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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Wow!!

Nagma is so sweet... Loved the part...

That SIK... Yucks!! He cant be more sicker... HUH!!!

Nice part...

Continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
superbbb!!!..

arghhh.. 😡 😡 😡

poor shiryaaa!!

rathod ki behan???? !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Wow loved it
Hated abdul
Arjun is tooo gud
Update soon
Cant wyt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
16 saal ki ladki ke saath...uff i so want to rip that sik apart😡

thnk god shree is ok...

arjun kill that asshole right now...disgusting parasite.

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
this gonna be last part of this SS..
myself and payal di are quiet disappointed with the response we got...
direct to just 10 likes from 33...
we are really disappointed...
but we thank those who have liked and commented for this story... thanks friends...🤗
we had planned to post this in two parts but since soo pheeka response, we thought of posting it and finish it once for all...
sorry if disappointed you but, this is what the story had, intense emotional drama, and we did our best... thanks guys...
last part:DUA
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It was two days she was given food. She was very weak...

But she never opened her mouth.

It was two days she knew her brother was searching for her. two days she had left all hopes to live... uski bas uss waqt bhi ek hi dua tha... Arjun ki salaamati.

Arjun was livid when he received the news of roshni being abducted from her school..

two days it was as if he was seated on hot pan.

He never knew who kidnapped her. But knew that he could not open his mouth nor move out to search her. He was feeling like a caged lion.

Next day, He had something to speak to sikander so he went to his chambers. He was then directed to move to a cell at the basement.

His heart pounded hard against his chest... fear gripping his entire being. He found it difficult even to lift a leg and move further.

As he neared the cell, he heard loud voices from inside.

"BOL... KYA PLAN HAI UN LOGON KA... TU TO USKI BEHAN HAI NA?!! TO BATA...HUMARE SAATH GADDARI KAUN KAR RAHA HAI..."

*slap*

"aah...main nahin jaanti... wo kaam ke baare mein mujhse baat nahin karte. Agar karte bhi to main tumhe nahin bataungi... kabhi nahin..."

*slap**slap*

Arjun froze outside hearing roshni's voice. It was because of him she is in trouble. It was because he was passing information to team they were able to diffuse two bombs and now roshni was here as captive...

He slowly walked to the cell and what he saw there made his breath stop for a second.

His love, his wife sat there pale, tired...red marks on her cheek and hands. Hair disheveled. His heart cried in pain and aginy. But there was nothing he could do now. his work, his nation came first to him... everything else was secondary...

He composed himself and went in said something in sikander's ears.

Sikander screamed at no one in particular.

"KYA???? YE KAISE HO SAKTA HAI???? YE 3RD BOMB HAI JO ETF KE HAATH LAGA HAI!!!!! Kaun hai wo..."

He knelt on ground and grabbed her hair and asked her

"bata de roshni ki kaun hai wo jo tumhare bhai ki madad kar raha hai???? BOL..."

"bhaijaan iss waqt uss ladki se zyada hume hamare mission pe dhyaan dena chahiye... aap filhaal ke liye chaliye" aaqif pulled a frustrated sikander out.

He glanced over his shoulder to see her crying...

*****************

Every day they would torture her...beat her... would not give her food... all just to make her open her mouth. Everyone laughed at her helplessness and Arjun fisted his hand tight controlling himself from not killing each one of them.

*****************

It was third day evening that Arjun went to roshni.

He went alone to meet her

"aap...yahan kaise???" roshni asked in strained voice..

"meri chodo roshni...par tum...tumhara ye haal? Aur tumne mujhe pehchana kaise?"

"pyaar karti hun aapse... aap chahe kaise bhi mere saamne aaye... main aapko pehchaan sakti hun...aap apne desh ke liye itna kaam karte hai, apni jaan ki baazi laga sakte hai to main kyun nahin?? Aapki identity main reveal nahin karungi Arjun..."

Suddenly he heard some voice and he left her and stood far and raised his voice

"tum bata kyun nahin deti hume ki tumhare bhai ne kise bheja hai??? Bata dogi to zinda to rahogi tum..."

"main kuch nahin jaanti naahi main kuch bataungi... mere liye mere bhai ke liye ye desh hi sabkuch hai samjhe tum..."

*slap* Arjun slapped her across the face keeping a stone on his heart.

He had seen sikander at the entrance and acted fast.

