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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

hey so sorry for the late comment...
just read all the parts...
superb story and concept...
omg 15 yrs ka gap wow...and riya has a past...
love the way sameer was samjhaofying him...
ariya first meet was amazing... lovely... phli nazar mai jadu kar diya riya ne...
omg so this was the reason behind their wedding... how could anurag do this... glad arjun married her... but ye anurag ab kyu wapis aaya hai?? what does he want now??
omg aise point pe.stop... riya only in a sheet...ab arjun kya karega... 😉
continue soon...

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

omg great update
their marriage was really hilarious
how anyone can even think of this 😡
great ariya married
why he came back to them
love it
continue soon
last lines were omg 😲

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Nice update... arrgh Riya's mom how could she talk like that... Arunarg jerk!!!! why did he come back now??? continue soon

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Himani

@Himu_arsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Awesome update

Waiting for next part

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

hi piya🤗...

i'm too angry with u u know na how much i waited for ur update then y thiss chupke chupke updtae huh...

well i'm just worried for riya...i know love has no age right...but dear riya is still a kid na i mean 18 nhi koi age hai shaadi ki...she has gone through a lot ...poor girl firstly the guy whoom she loved left her on their wedding day...😡🤢...n her mom😡...also riya married to arjun just for the sake of her parents...😭( well if she loves arjun i dont know)...but just hope that she wont hurt herself more...

arjun is mature enough ...but he also loves riya...so i can rely on him ...for riya...that he truely loves her also understand her...so no wonder why they are not leading a normal weedded life?...but y the hell the anuraag is back😡😡😡😡😡...

i know arjun think that he is more elder than riya so thats y she think that riya still love anuraag...so now will she prove her love to arjun ?...so thats y the last scene...well dont mind piya but i think that they should understand each other well enough before a new starting of their married life...just my pov...but piya truely i love ur concept...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...n this time with pm n jaldi se do update mujhe...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 smajhee ya samajhaun??...

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Superb,arjun and riya ki shaddi was so amazing,

and the last part,ab kya hoga,

plz update soon and thanx for pm

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

it is very nice

please dear continue soon

i was waiting for it since long

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Ohhh tht circumstance

Poor Riya

Anurag I. Hate u u don't believe on ur love

Why he feel she love him

According to me she have no. Feeling 4 Anurag

Poor Arjun can't tell her his feeling

Me sad

Update. Soon

Thanx. 4 pm me

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

awsome update
so this is the way ariya got married nice
omg this arjun bhi na how can he doubts that riya still loves anuraag
precap is interesting
cont soon

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

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Khud ko tere pass he paaten hain...no age of true lv
PART=4...

SCENCE-
He snnaped out his thought,
.
when he felt somone soft hand on his forhead..
HE opened his eyes n saw his beautiful wife..Stood there,
.
he looked her frome top to bottum..Damm she looks so beautiful n seducible in tha...t (he took long breath,just wanna to calm himself)
she wrraped only one single bed sheet..
for few second arjun looked her without blinking his eyes,
.
She also looking him..
As wanna to say now only ur rights on me..
.
arjun controled himself n lower his graze..
N looked here n there..
he didnt understand why she dressed like this..
ye riya ke dimag main chal kya raha hai,
.
Ar-raat kaphi ho chuki hai..ab hamen so jana chahiye,(not looking her)
.
he getup n moved toward their bed room..
but stoped in mid when he felt riya holding his hand..
.
arjun turned n looked toward her..but before he can understand,
she hugged him ,clenching his white shirt tighty with her hands
.
Riyaa..(he wanna to asked..but his voice betraying him)
When she hugged him..
a stronged current passed in his body..
his all musels tightened..
Riya dont do this his mind says..But his heart..
plz dont go any where..
I m feeling alive,
whenever u r near to my heart..
I m feeling happy whenever u r in my arms..
N ur body fregnance made me crazzy..
crazzy like as never wanna to go any where..
n ur lips..made my all senses loose..
i couldnt stoped myself for claiming ur soft stobery lips..
N when u hug me..like the same ways..my heart start marathen..
He didnt listen myself..
i hate my heart..he never
stoped ,n always think about u..
i swe one day i put my heart in jail..
At least for some time he stoped thinking about u..
.
But i m defnitly sure

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago