OS: Namak...Last Part(page 6)- (9/5)

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awesome...

ariya aur namak wala chai...

aise stories likhna zaroor...

lykd it a lot...😃

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

in actual no words for such super work 😊

the letter was so emotional 😭

it reflects that true love always win 😊

IN ACTUAL I'LL NEVER FORGET THIS NAMAK WALI CHAI IN MY WHOLE LIFE ❤️

plz dear write some more on ariya

u r one of awesome writers 😊

at last thnx for such wonderful update 😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey... Read it all in one go..

This was soo beautiful and heart-warming!!

Just goes on to show the things we do for our loved ones..

You must write more soon dear.. Really loved reading it.. 😃

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

hi sabia🤗... ur namak wala chai was awesome...n only riya can drink it...n the way riya drink it everyday despite of the taste which proved her love for arjun😃😃😃😃😃😃... flashback scene was awesomely witten...riya went...n her last wish fulfilled😃😃😃😃😃😃...but now arjun is alone😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...will miss namak wala chai😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

lovely os
riya's letter was awesome
after reading that letter arjun also started to drink namak wala chai
how sweet of ariya
it was sad & heart touching... loved it

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Beautifuly written dr..
mujhe laga he tha,
namak bali chai ke pichhe koe na koe raj hoga..
how sweet she..
its good story but last..
mera arjun akela reh gaya yr..so imotional n heart touching..
n the scence when drop fall on rhe tea its realy imotional one ..
thank for the lvly story..

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awww...!!! such a sweet and lovely update...!!!!

it was really emotional...!!! beautifully written...!!!

the reason behind that namak wali chai and then riya's regular taking that namak wala chai was just❤️

loved the story...!!!!

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Bhavika

@its-bk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Awesome one buddy!

Loved it to bits.

Thanks for the PM.

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

very lovely OS😊

I didnt know people also drank Namak wala chai😆

Anyway Riya is apart afterall😳

That was a very fast love story, they fell in love without much words or communication, except through their eyes, how romantic😳

And finally Riya died first, however she left Arjun behind, but at least her wish was granted...

Awesome OS🤗

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: haruhi26
very lovely OS😊
I didnt know people also drank Namak wala chai😆
Anyway Riya is apart afterall😳
That was a very fast love story, they fell in love without much words or communication, except through their eyes, how romantic😳
And finally Riya died first, however she left Arjun behind, but at least her wish was granted...
Awesome OS🤗

Yeah, Aapi...my Nani used to drink Namak wala chaai. Though it seems weird for the other's, but she loved to drink that.

She's no more Aapi... I couldn't help but remember her that beautiful face whenever I hear the word 'Namak wala chai'.

So, yeah...not only Arjun in my story, but also myself have a memory attouchd with the word 'Namak wala chai'...