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Shanafr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Nice part sorry for late comment 👍🏼

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 12 years ago

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thanx dr u all cmmnt and like

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

so i am back my update i hope u enjoy it

AARAV-ek ashi dikati hai 4-5 expensive cars hm chora saktai hai boss apni ik team ko bhejaiga

uski hm help kraigai or yaha pr ghadia bikti hai or moti kimat hasil kr lagai

ARJUN-mai kush nahi keh sakta

AARAV-asan kam hai mujjai lagta tum dono ko paisay ki jarurat bhi hai

(they make plan 4 steal expensive cars)

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(note-jo aarav boss mention krta hai usko arjun sam and arav nahi jantai ok clear)

---arav ki baat sun kr riya arjun ko dekhti hai--

scene shift in train

(riya and arjun train mai hai riya magazine read kr rhe hoti hai usay dekh kr arjun pushta hai)

ARJUN-jaan kya kr rhe ho?

RIYA-bus vo place dhund rhe ho jaha hm safe ho aur shanti sai jewan bta sakai

(arjun us sai magzaine leta hai aur kehta hai)

ARJUN-hmmm goa in india,nagasaki in japan interesting...to jaan yaha chalnai ka plan hai...

(arjun kiss riya gently nd riya smile achanak vo ticket checker ko dekti hai)

RIYA-jaan kam shuru karo

(riya udhkr checker k pass jati hai aur arjun usk pishay hota hai aur jan-bhujh kr takra jati hai)

RIYA- sorry dr

(checker ki back arjun ki taraf hoti hai aur vo jaldi sai card jo checkr k pass hotta hai ik machine mai

swipe krta hai arjun riya ko signal pass krta hai)

RIYA-sorry sir

CHECKER- is ok

(riya agay jaati hai arjun pishay aata hai)

ARJUN-jalwo sai q ghahal krti ho

RIYA-jaan kam he aisa hai

(vo dono ik container k pass jaatay hai jis mai expensive cars hoti hai)

ARJUN ON PHONE-vo container mil gaya hai

--------on the other side-------------

ik container truck(hmrai yaha usko yehi kehtai hai)vry high speed mai train k tarf badh rha hai

jo puri koshish kr rha hai ki vo train ki speed k sath chalay

(arjun ik dusrai card ko swipe krta hai aur fir us container ko kholta hai

nd both see the cars which is superb and expensive riya went to one corner

where she saw the keys.)

RIYA-yeh keys pr slip kyu hai aur kya hai?

ARJUN-tht slip show tht it is under govt.

RIYA-ok

ARJUN ON PHONE -hmay cars mil gae hai pishay sai 2nd dabay mai

------on the other hand---------

truck container to hawao sai batai krta train k sath aa gaya aur train k sath tal mai tal

mila kr bhadnai lagai

(us truck ko train k 2nd dabay sai judhtay hai or machine sai uski shield kattai hai

arjun cars ki zanziro ko todhta hai truck sai 3 persons atay hai jis mai sai ik ko dekh kr

riya kush ho jati hai)

AARAV-dekho zara kon aya hai?

RIYA-ohhh suker hai tum thik ho

(she hug one person he kiss her 4head)

BOY TO ARJUN-tumai kaha tha yeh sab chudh do phir

ARJUN-paisay khatam ho rhay thay is lea

2nd person-apni bak bak band kro

sorry guys if i disturb you sorry 4 mistakes

it is bore or not

tell me conti.kro ya bak vas bhand kro

ager bore laga to apna opinion jarur likhia

bore kiya to choti si sis samjh kr maf krna😉

apki

mishti

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Renumehra

@Renumehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

nice concept... kuch toh alag hoga...

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

nice update

they don't know their boss yet

oh oh hope they won't get any trouble

cont soon

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

nice dear... waiting for more...😊

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nice part dear love it please cont soon 👏

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

nice update!!!!

aage kya hone wala hai????

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

superb...
Wo boss kaun hai aur wo 2nd person kaun hai.
Jaldi update karo.
Thanks for pm

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

fantastic update.

who is th boss?

is it sikander?

continue soon.

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