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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
if this is wat u call boring
thn i'll love to read such boring stuff everyday

stupid
it ws wonderful

i toh dil se loved it...
thnx fr such a beautiful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
namak wala chai😲 miss namak hehe🤣🤣🤣
lovely updates
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
wow..
Great updates dear..
So girl is riya...
Arjun was talking her lyk teenage boy.. Lol.
Nd arjun proposes her... Wow..
Bt wht does dat mean in the end when ri askd k namak wlai chai kis k liye.???? :p continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
superb update...!!!!
yayy the girl is non other than riya...!!!!
awww loved how arjun followed her and knew her routine...!!!!
finally he proposed...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Mujhe bhi namak bali chai chahiyeee sweetiii...
its so wanderfuly written..
waoo kya style hai arjun rawre ka perpose kerne ka..
lv the way arjun first fall in lv...
i pv u dr for making it on ariya...
i m hilding my breath when she says her name riyaaa ..
ohhh so sweet..
heyyy dont be end sooo soon i wanna more plz think one time..
irs realy interesting...
waoo my fav scence when he lift her in his arms..
lolll ufff plzzz update soon cant wait to read more...

poor riya feel bad but im mor happy..arjun jo hai uske pass...
update soon dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Assala mu alaikum! I'm here again…..with the last part. Matlaab iss torture se aap sab logon ka mukti!

LAST PART

Riya: ye,,,,Namak wala chaai kiss ke liye??

Arjun was little bit of surprised….. 'Kyun, tum nehi jante kya?' he asked. But Riya was silently looking at him. So he continud, 'Kyun, tumhari liye!'

Then he startd to tell her the whole story of him……'Tumhe pata hai, issi caf me maine pehli baar tumhe dekha. Ya phir yun kahu ke pehli bar tumhari awaz suna jab tum tumhara wo Namak wala chai order kar rahi thi. Maine wo suna, aur mujhe laga aare wah, ye kaun hai itni anokhi test wali! Taab hi pehli bar maine tumhari iss khubsurat chehra dekha…… and the rest is history!'

All the while, Riya didn't say anything, or it'll be better to say that she didn't get any chance to say anything! She was now just looking at him with moist eyes…

In the mean time, the caf boy came with 2 cups of tea. He asked, 'Sir, ye Namak wala chai…'

'Mere liye…' came Riya's sweet voice. She took the cup so lovingly and startd to drink the tea…… The Namak wala chai!

It's said that, God does everything on a definite purpose. May be, that day Riya's marriage couldn't take place, becaz her fate was entwined with the real prince charming of her dream……Arjun!

