Ariya SS:-chor pai mor prt8 28pg 20/5 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
hello frnds i am back
jaisai don ko 14 mulko ki police dhund rhe hai pr inko puri world ki polce dund rhe hai😊
CHARACTER SKETCH
ARJUN -28 Year old ,handsome stunning personality {kya tarif kro uski words kam hai dr frnds😉} best frnd of sameer ,boyfrnd hai riya ka{koe shak😉}mind tez talvar ki tara hai ,shatir najar.most wanted list mai1st no per
SAMEER-29 yr old ,breathtaking and stirring personality.he is the best frnd f arjun nd brother f riya.chor gang ka master mind
RIYA-25 yr old charming nd dizzling girl she love 2 prsn in world 1st arjun nd 2nd her brother cmpter mai expert
SHREE-24 yr old cmpter jaisa dimag codes sai khelta hai,her loker ko palak jabhak kr khol leta hai frnd f sameer aisa insaan hai jo her safe loker ko minto mai khol sakta hai
CHOTU-29 yr old aisa insan hai yeh jo apni mithi mithi baato sai musibat sai nikal jata hai ffrnd f arjun
AISHA-27 yr old hathiyar or barood sai khelti hai khatrai to khud mol lete hai frnd f sameer
ROHAN-26 yr old frnd f sameer aisa insaan jo hr ik ki kundali khol deta hai koe info isk pass na ho aisa ho nahi sakta
MOST IMPORANT CHAR
SIKANDER-32 yr old brazil ka richest nd sucessful prsn he has lot f black money illegal kamo mai iska sab sai bhada hat hai janta ko apna gulam samjhta hai
so tell me hw u feel dil khol kr cmmnt kijia koe rokta nahi 😉i need ur opinion which is most imporant 4 me😊
nd sorry 4 mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
ohh wow..
Great nd unique idea..
Nice CS :)
waitng for update...
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Wahhh mishiii...
maja aa gaya...
toaly uniqqq...
update soon..
i lvddd cs...
update soon chotiii...
me waitinggg...
maja aa gaya..
updateee plzzz...
mishree thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Piyarani

Wahhh mishiii...
maja aa gaya...
toaly uniqqq...
update soon..
i lvddd cs...
update soon chotiii...
me waitinggg...
maja aa gaya..
updateee plzzz...

thanx dr i will i hope ist part padh kr maza our dugna ho jay
😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Interesting concept 😊
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
hey it looks excitng n compltly dffrnt.

lookng forwrd to it.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
amazing.😆... all are chor... mazaa ayega...continue ...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
super CS :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
thanx dr 4 lovely cmmnt and likes
rinku95, akanksha1371986, DesiiiDivaaa, RiMjHiM19, aroojarain, Piyarani, devildiva21, fatima15, DesiiiDivaaa
, Wj.mad, shona16, princess_pari, , zebbie,
mishree thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
hello frnds thanx 4 lovely cmmnt and like .ur cmmnt r most importand and crucial 4 me so bear me😉 i want to clear 1 thing
they r u indians

part 1
ik mujrim jail sai bike pr bhagta hai puri police usk pichai bhagti hai uski bike ki speed 120 pr hai
POLICEMAN-ruk jao tum bach nahi saktai STOP!STOP !😡
shot...shot...shot...[us ko goli nahi lagti]
MAN-mamu tumai kya lagta hai mai terai stop sai ruk jaoga [vo apni bike ki speed ko increase krta hai]
MAN TO HIMSELF-bus vo cross kr jao mai free ho in mamu lo sai
But unlucky bike k samnai baby aa jata hai usko bachanai k chaker mai bike unbalance ho jati hai or gir jata hai
police ki nazdik car anai say vo udhnai ki koshish krta hai pr jakham ki vajai sai udh nahi pata
MAN-aaj to mai gaya
police dekh kr kush hoti hai
PLICEMAN-ab aya bachu...
(vo line khatam krta us sai phelai ek car os man or police ki car ki bech mai rukti hai ik insaan niklta hai nikab posh mai or us
man ko udhta hai or gadhi mai dalta hai OR minto mai rafo chaker h jati hai gadhi)
POLICE-oh man (with dispntd voice sai)boss ko kya jawab daigay
ON THE OTER HAND
(man jakhmi hai pr vi apnai aap ko thik dekhta hai or dekhta hai ki car ko drive ek ladki kr rhe hai)
MAN-who r u?
(girl usko dekhti hai aor apna nikab utarti hai )
GIRL- bhul gay mere jaan
(man smile on her)
MAN-esa kabhi ho sakta hai ki apni jaan ko bhul jao
(eyes look hota hai tabhi 2nd person intrpt krta hai)
2nd prson-ek dujhai ko bad mai gurna phlai drive kro riya
RIYA -shetup shanki
ARJUN- shanki vaisai tum burkai mai bhut sunder lag rha hai
SHANKI-(with fake smile) thanku so much...
RIYA-tum thik ho arjun
SHANKI-abhi q pusha gher mai pushna
RIYA ND ARJUN-shetup shanki
AFTER LONG DRIVE [They reached in village which is part f brajil )


i know it is shot update sorry nd sorry mistakes 4 mistakes
i need ur opinion pls dil khol kr apni opinion do😊

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