I dnt like it nw. please call me sana next time.


He was almost on the verge of crying nw bt he controlled. Got hs


bedding n slept outside today.


Both again cried a lot the whole night.


Again the same coldness of sana. They had a shot in afternoon.


Shaleen: sana I think ek baar doc ko dekha dete hai, if everythng


is fine,


Sana: see I dnt want to see a doc I m fine.


Shaleen: but tumhari health.



Sana: oh shaleen please stop irirtating me.


I vl do wat I want to, dnt try to tell me wat I should do.


I feel so suffogated with u nw.


She went to her room in anger shown to him bt hatted herself for


behaving like ths to him.


Sana: I knw it will hurt. Bt its best for u . I would have to let u go


my love..



She cme out for gng to shot wearing a very short dress.(she always


used to wear descent dresses and he hates people growling at her..


bt she deliberatly wore it)



Shaleen: sana yeh dress bohot.



Sana: oh please shut up will u?


Shaleen: aise kyon baat kar rahi hoo? Wat have I dne?



Sana: u knw wat I tired of u, ur talks, ur possessiveness. Jst cnt it


anymore. I want to end ths relationship its addng to my troubles,



Shaleen: wat r u saying? I m fine with anything u wear please itni


si baat ke liye '.U want a break up? Please dnt do this to us. If I m


wrong punish me bt dnt end it like this.



Sana: see I have decided I dnt want this relationship anymore and


reason is I feel sufocted with u nw. so jst please leave me alone. I


just cant take ur presence anymore in my life'



Shaleen: u feel sufocated of me. Please aisa mat karo sana . kya


chahiye tumhe, jst tell me I l do it for u? I would change myself


please tell me wat u want?



Sana: mujhe kuch nahi chahiye nt even u. please leave me alone'



Shaleen: Do u want me to leave the house?



Sana: ha please, I want my space. Find a house for u and leave


soon.


Shaleen: I vl leave aftr the shoot today. My bags r packed I l go get


them.



She was feelng like smthng died in her today bt she remained


strong for him. If she becomes weak she would never let him go..


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Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago

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