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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesum di
bhaiya kha h lolz
pm kr diya kro
ps. dhudna aur meri aur princess_pari collab ss padhna
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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow awesome dr.

fb r emotional n romantic.

wht happened to arjun?

continue soon.

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

PIYA di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not fair...!!!!😭

aisa end kyun kiya...!!!

aap ab jaaldi se update kijiye mujhe kuch nahi pata mujhe next part hona...!!!!!

is part ke liye...

WOW fb scenes were cute,sweet,romantic☺️

yeh kya yar arjun ko next din hi undercover mission ke liye jaana paada not fair...!!!!

So Riya is dressed up as Bride and waiting for her Groom Arjun...Arjun kahan ho aap???

What does Sam mean when he tells Riya that he wont be coming...!!!

PIYA DIII kahan ho aap aur aapka update?????😊

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice start... Riya's POV ws nice... but wat happened to Arjun???continue soon

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Sabia Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Haaila...!

Piya Aapi,,,,, ye kya kar diya aapne??

Kya wo to sach nehi hai,,, jo mai soch rahi hu??

Nehiii...

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sonycs001

@sonycs001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

update soon

what happened to arjun why did sameer said like that to ria

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

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PART=2A
*-DIil Se Duaa-*
"dil ko sambhale rakha tha hamne..sirf unke entajaar main..per...?"
.

SCENCE-She was madly waiting for him..
but unfortualy he didnt come back..
.
riya was shock what rathore sir just said,Sir ka matlab kya hai..
She tried to think positive but her heart racing foriously as somthink gonna be wrong or already hav..
.
she composed her heard ,wiped her face..
n ignored sameer Question,
Ri-Sir aap baidiye main aap ke liye coffee bana ker lati hoon ,tab tak arjun bhi aa jayenge..
she turned before she goes inside kitchen sameer again stoped her..
Sa-Riya lagta hai tumne meri baat dhayan se nahi suni..
vo ab kabhi nahi ayega..
Arjun surayakant Rawte Ab kabhi ...
Before he complete riya shouted stop its sir...
.
Bus bahoot ho gaya sir aap ne ye kya laga rakha hai,
vo nahi ayenge..
Akhir kyun nahi ayenge vo,vada kiya hai unhone mujhase,unhone kaha tha vo jaror ayegen..
.
Ra-riya samajhane ke koshish karo vo..
.
Ri-ohh ab samjhi aapne jaror unhen dosare mission per bhej diya hoga..
yahi baat hai naa sir,
.
Rathore was in very bad situation how he tell whats the reasion behind ..
kaise bataye riya ko ke arjun kyun nahi aa raha..
.
He composed himself n say..
Riya arjun aab jis mission per gaya hai,vahan se kabhi vapas nahi ayega..
.
She start some litle work as wanna to bussy her mind..
that was betraying her today..
Ri-(in mind) ye mujhe kya ho raha hai,kyun mere dimag main etane bure bure khayal aa rahe hai,no riya no ehsa kuch bhi nahi..
.
She mumured herself no vo vapas ayenge, unhone mujhe ---
She again lost in past-
Riya make a sad face what aap undercover mission per jaa rahe hai,
or vo bhi aaj,
.
She turned n angrly

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Moved away but befor she go more..arjun hold her hand..
Riya (very lovingly) tried to understand ,
ye mera pharj hai,or tum janti hoon,
pharj ke liye main kuch bhi ker sakta hoon,
arjun comes closer n hug her tightly in his warmth embrace..N kissed her forhand..
i promise riya main jald he vapise aaonga..
He tried to lightend the mood..
he lift riya in his arms(She shouted arjun what r u doing)
with a big smiled..
or koe pagal he hoga jo apni etani khubshurat se bibi ko jayada time tak akela chood ker jaa sakta hai,
na na baba na main koe risk nahi lena chahta..
ager es bich tumhen koe or mil gaya to..
.
What ..? kya kaha tumne she hits his shoulder but before she could say more ..arjun picked her lips by him..
n goes toward his bedroom
.
(loll kande bachhe ab ye mat poochana aage kya huya)
.
Riya was lost in arjun thought,he promied her he come back soon..
He also promised her ...dont bother about me i will take care for myself..
i know u r here for waiting me..
after saying this he left..
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One long tears comes out her eyes..rathore notice this..
he never wanna to brock her dreami moment..
but he hv to do this,yes he hv to do this..
Riyaaa he shouted but no resposce..
he again shouted riyaa..
she comes out her flashes,
she feel hot tears on her face,
she wiped imediatly..
She lift her graze up n looked the time,
n say ye arjun bhi na..
Etana time ho gaya per abhi tak nahi aye..
Bus ek baar ane do..
Ra-Enoughhh..!!!! Main kab se tumhen samjhane ke koshish ker raha hoon,
Rawte ab kabhi nahi ayega..
vo ..oo
Ri-voo kya sir..
Rawte ..he took a long breath n wiped his tears thats comes out his eyes..
.
on the other riya stood without talikg a single breath..
Ra-Arjun suryankant rawte apne mission se vapise nahi aya..
Uske sath jo do polish officer gaye they vo maare gaye hain,