He grabbed her hair and jerked her forward

"batado warna..."

"warna kya huh??? Warna kya???"

"mein teri..."

He raised his hand but was stopped by sikander.

"aaqif. Tum in sab ko chodo. Chalo mere saath."

**********************

Roshni was tortured day and night but she never revealed the identity of Arjun or her brother's plans.

It was night time...

Arjun and rehman were sitting on terrace

"wo ACP ki behan ko maan na padega ji.. kitni himmat wali hai wo. Itna torture seh kar bhi muh nahin khola usne...aap to jaante honge na usse?"

"wo meri patni hai rehman..."he sighed.

Rehman was shocked initially but soon recovered with a smile

"mujhe ye sochna chahiye tha saab... dekhte hi pata chal jana chahiye tha ki itni himmat to ACP Arjun ki biwi ke alawa kisi aur ke paas kaise ho sakta hai???"

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It was 5th day she was kidnapped and Arjun was given task to make her open her mouth.

He went to her and looked at her apologetically.

He then slowly bent to her level and said

"roshni, bata do. Itne din hogaye hai. Dekho hum tumhare bhale ke liye keh rahe hai... bata do ki kya plan banaya hai tumhare bhai ne??? bata do..." *slap across her face*

His eyes had unshed tears for hurting her... he wanted to kill himself but lives of 1000's was more important than him and her.

He grabbed her hair and pulled her up making her stand on her feet.

"aaah...main kuch nahin kahungi... main kuch nahin kahungi..."

"aaqif... ye lo aur daal do chehre pe..."

Arjun was horrified to see acid bottle in his hand.

He simply took it and threatened her

"dekho isse tum jal jaogi...bata do..."

He opened the stopper and saw roshni.

She was afraid...afraid of her own husband... all the tortures she endured was taking toll on her. Arjun just dropped a single drop on her foot which burned her skin made her scream in anguish.

Arjun himself could not see her in pain. His heart bled.

"aaahhh...nahin...mat daalo...main batati hun...ye aapka aaqif koi aur nahin ACP ARjun hai...mere pati..." she started crying.

Sikander and Arjun were both shocked.

"I am sorry Arjun...i am sorry..."

Arjun could not believe that his own wife blew his cover into ashes.

Sikander was deceived. That was the last blow.

He went ahead and grabbed her

"kya kaha tumne??"

"sach hai...ye Arjun hai aaqif nahin."

He slapped her and she fell on ground. Sikander grabbed stunned Arjun and hurled him to the nearest wall with all force.

"tu ne mere saath gaddari ki hai aaqif...mere saath...chota bhai maana maine tumhe aur tum..."

"desh ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hun sikander. Kehte hai na waqt aane par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai...maine wahi kiya..."

Sikander took out his gun and banged its rear into arjun's head making him unconscious.

"roshni ko le jao... wo mere almairah se naya bomb nikalo aur isse baandh do.. main aa raha hun..."

Soon roshni was strapped with a time bomb and was taken away by sikander to a crowded place in delhi.

Not after long Arjun regained his senses and saw himself in a room, free but many people around.

He easily took them down and marched out. He saw rehman dead near the entrance of the building and something written near him in blood. He took the revolver from rehman's body and ran out.

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Sikander reached with roshni and saw Arjun on bike after him.

Roshni fiddled with the bomb strap making him to warn her not to remove it or it would blast then and there itself.

Arjun spotted them in the crowd and escaped from few bullets shot by sikander. He shot one aiming sikander and it directly hit his chest. Sikander fell on ground groaning in pain and Arjun took his position behind the wheels.

He called ETF using sikander's phone and informed their position.

He drove to an isolated place and stopped the car. He shot sikander once again and pulled roshni out.

He knew he would be able to deactivate the bomb in minutes. But one look at the bomb and his hopes crumbled. He had never seen anything that complicated. He was never taught by sikander anything about that bomb.

He glanced sikander at and saw him smirking

"suna hai aaqif...urf Arjun...student chahe jitna bhi hoshiyar ho par teacher usse ek daav kabhi nahin sikhata...tabhi to usse teacher kehte hai..." he laughed a maniac laugh and Arjun gave him a tight punch. He again tried to deactivate the bomb but saw its time racing. He just had 4 minutes in hand and no bomb squad would be able to help them. he saw ETF members running towards them and he quickly made roshni sit in car and pushed sikander in and he took position behind wheels.

