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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

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*--DIil Se Daa--*
Kehate hai kuch duaa sidha dil se nikanti hai..
jo God ko bhi majboor kerdeti haii..
vo kerne per jo kismaat ke pare haiii..
Kya sach main kise ke pyaar main etani takat hoti hai..
dekhate haii uske duaa ka asar kahan tak hota hai..

PART=1
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SCENCE-
She tried to covince herself bus kuch time or bus sirf kuch time ke baat hai,
usake baat hum pahoot jayenge ..
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She taking long breath n closed her eyes one long tears fall on her beautiful eyes--
her mind driffted in fb memory--
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She is very excited today ..
or ho bhi kyun na..aaj etsne dino baad vo jo aane vaale they,
Uff ye kya ker rahi ho sambhalker.. she says hersell,
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now one can understand her today,she was so happy..
finaly after very long time he was returning back home after his undercover misstion..
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uffo kya ker rahi hoon,
jaldy jaldy se sab ker leti hoon,abhi room bhi decorate kerna hai..
her graze fell on bed..
her cheeks turned red n blush n shy can easly visual her face..
as she remind their first wedding night..
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She was dressed in a beautiful bridle entire..
n sit on the midle of bed..
She was waiting him for last one hours..
its to late..
she was feel sleeping,but she controled her slept..
finaly at last he came..
Ohh god vo mere samne hai,
how i controlled my heartbeat..
jo always unke aane per etani tej ho jaati hai..
she lift her graze litle up in bw her ghunghat n notice his smiling face..
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Ohh god some one hold me i m gona faint..vo haste huye kitane achhe lagte hai ,
i said to myself..
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uff ohh gosh ye main kya keh rahi hoon,
obiously koe or kyun ab to ye hi mujhe sambhalenge..
akhire wife hoon enki,
samjhe ya samjhayon

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Her heart beart is stil ubnormal..
why i m fail to controled my heart beat always..
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Kuch sonch rahi ho my love..
i snnaped out my dreams when he call me..
he deamading me to look up n face him..
but i shly nod my head in negative..
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he comes more closer to me...
my heart beat gonna fast n fast..
Hey meri taraf dekho...he said very romenticaly ..but i again nodded in negative,
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okk my love if u dont wanna to see me to main chala jata hoon,
phir tum jitana bhi mujhe pass bulaogi main pass nahi aonga..my lv..
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When he said all this my heart stop beating that time ,
how could i imagine my life without him,
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he is my life,he is my breath..
he is beat of my heart n without him my life is dead..
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i m lifeless without him,
i imedeatly lift up n hug him tightly..
i strated crying on his shoulder..
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how dare u say all this so easly..can u even think how i lived without u..
dont u dare u say this again arjun,
i sew i killed myself before is anythink happened to u..
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heyy sorry sorry i m realy sorry riya..
main tumhen rolana nahi chahta tha,
main to bus..
i m sorry my love..
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(chalo ab riya ka pov khatam kerte hai..
verna main blush kerke gir jaongii ..ab or i main nahi likh sakti
🤣.)
she tightly closed my eyes when she feel his hand moving under her shirt..
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she wanna to pushed him But he hold her tightly n kissed her passionatly..
she also equily respond back..
they lost in each other lv..
the lv of passion,the lv of desire..the pysical needs of each other..
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In morning when she opened her eyes..
but stil in sleeping movered..
she moved her hand both side but he was not there..
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as she thought after that passinate night in morning may be she found herself in his husband arms..
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but he was not there..
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she get up n wrraped one bed shit around her ..
arjun

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

arjun..she called her name n searches him in whole house,
Finaly she saw him,
he was in white shirt n blue pent,
she goes near n hug him tightly..n say good morning arjun,
but arjun didnt reply,
Ri-hey arjun baat kya hai,why u looked so upset,
or etani mor main kahan jaane ka program bana rakha hai,
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After few minute arjun reply,
Riya(he cubbed her face) riya mujhe aaj he ek undercover mission ke liye jana hoga,
riya looked shocked to him,
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Tring trring.
She snnaped out her thought when she heared door bell,
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Lagata hai arjun aa gaye n looked herself in one time in mirror,
she looks like bridle..
Her Arjun's bridle..she smiled,
She mumured ehsa koe kerta hai bhala shadi ke dosare din..newly wife ko jhood ker undercover mission per chaye gaye,
ek baar bhi mere baare main nahi soncha ,ke mera kya hoga,
she tried to make fake anger on her face,
no it was not fake anger ,she was missing him badly,
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She runs toward the door n stoped herself n tried to composed herself,
Caam down riya just comm down,
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she took long breath n opened door,
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arjun she says lvingly when she opened door,
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but her excitment n smilled fadded when she saw arjun is not there,
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sameer rathore was stood there,
Ri-sur aap yahan,
kuch kaam tha,
ander aeye,
sam comes inside,
Ri-App baidiye arjun bhi bas ane vale honge,
Same looked her from top to buttom,
she looks like bridle today,
n how can i say that her arjun..her arjun is now,
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Ri-sir aap kuch sonch rahe hai riya said,
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Sam nodded in negative,
Ri-(happily)bus ek baar arjun ko ane digiye phir dekhana kaise gin gin ker badala leti hoon,
poore two month ho gaye gaye,
Sam -riya mujhe tum se kuch baat kerni hai (with heavy heart),
but she is conti n talking about him,
Sir jab vo ayenge to
Riyaaa sam shouted vo nahi ayega vo kabhi nahi ayega,
TBC----

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome.
Amazing.
Love the story very much.
And fb part was so romantiv.
I am blushing.
Continue soon.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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pravallika

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited..

It is good start...

Riya was waiting for Arjun the next day in bridal..

Sam came with bad news..

It is too emotional..

Waiting for next part..

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing start piya :) loved it

so arjun went on a undercover mission

flashback scenes were so romantic ❤️

wow riya dressed up as a bride and is eagerly waiting for him

omg sam told her arjun is not coming back

does that mean something bad happened to arjun? 😭

hope arjun is not dead

can't wait to read more

continue very soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hilla!!!!!!!!!
padh to liya tha pahle hi
but dhyan hi ni ra unres karne ka😆

very nice
loved it😃
bechari riya
aur arj kaha gaya yaar
pata ni kaha kho gaya hai ab vo!😭

Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

are megha, fatii ,prava ,piya tum sab res laga ker kahan gayab ho gaye...
🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.

🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.
update ker diya guys its was small but last part is longgg posted soon..
sorry of sny error guys..

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll
are megha, fatii ,prava ,piya tum sab res laga ker kahan gayab ho gaye...
🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.

🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.🤣.
update ker diya guys its was small but last part is longgg posted soon..
sorry of sny error guys..

i unreserved my comment check it now 😆

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago