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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
great update :) loved it
etf team as criminals 😆
arjun ran away from police and riya came to save him 😆
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
totally twisted story masala mirch ke sath.
Arjun jail se bagh gaya.
Chor hote hue bhi bacha ke jaan bachai. Kya chor hai.
Chor ho to aisa.
Update soon.
Pm karna mat bhulna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
wow!!!!
nice concept once again!!!
tables are turned now,so ETF people are bad...!!!!
wow!!!!
will be waiting for the futures updates!!!!:)
all the best for ur exams!!!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

wow!!!!

nice concept once again!!!
tables are turned now,so ETF people are bad...!!!!
wow!!!!
will be waiting for the futures updates!!!!:)
all the best for ur exams!!!!:)

thanx dr 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Wj.mad

totally twisted story masala mirch ke sath.
Arjun jail se bagh gaya.
Chor hote hue bhi bacha ke jaan bachai. Kya chor hai.
Chor ho to aisa.
Update soon.
Pm karna mat bhulna

jarur kr dungi
and thanx 4 tht cmmnt😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
thanx dr 4 cmmnt and like
i will update today nd i hope u all like it 😉
Edited by Jass_k5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
part -2
thanx 4 all lovely cmmnt which is very valuable 4 me love u all
so next part strt krtai hai
they reach in village which is the part of brazil
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she stop the car.nd said to shanki
RIYA-tht is the place
SHANKI-ys riya
(vo teno car sai utratai hai riya hug to arjun )
RIYA-i miss u jaan
ARJUN-i miss u 2 my jaan
(nd he broke hug aand ask to riya)
ARJUN-yeh konsi jaga hai jaan
RIYA-yeha pr arav nai hmai bulaya hai
ARJUN-yeh jaga mili usay
(charo or gher gher thay shanki agai jata hai aur ariya usk pishay
vo stairs sai uper jatai hai kae khatnak man hatiyar k sath unko dekh rhai hotai hai one man inform sm1)
MAN-vo uper aa rhai hai
(all men unko gher latai hai)
ARJUN-mujhai koe gadhbadh lag rhe hai nikltai hai yaha sai
(sm1 calling riya)
BOY-roko!roko!frnds mai inko janta hoon.
(yeh sun kr sabhi pishai ho jatai hai aur dusri taraf chalay jatai hai)
RIYA-aarav...
(arav hug riya)
AARAV-kaise ho?chalo merai sath chalo
aarav arjun ko dekhta hai or kehta hai
AARAV-yr tum to famous ho gay tv pr tumari khaber aa rhe hai yr me aarav riya ka frnd only
ARJUN-thanx time pr aanai k lea
(vo sabhi ek gher mai jatai hai yaha pr uski biwi or uska baby hota hai)
RIYA 2 AARAV-yeh to roshni hai
AARAV-ys swt hrt
(she hug roshni after smetime k baad vo dinner krtai hai roshni ask 2 aarav )
ROSHNI-yeh yahi rhaigai
AARAV-ys
after cmplt dinner
(riya help to roshni and on the other hand arjun,shanki and aarav discuss smthing)
ARJUN-yaha brazil mai q aa gay
AARAV-qki tumnai ally mai sab kush khatam kr diya tha yaha roshni na hoti to mai bhatkta hota
ya mar gaya hota dosti to tumnai ash nibhae
SHANKI-tum jantai ho ik-dusray ko
AARAV-ys
(then riya join them)
AARAV-ek ashi dikati hai 4-5 expensive cars hm chora saktai hai boss apni ik team ko bhejaiga
uski hm help kraigai or yaha pr ghadia bikti hai or moti kimat hasil kr lagai
ARJUN-mai kush nahi keh sakta
AARAV-asan kam hai mujjai lagta tum dono ko paisay ki jarurat bhi hai
(they make plan 4 steal expensive cars)



PRECAP-sameer ki entry
steals the cars

sorry dr if it is boring nd bakvas
bt dil khol kr fhir bhi cmmnt kr den😉
qki vo bhut crucial 4 me yeh nahi hai cmmnt mai tarif burae bhi chlaigi
so jo dil mai aay cmmnt kr do

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
next part kal post krogi aap k view dekh kr thanx guys😊
mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
nice update..
So nw dey r planning to steal da cars..
Precap.. Sameer's entry.. Wow..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: aroojarain

nice update..
So nw dey r planning to steal da cars..
Precap.. Sameer's entry.. Wow..
Continue soon..

vo bhi batati ho w8 4 nxt dat dr
thanx 4 cmmnt

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