He started the wheels much to horror of ETF members. He called sameer and said

"sameer...aaj mera aur tumhara saath khatm hua...sorry main roshni ko bhi nahin baccha pa raha hun... ho sake to maaf kardo hume...jaate jaate sikander ko bhi hum saath le jaa rahe hai...usse jeene koi haq nahin hai...alvida..."

"tum mere saah ho na roshni??"

"hamesha..meri wajah se ye sab hua hai...agar main na batati to shayad...ab main aapke saath hun..ab bas yahin dua thi meri ki aapke saath jiyu aur aapke saath hi maru aur desh ke kaam aau"

ETF members watch stood stunned...

The car in which Arjun, roshni and sikander were seated blew just few 10 meters ahead...they were helpless...

The car burned, flames reaching sky, ash and carcasses all around...

Their dear ones were gone for ever, leaving them, sacrificed their lives for the country and destroying evil.

They watched helplessly the remissions of car, burning...

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Kisse poochoon
Hai aisa kyun
Bezubaan sa yeh jahaan hai
Khushi ke pal..kahan dhoondhoon
Benishaan sa waqt hi yahan hai
Jaane kitne lub pe giley hai
Zindagi se kai faasley hai
Ussey jeete hai sapne kyun aankhon mein
Lakeerein chootey jab inn haathon se
Bewajah
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Saanson ne kaha rookh modh liya
Koi raah nazar mein na aaye
Dhadhkan ne kaha dil chodh diya
Kahan chodey inn jismon ke saaye
Yahi baar baar sochta hoon
Tanha main yahan
Mere saath saath chal raha hai
Yaadon ka dhuaan
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Jo bheji thi duaa..
Bheji thi dua
Bheji thi dua
Bheji thi dua
Bheji thi dua

*******************************

The loss was immense...

Their memories haunted them every second.

The blast had made a big news in media and ACP Arjun and his wife were praised for their sacrifice.

Entire team sat in the award function to receive the bravery award given to ACP Arjun for the mission, saving hundred's of life and sacrificing himself for nation.

ACP sameer Rathod took the award and said

"un donon ki yaadein hamesha humare dil mein taaza rahengi... humari bas itni dua hai ki jahan bhi wo hai sukoon se rahe..."

He wiped his tears and made his way to other team members who were in no better state.


*****
THE END
i am not sending any pms for this...

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Pari dear congo 🤗
Thank u so much sweetheart 🤗
@all whoever read dis
thank u so much for bearing us
frm my side dats all
i m personaly very upset by d sudden decrease!!
well thank u fr ur valuable time
i m never gng to write anything fr sure
n pari all d best dear 🤗
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Pari dear
i hv given u idea
bt ur writing was read wrthing!!
love u dear fr fulfiling my dream
d end was just made me left crying i m serious
@sry anyone if i hurt anyone
bt i m very much upset
pari love u 🤗
Thanx fr write beautifuly
hats off to u dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Pari dear congo 🤗
Thank u so much sweetheart 🤗
@all whoever read dis
thank u so much for bearing us
frm my side dats all
i m personaly very upset by d sudden decrease!!
well thank u fr ur valuable time
i m never gng to write anything fr sure
n pari all d best dear 🤗


Originally posted by: Payal_156

Pari dear
i hv given u idea
bt ur writing was read wrthing!!
love u dear fr fulfiling my dream
d end was just made me left crying i m serious
@sry anyone if i hurt anyone
bt i m very much upset
pari love u 🤗
Thanx fr write beautifuly
hats off to u dear!!



thanks di... but i ll bug you no matter what😉
even i thank all my readers...
thanks guys...
i know its exam season i wont say anything about that...
all the best to those writing exams...
... thanks again...
but di aap bura mat maano na... hum dono arjun ki behne hai...😉🤗🤗
didu aap ko bhi all the best...😊😊
Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
OMG!!

U brought tears n my eyes... Lovely...

The end was so fantastic... Loved it...

I would really want u to continue...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Pari its my pleasure to do something wid u re
after exams
all d best..
bt i never want my name in d wrk!!
love u
n we r arjun bro pankhas
claps again 🤗
Enjoy n never forget me
samjhi ya samjhau..
tightly hugs n kiss on ur foreahed
thank u fr tolerating me lol
gn sd tc..!!

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