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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: fatima15
amazing update :) loved it
so arjun thinks riya loves her ex-boyfriend
the flashback in the flashback was lovely😆
awww arjun was mesmerized by riya's beauty
and riya was dancing in rain :)
love the way arjun saved riya from those boys
and poor arjun injured his hand
arjun lost seeing riya
riya tied arjun's injured hand with her scarf :)
and arjun gave her his jacket
can't wait to read more
continue soon

Thanks fatiii such a sweet comment ..
lv u dr...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986
th update is super duper mast.

fb n fb mein fb is amazing dr.

acp sahab ko to riya nay pheli nazar may hi ghayal kar diya.

after fifteen years he felt some attraction for a girl.

chalo dayr aaye drust aaye.

continue soon dr.

ths is for u sweetu:

Exams are near,
Subjects are not clear,
Questions appear,
Answers
disappear,
Oh! my dear,
Dont fear,
Bcoz i'm here 2 wish u,
All
clear!
Have a great exam fest!
All the best, best of luck for
exams.

Ohhh anku...
kya baat hai...
mujhe to dibaties ho jayegi n thanks dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: priyu03
Awsome update
</div>fb is amazing😊
<div>update soon

All the best for exam😊😊😊

Thanks priyu,,,...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: life93

hi piya🤗...<div></div>awesome n too diffrent...well nice scenes but age diffrence is too much but koi nahi...chalega all scenes were fab...update soon

Thanks neeru...
ab concept he yahi hai...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Moumimon
ArIya meeting.....awsome...

Thanks moumi

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: krinal5chhayal
Interesting concept😊
So Arjun and Riya are married
And Arjun thinks that Riya still loves her ex-boyfriend
Flashback was really good and so was the flashback in flashback
Don't you think that getting married at 18 is a bit young?
Aww Arjun wasmesmerizedby Riya's beauty
OMG Arjun felf attracted to a girl after 15 years😲
Riya doesn't take help from strangers but she didn't even know Arjun when he helped her😆
Riya tying her scarf around Arjun's hand when he got hurt and Arjun giving her his jacket was nice

I forgot to ask, is anything going to happen to Riya cause I'm getting a feeling like that from your title pic?

Can't wait to know what happens next
Update soon😃

thanks dr for such a sweet comments lvd it,..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I know u all angry on me...so no age changed..

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Khud ko tere pass he paaten hain...no age of lv
PART=3...

SCENCE-
Arjun was lost in his thought..
He wanna to droped her but one young boy (Age22)
Called her from behind,

a big smiled crept on her face when she heared his voiced..it was anurag her bf..

.
on the other hand..
Arjun face shine faded to saw him..
she says thanks n goes with him..
Arjun looked her from leaving ,he stood there for some times..looking her go away from her..
he dont know why she is effecting him lot..
--
some day passes..
(Etf was behind one gang..
jo yungs girl ko kidnaping ker ke unki sell kerte hain..
n force to do wrong thinks)
.
Eft got one solid proof..
next selling moonnight club main hone vali hai..
.
after some time--
SCENCE-moonnight club-
all etf outside the club..
Arjun n sam enters the club..

Arjun holding his gun.he was near in one room...
he heared one girl shouting..
.
He imedeatly brocked the door..n runs inside..
he was hell shocked to saw her in that condition..
.
She was laid on the bed n one man tring to do force with her..
.
She was crying a lot..
Arjun start blue n black that man..
His anger rised on the seventh foor..
The man was almost dead..
then he moved toward her..
Her dress r tore in several places..
Leav me plz dont do this..
she is begaing..
mujhe gher jana hai mama ke pass..
(she is crying like a small kids,she is just 18 n still child)
Riyaaa..its me arjun..looked at me..
noo leav me she stragling..
Main acp arjun..dont warry ,now nothing gonna happened to u..
ab tum apne gher jaogi ,apni mama ke pass..
tears comes out her eyes..
Arjun help her to getup from the bed..
She looked her condition.
she feel uncomfortable,
she hug herself..

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

herself tightly n lower her eyes..just wanna to hide herself..
Arjun understand her condition..
he imedeatly removed bed sheat n n wrrapped arround her..
Dont warry main hoon na..he said softly..(just make her comfotable)
.
Sudenly shree n chotu enters the room..
She scared n hug arjun tightly..
n hid her face to his chest..
She start shiving badly..
voo oo log aa jayege arjun..
(she tightend her grips to him,)
Arjun feel his shivering body..
hey koe tumhen nahi le jayega..
mare hote tumhen koe haath bhi nahi laga sakta..
He hagitatly moved his hand around her back..
N start pathes her back..
Relax ..just relex main hoon na..
.
Sir sab girls ko bachha liya gaya hai..choree said,
.
Arjun nodded his head,
arjun try to remove her grip from her..
but she tightend her grips on his body..(bez she only trusted him that time)
arjun lift up her in his arms n n comes outside the club,
.
all other girls go other van but riya in arjun's suv..
Arjun sit back side..riya stil hugging him..