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Usase hamare sare connenction toot gaye hai..
Or.. shayad ..rathor stoped in mid..
.
Ri-shayad kya sir..for god shak meri jaan nikali jaa rahi hai..boliye sir shayad kya..?
.
Ra-Shayad vo bhi un officers ke taraha mara..
he couldnt complete his word..
without saying anything riya moved toward her bedroom n lock the room from inside,
she stood infront of mirror..
.
Riya stood like a statue as no sign of life left in her body,
.

bG song-
kise poochon hai ehsa kyun ,
Bejooban saa ye jahan hain,
khushi ke pal ,
kahan dhoondu,
benisha saa wsqt bhi yahan hai..

Her mind n heart start fighting..
she didnt understand who was right or who was not..
.
Heart-No ajun mujhe jhoot ker nahi jaa sakte..
vo mujhe dhoka nahi de sakte he promised me..
.

jaane kitane labon per gile hain,
jindagi se kaye fasale hai..
base the jaab sampe ankhon main,
lakire jab jhote en hathon se yun bevajaha..

.
Mind-tumhara arjun tumhen jhood ker jaa chuka hai,
hamesha hamesha ke liye,
.

Heart-noo never vo mujhe chood ker kahin nahi jaa sakte..
.

jo bheji the duaa vo jaake aasma ..
se yun takra gaye ke aa gaye,
ke aa gaye loot ke sada..2

.
Mind-vo chala haya hai,vo ehasi jagaha chala gaya jahan se koe vapise nahi aa sakta..
.
Heart-noo vo vaapise anyege meri liye apni riya ke liye..Dil se duaa hai..
vo jaror ayege..
.

saason ne kahan rokh mood liya ,
koe raha najar main na aye ,
dhadkan ne kahan dil jhood diya na jhode en jismone saye..

The room stil feel with his presens n fregnance..
She shouted loudly..
Arjunnn..
tum mujhe jhood ker nahi jaa sakte ..
u cant do this..
she fall on the ground n started crying..
no tumhen aana ho ..apni riya ke pass vapise aana hoga..
she crying badly ..
arjunnn

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Yahi baar baar sonchata hoon tanhan mai yahan..
mare saath saath chal raha hai hai yaadon ka dhuyan..
jo bheji the duaa..
vo jaakeee aasama seee..
jo bjejhii the duaa..

she didnt know how many times tak vo roti rahi..
.
on the other rathor crushed himself,
its all bez of him,
arjun goes undercover mission in place of him..
yes rathor got one another personal importent work ,
so arjun goes in place of yr..
.
Sam mumured undee his breath..
kash maine tumhare baat nahi maani hoti,
kash maine tumhen es mission per jaane ke permission na de hoti..
--
Flash back-
After his wedding night
next mor-
Arjun opened his eyes n saw his most beautiful wife..she is sleeping peacefully in his arms..
Arjun cant off her eyes..
but the moment his break by sameer call..
.
Arjun picked his call n comes out his room..
dont wanna to disturbed his beautiful wife sleep..
Haa sam bolo etani shubha shubha..
(in bit teasing way)
tumhen nahi lagta ke tumne mujhe galat time per disturbed kia..
Sa-i m sorry arjun vo tujhase ek baat kerni the..
.
Ar-its ok sam main to bus majak ker raha tha,
Sa-ayesha chahti hai main kal uske sath hospital main rahoon,
per tumhen to pata hai,
mission per jana bhi jarori hai,
to main chahta tha,ke tum or riya kal ayesha ke pass raho,
ehasae waqt main use apno ke bahoot jarorat hai,
Ar-tu ek kaam kyun nahi kerta main teri jagah chala jata hoon,
or tu ayesha..
Sameer cut him mid -kya bakbaas ker rahe ho arjun,teri kal shadi huye hai,
or tu keh raha hai ,mai tujhe mission per bhej doon..
Ar-sam tu samajhata kyun nahi ayesha ko teri jayada jarorat hai..
vo maa banane vali hai,or es waqt main tera uske pass rehana bahoot jarori hai,
.
Sa-per arjun,
Ar-per bar kuch nahi its final..now no argument samjhe ya samjhayon..
.
after lot of argument rathore agreed.
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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago