OS: Namak...Last Part(page 6)- (9/5)

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Assala mu
alaikum...!!



I'm here with a new
OS. Hope you will like it (yeh, the word is 'hope'...caz I know, joote
chappal bhi aa sakte hai!)



Anyway, jaisa bhi
ho,,,,, but plzzz...leave your comments


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'Ek cup chai...'



'yes sir...aur kuch?'
asked the waiter of the cafe shop.



'Nehi... haan,, chai
me chini maat dalna, Namak dalna...'



The boy was actually
surprised and was looking at the guy in a are-you-serious look.



'Mere chehre ghurne se
kya chaai aa jayega??'



Then and there the boy
went frm there, to bring his Namak wala chai... the boy was thinking, 'ajeeb
aadmi hai, budha pe me shayad dimaag ghum gaya!'



A 71 years old man was
sitting in a cafe and he had just orderd his Namak wala chaai. He was now
thinking of 'Her', whenever the word "chaai' comes in frnt of him, he was
compelld to think about the most precious lady in his life...it's not that he
felt her only then,,,, he felt her in every secnd of his life. She was his
breath...




>~~~FALSHBACK (43 Years Back)~~~~



'Ek chai
dena...Namak wala...'


A sweet female
voice came in his ears. he felt that it wasn't just a voice, it was so sweet
that he felt that it was honey... Didn't khow why, his head turnd
automatically,... 'Namak wala chai"??...it felt weird to him... he had
a sudden urg to see the face of the voice owner. When he turnd, he saw an
angelic face. he felt like he was looking at a path lost angel frm heaven!



'Rawte...Rawte...!!'
Rathod literally shouted to seek the atention of the super cop ACP ARJUN
SURIYAKANT RAWTE... That make Arjun to come out of his thought.



'What??' he
replied...actually, he felt disturbd...don't khnow why, he didn't
wanted to take his eyes off her.



Rathod: kaha khoye hue
ho? jiss kaam ke liye hum yaha aaye hai, uss pe dhyan kaha hai tumhara?




Actually they came i the
cafe as an undercover to follow a suspect. Arjun just jerkd other thoughts frm
his head at that moment and concentrated on his duty.



Some days went by,,,,
but soon realized that that angelic face was not so easy to forget...



One day, he was on the
driving seat of the ETF SUV. They were waiting for the green signal. Suddenly,
he saw that face again. At first he felt that it was only his imagination. But
nope, there she was, helping a blind man to cross the road.


'Usski sirf chehra hi
nehi, soch bhi khub surat hai,,,,, aaj kaal ke zamane me aisa...' but he
stopped, 'ye mai kya soch rahi hu, kyun soch rahi hu uss ke bare mai...jisse
mai janti taak nehi??'



'Rawte...Rawte...!!'
Rathod had to shout again, caz the signal was now green, but Arjun didn't start
the car yet. Shree and Chotu was now staring at him with shockd expression!



soon Arjun's chain of
thought again broke by the voice of his ex-frnd and the chief of the ETF. He
startd the car.



Rathod: aaj kaal tum
kuch zyada hi khoye hue nehi lag rahe ho Rawte? Achcha hai, duniya me abhi bhi
aisa koi cheez to hai jo tumhara dhyan hata sake, maine to socha...



Arjun didn't say
anything but glard at him.





Days were passing by
with the hectic schedule of ETF. One day, a case came to ETF. Some terrorists
had capturd a school and made tall the teachers and children hostage. They
demanded the leader of their gang who was a big criminal.


When Arjun enterd the
building to save the hostages, he was totally shockd. CAz he saw 'Her', sitting
at a corner. Some kids were hugging her out of fear. Her that angelic face
looked pale, and...wait, what was that? He saw a red slap mark on her soft
face. A sudden rage took over him, he startd to fire at the terrorists
furiously. Already Shree and Chotu took out all the kids and She helpd the kids
to get out of there. Suddenly She saw a guy was going to hit Arjun.


Arjun heard her scream,
he turnd and saw, she was hurt...her hand was bleeding! Arjun caught that man
and startd to beat him...black and blue! He was literally shaking with rage!


The back up team arrived
and capturd all the bad guy, but Arjun was still bitting that guy! Rathod had
to literally drag Arjun to stop. 'Chodo Rathod mujhe, isska himmat kaise hui
ussko hurt karne ki?' Everyone was shockd!

'Chotu, kya ye sachchi me ho raha hai, ya phir mera vwhem hai?' Shree whisperd to Chotu.

Arjun rushd towards her, 'Tum thik ho?'


That was the 1st time
she saw his eyes so closely. It was showing some other emotions at that moment,
she could feel a different kind of concern! At that moment, he was not only a
police officer.


Every one present there
was shockd, again!! ACP Arjun was such concern... for a girl!???


Arjun didn't waste a secoend anymore, he didn't care about anyone,,,,,,,,,,what they think or not, he just lifted her in his arms and rushd towards the peramedic team!

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Phew...! 1st part done! But I'm confused...kuch aur parts likhu, ya ek aur part me hi khatam kar du? Plz, comment yaaron, and tell me...should I continue or not.😊








PART 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3568387/os-namak-last-part-page-6-9-5?pn=3


PART 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3568387/os-namak-last-part-page-6-9-5?pn=6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the start!!plz continue soon šŸ˜›
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Awesome.
The girl should be riya rite.
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Awesome...continue soon 😊
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wonderful start please continue soon
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amazing OS :) loved it
looking forward to read more
please continue soon
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Nice start DQ
jalidi update karo..
Tum ne aate hi acp arjun khone lage.
Nt bad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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namak wala chai...ok try krna padega...

nice os...woh ladki kahin roshni to nahi?

update soon
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Wonderful and beautiful concept...
Loving it.
Please continue.
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Nyc start dear
title was so gud
whos d girl ?
lolz sam bro
aww arjun bro!!

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