Choree sits front n chotu drive suv..

---
few days later--
arjun not forget her n her innocent face..
.
All team didnt know ..whats happened their angry acp..
--
One day etf got invitation..
it was riya's marrige..
It was surprising fir all..
etani kam ege main koe kaise shadi ker sakta hai..
.
may be thats inccident happened with her..
Arjun never wanna to go in her wedding..
he didnt know why..??
but he didnt say no to her ,
when she specialy comes n invite arjun..

so arjun n sam goes in riya's weddiding..
--
Arjun snnaped out his thought..when he heared somone screaming..
.
Riya's mom crying ..
mujhe to pehale he dar tha ye shadi nahi hone vali..
hayee yeh usi din mar jaati to achha rehata..
ab hum sab ko kya muhn dekhayege..
.
Anurag ir uske parents shadi se achank mana ker dete hai..

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Arjun yelled..just shut up..aap uski maa hoker ehsa kaise keh sakti hai riya ke baare main..
arjun tried to monified anurag parents..
dekhiye us din ehsa kuch nahi huya jaisa aap log ye sonch rahe hai..
.
Anurag parents-tumhen uski etani phiker kyu ho rahi hai..
Kahin tum bhi uske ashik to nahi ho..
(Arjun just pissed his teeth.)
arjun to anurag-
tum to usase pyaar kerte ho,
phir chup chap khade ho ker tamasha kyun dekh rahe ho..

Anurag-Ager tumhen etani problem hai ,to tum kyun nahi ker lete riya se shadi..
After saying this anurag family left there..
riya totaly brock down..
her parents r also in big shock..
on the other geust start gossiping about her..
Riya hold her dress n wanna to run from there..
but arjun hold her hand ..
.
Riya why u r running from here..its ur house..or jinhen problem hai,vo log yahan se jayenge..
.
arjun looked her parents n says...
ek tarah se achha he huya jo ye shadi tut gaye..
ager shadi ke baad vo log riya ke sath bura kerte to..
.
Sam also suport arjun..
Riya mom-tumhare liye ye badi badi baaten kerna kitana asan hai..
per sari umer jhelana to hamen padega..
poor riya she is crying ,silently her lv her parent ,all behaving like unknow..
only one person stood there for her strong suport..
.
he is non other then arjun..
.
she was listing everyone ,now its enough for her,
she shouted..
enoughhh...!!!!!!
all looked toward her,
but she looked to him..
(Arjun still holding her hand)
will u marry me..she asked..
arjun n all shoked..
Will u marry me arjun,she again asked..
(yes she is knew he is bechaler,
are yr hamare choree ne bataya..kab ..? its not importent i think)
(she felt his grip loosed her hand)
riyaaa..tumhen pata hai tum kya keh rahi hoo..
she again asked-will u marry me..
but riya tumhen pata bhi hai,main tumse kitana bada

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

she stoped him in mid..
bolo na arjun..
.
Ar-Riya hamari age..
Ri-yes ya no arjun..
kahin tumhen bhi to vohi nahi lagta jo..
.
Arjun looked angerly to her..
how could she think..
arjun dragged her to mandap ..
.
n order prisist to start all wedding rituals..
.
(riya knew that arjun has soft corner for her, when & how..? baad main bataongiii)
.
Arjun hold her hand n took seven round arround the holi power..
her parents do kanayadan..
At last he fill her partion with sindure n tied mangalsutra around her neck..
now for all rights she is his wife n arjun is his husband..

--
It was almost five months over of their wedding..
but they stil not behaving like normal couple..
yes they share same bed but not like couple..
.
they start their life normal..(But not as a couple)
sudenly anurag again enters in their life...
--
In ariya house-
arjun was very happy..
he finaly decided to tell his heart feeling to her..
.
Arjun stood outside his house..n pressed doorbell,
Riya opened the door n he saw anurag was also there..
.
Without saying anything anurag left there,
riya wanna to tell him ,but arjun stoped her..
Arjun felt she still lvd him..

---
next day arjun without saying any think goes etf office..
Sameer sense somthing wrong when he heared arjun n anurag convo in phone..
Arjun wanna to meet anurag so he invite anurag tomarrow his house,
--
Sameer tried to convinced arjun ..
arjun she is ur wife..
Ar-thats not a meen for i hv force myself on her,
arjun left there n goes his house..
now three life r depends on riya's one decision..

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arjun comes out his thought when he feel soft fingers touched on his forhead..
He opened his eyes n looked up..she is stood there..wrraped around ONLY one BED sheat arround her,
looking dam gogeous,
Arjun heart stoped pounding that time,
TBC--

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago