ArNi SS: Destiny(Ch1,pg1)updated.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Concept:

What if Roshni is alive?
What if she is saved by the guardian angels,Aditya and Zebbie?
What if she gets to know that Zebbie and Roshni are sisters by blood?

Charecter Sketch:

ACP Arjun Rawte
ACP Sameer Rathod
Shreekant Sen
Chandrakant Patil aka Chotu
Ayesha Sameer Rathod
Zebbie Singhania
ACP Aditya Singhania...

Ch 1 will be updated today at night.

So,how was the concept?
Did you like it?

Index:
ch1- pg1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch1.

*Rawte House*

A lady was packing her bags.Her husband was sitting on the bed,pouting and upset.

She was getting ready,as well packing her bags.

Her husband looked at her reflection in the mirror.For a moment,their eyes met in an eyelock.After a while,as they looked at each other,he blinked his eye and this sight made the trance broke and the lady blushed hard.

Her husband went upto her,and turned her round to face him.He took a pinch of sindoor and adorned it in her parting.She closed her eyes and savoured that beautiful moment.

As she opened her eyes,a lone tear drop fell from her doe-shaped eyes.He quickly wiped it away and kissed her forehead.

Lady(tears in her eyes):Main aapko bohut miss karungi,Arjun. Aap apna khayal rakhiyega.Time pe khana zarur khalijiyega.Kayanat ko boldi hai.Meri nanad ki baat zarur suniyega,warna,future mein iss kamre mein aane ka permanent ban lagwa dungi,ab Samjhe ya Samjhau,ACP Arjun Rawte?
Arjun: Jo hukum jahapana.Bhala aisa kabhi hua hai ki main tumhari baat na manu,Roshni.Tumhe sach mein jaana zaruri hai?
After saying this,Arjun turns his back and folds his hands.

Roshni shook her head and stood infront of him.
Roshni: Arjun,jana toh main bhi nahi chahti thi,par,it is very important.Agar important na hota,toh main nahi jaati,kyunki,I dont like to stay away from my ACP.Doctor jo hu.Ek serious case hai.Aur,shayad,mujhe meri Choti wahaan mil jaaye.Baba ne mujhse meri choti behen ko choti umar mein hi juda kardia thha.I hope woh mujhe miljaye wahaan,Dehradun mein...

Arjun smiles at her.He took her in a warm hug.
Arjun: Main bhi Bhagwaan se yahi prarthna karungi ki tumhe tumhari Choti aur mujhe meri Saali sahiba miljaye.Bus kab hai?
Roshni:Bus ki time hai at 9pm.Tab tak main aappke aur Kayanat keliye chai bana deti hu.
Arjun: Sure,my Love...


**Singhania Mansion,Dehradun**
A woman of mid 20s,leaning on the window frame,looks out at the sky.She carresses her belly,because,she is 3 months pregnant.

The scene outside makes her feel fresh and calm.

Suddenly,somebody comes and wraps his hands around her tender waist,making sure not to hurt her,coz,their bundle of joy is growing there.

She sensed his presence.
Lady: Aap aagaye,Adi?
She turns around to face the super hot and dashing ACP of Dehradun Police and the king of her heart,her loving and caring husband,ACP Aditya Singhania.

His charming smile made her smile widely.

Aditya:Haan,meri zohrajabeen.Main aagay.Aakhir kab tak main apne khubsurat biwi aur apne bacche se dur rehta?

He places his hands on her belly.She smiles at his antics.

Aditya:Hey baccha.Kaise hai aap?Papa and Mumma misses you a lot.Aap jaldi aana,bohut maza karenge.Aapko park lejayenge.aapke saath khelenge.Jaldi aiye.

Saying that,he kisses on her belly.

Aditya gets up and asked,"Tumne khana khaya,Zebbie"?
Zebbie: Haan,Adi.Maine khana khaliya,as per your orders.
Aditya pecked her lips slightly and said,"Good girl,Thank You".

She blushed at that and hugged her husband,tightly.

After a while,they broke the hug.

Aditya:Aaj tumhari night shift nahi hai kya,Dr.Sahiba?
Zebbie:Nahi.Dr.Malhotra ne mujhe strictly night duty karne se mana kiya hai.Jab emergencies ayegi,tab mujhe bulaya jayega. Aap jaake fresh hojaiye,main khana laga deti hu.
Aditya:Yay... Dr.Malhotra ko thanks kehna parega.Unka haath chumne parenge.
Zebbie smacks Adi's sholders playfully.
Aditya(making a frown): Ouch... Ye kya kia,Zebbie?
Zebbie: agar aap bhulgaye toh,main aapko yaad dila du,ACP Aditya Singhania,ki,i will only be called If there is any emergency cases.Aur,aap,unke haath kyun chumenge?
Aditya:I was joking,yaar.Meri itni majaal ki main kisi aur ke haath ko chumu.You are the first and last love of my Life,Zebbie.I will always be with you and woth our baby.I LOVE YOU A LOT.
Saying that,he gave her a side hug.
Zebbie: Love you too,Adi.Jaldi fresh hoke aiye.Aapko khana khana hai aur mujhe Teekhi pani puri.Ummm... Aap lekar aaye hai na Teekhi pani puri?
Aditya: Haan,main lekar aaya hu.Table par hai.Tum jao.Main 5 minutes me aata hu.
Saying that,Aditya leaves for getting fresh and Zebbie leaves for setting up the table for Adi.

**Rawte House,Mumbai**

Roshni ke jaane ka waqt hogaya hai.Kayanat hugs her and feeds a spoonful of curd and sugar.Arjun and Roshni,then leave for the Bus Station.

After 20 minutes,Arjun and Roshni reach the Bus station. The whole ETF is there to bid her bye.She gets very happy after seeing them.She went towards them and hugs them.
Rathod: Take care,Roshni.Agar kuch bhi zarurat hai,phone karke bata dena.
Roshni: Sure,Sam bhaiya.
Shree and Chotu hugs her and wishes her All the best for her journey.Ayesha hugs her tightly and wishes her also.

After some time,the Bus conductor signals that the Bus will leave within a few minutes.She turned to leave,not before hugging everyone and especially,hugging and pecking his lips.

She bid everyone a Bye and left for Dehradun.

Precap: Roshni's bus accident.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What the??????
Only 1 like,2 like comments and 60 views?
Is my story so bad????
I dnt knw what to say...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di mere alawa arni koi ni padhta :(
maine likhna chod diya :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Hmm...
Naina di ko bolke iss topic ko delete karwa dungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Itne shiddat se main likhti hu with the hope that sum1 will like,but,no one is interested in it.Kal itne logo ko pms bheje iss story keliye,but,no respnse.
Aaj ke aaj hi I will pm the link to the DT's of this story and get this thing instantly deleted.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome work
well dear, ye kahan ka insaaf hua.
jo rply nhi kr rhe unke liye story delete tk krne ka plan kr liya.
aur jo kr rhe h unka kya..
continue soon..
Edited by pihu_angad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
love it
nice one
plz pm for next part of this
thanks

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