Arjun fulfilld her dream of a total Bangali style marriage…. And they jumped into the ocean of happiness…..together!

~~~~At the day of 40th wedding anniversary of ArIya~~~~

Evening time. Riya had brought 2 cups of tea and placed the tray on the table. Arjun came forward, took a cup. He only took a sip frm the cup and…….'Yaak….!! Riya…… ye tumhari Namak wali chai….'

Riya: haa…haa….haa……! Aap bhi na….abhi taak ye Namak wali chai pine ka aadat nehi daal saka!

Arjun: mujhe nehi banana aise aadat…. Tum ye kaise peeti ho?

Riya just came forward, took the cup frm Arjun's hand and started to drink it.

Riya: aapke pyaar jo hai iss me!

Arjun: Mrs Namak……. Matlab kya hai aapka?

Riya: chodo, aap nehi samjho ge!

And they startd their regular chit-chat……even argued for nothing! Then in a spar of a secnd, they again startd to laugh and talk! Life was beautiful…..!

At night, Riya kept her head on Arjun's chest.

Arjun: kya hua… Riyu….

Riya: kuch nehi…..bass, kuch ajeeb feeling ho raha hai…

Arjun: kyun, tabiyat thik nehi lag raha hai? Doctor bulau?

He panickd.

Riya: aare nehi….aap bass mere pas rahiye.

That was the last word of Riya…..her wish to be near with Arjun…..till her last breath…..had fulfilld!

Because, next morning, when Arjun woke up frm his sleep, he tried to wake her up. But she never opend her eyes….caz she had gone to the world, frm where, nobody returns….ever!

Some days after Riya's death. Arjun opend her cupboard. He took her sarees one by one and huggd them……to smell her scent, to feel her…..

Suddenly, a paper fall frm the pile of her saree. He took the paper and opend it. It was a letter frm Riya, adressd to him!

'''Dear Arjun,

Aakhir bhagwan ne meri ye khwahish pura kar hi diya! Unnke pas meri ek hi khwahish tha……Kyun ke meri zindegi ke saare khwahishe to apne pura kar di. Bhagwan ke pas mai sirf ek hi cheez mangti thi, aur wo hai- aapke suhagan rehte hue, aap ke baho me mai aakhri dam todna chahti hu!

Yehi tha meri wo khwahish jo mai hamesha bhagwan ji ke pas mangti thi…. Par kabhi apko nehi batayi. Agar aapko kehti, to aap to chilla chilla ke meri pyari si ghar ke saari glass tod dete! Achchi tarha se pehchanti hu aapko!

Mujhe pata tha ke meri jaane ke baad aap meri cupboard zarur kholenge. Iss waqt aap meri saari ya pakadkar baithe hai……hai na? Issi liye ye letter mai yaha chodi…

Khair, iss waqt aapko mai meri zindegi ka wo ek raaz batane jaa rahi hu, jo raaz mai apko kabhi na bata saki. Ye ek hi raaz hai, jo mai aapko meri jite ji na keh saki…….aur baki mai to aapke liye ek khuli kitaab!

Arjun, sach to ye hai ke mai shadi se pehle Namak wala chai nehi peeti thi! Jis din apne mujhe order karte hue suna tha, asal me uss din mai meri ek collegue ke sath shart har gayi thi. Aur wo mujhe kahi thi ke mujhe Namak wala chai peena padega. Kyun ke ek din maine use kahi thi ke, mere liye sabse khatarnak beverage hai Namak wala chai! Aur uss din aap mujhe wahi order karte hue sun liya aur………hamari kahani ke shuruath hua!

Jiss din aap mujhe propose kiya tha, uss din jab aap mujhse ye kaha, tab mujhe samajh nehi aa rahi thi ke mai aapse kya kahu! Phir maine socha, ye Namak wala chai hai humare dono ka pyar ke shuriath ka ehsaas…….mai aapko kaise keh sakthi ke ye baat sehi nehi hai…..ke mai Namak wala chai nehi peeta?

Issi liye mai uss din tey kar liya,, ke mai iss baat ko jhoot nehi rehne dungi…..iss ko mai sach me badal dungi! Aur meri aakhri dam tak, wahi meri zindegi ka sabse bada sach tha!

Arjun, agar dusra mauka mila…..aagli janam me, balki meri haar janam me mai issi tarha aap ke pyar me Namak wala chaai peena chahti hu! Kya aap mujhe chunenge……aap ke jeevan sathi ke roop me?

……….….Aapke Mrs Namak……''''

******FLASHBACK ENDS*******

At the caf shop---

Arjun's Namak wala chai had already arrived on his table. A loan tear drop escaped frm the corner of his eyes…. But before he could controll it, the tear drop had already fallen in the tea cup…………Increasing the amount of 'Namak' in the 'NAMAK wala chai'…………..

Here, the story ends…….. Frnds, actually I'm little bit of confused about your reactions. Good/Bad, anything…….. But Please…………comment!


Love you all

----Sabia Khan.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
aww...that was so sweet...riyu's letter...and the history of namak wala chai...

loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Yipee lov it
fb was wow..
superb os!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Waooo dr such a beautuful os..
lv the whole story..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow this is so touchy yaar... beautiful

u really meak me cry...

this namak base ariya story is mind-blowing

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