HOLI OS:~Mere Rang Main Rangne Wali~(PG-1,3,5) *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ar-nahii,loker under ground hain,or uska door jaam ho gaya hai,or mujh akele se khul nahi raha hai..
kuch samjhe ya samjhayon,
looking toward sameer,
(Sameer understand that he is non other then Arjun his arjun,rathor nodded his head)
two goans goes inside with arjun n riya,
now only two goans is left,
rathor says somthing in chotu,
Chuto to goan-
Are mujhe imergency hai,mujhe ek minute ke liye bahar jana hai,
Go-kahi nahi jana jo emergency hai,yahi ker lo,
Ch-ye choti wali nahi badi baali hai,mera to kuch nahi jayega,per tumhen he problem ho jayegi,
~~
Finaly goan give him permision..
near toilet-chotu give one tight punch n the goan almost dead there..
on the other sameer handle that single goans..
~~
Inside commi house-
(arjun un do goans ke sath fight kerne main bussy hai,)
Sudenly one goan took his gun..n pointing toward arjun,
but arjun is bussy to deal with other goans,
Riya saw this--
she took her gun(vo gun goan ke the..)
n shoot that goans..
(She shouted arjun's name)
Ri-Arjunnn...
arjun hear the gun sound n her screemed,he imedeatly turned ti her side..
both heart beat stoped for that monent..

Her hand is almost shiverning ,she drooped her gun she didnt even breath,
if anythink happend to arjun,how culd she forgive herself,
(after two minute goans fall on the floor)
(arjun call her name)
Ar-Riyaaa( in concerned voice)
he run toward her n shak her body as he found no sing of life,
(But she didnt react)
Arjun hug her tightly by her strong arms,n hid her face in his chest..
Riyaa he riya sab thik hai dekho,
arjun feel she is shivring,n feel her cold body..
Arjun hug her even more tightly jus giv the wormth of his body..
After few miute when she feel his wormth touch..
when she feel he is ok..
She start crying..
Arjun was bit worride..
Ar-Riya(in soft voice)pathes her back
Shhh hh




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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Shhh
u r a polish officer or polish officer ho ker tum ro rahi hoo,
Riya say between sobing..
sir mare haanthon main khun laga hai, maine kise ke jaan le hai,ager main use nahi marti to vo aap ko maar dalta..or main..she culdnt complete her word..
Arjun tried to convince her ..its ok riya..tumne kise ke jaan nahi le,balki kae logon ke jaan bachaye hai..
Samjhe tum..ab ye bachhon ke taraha rona band karo,
She moved her hand behind his back n hug him tightly..
Just wanna to forget the moment..
that was happend few minute before,
Arjun bend his face litle close n rest on her shoulder..just wanna to give more comfort..
(Both face almost touches)
arjun lightly rub his face on her face ..n wishper his ears..
happy holi riya..
Ri-riya shly reply oer bina rang lagaye holi kaise wish ker sakte hai..
Kisane kaha ke maine tumhen rang nahi lagaya..
Arjun turned her face opposite side..there was one mirrior..(Arjun pointed toward n say)
riya wahan dekho,
(she saw her face covered with red color..the same red color jo arjun ke face per laga tha)
arjun turned her side n again hug her..n wishper..tum mere rang main rang chuki ho riya..
both lost each other arms..
unwhere the fact that whole etf n comisstion watching both..
rathor n ayesha just smiles
.
Trio wishper
Shree ti liza n chotu-dekh rahe ho dono kaise ek dusare ke bahon main khoye hain..
Ch-Haan shree or vahan hum un goans se lad rahe hai or riya or arjun sir..
Liza-haan yr ye dono to ek dusare ke bahon main khoyehoye hai.
Sh-bahon main nahi balki ek dusare ke rang main koe
huye hain...
THE ENDDD..
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SO HOW WAS THAT..
sorry for any error..kya karon bahoot bussy sedul hai aaj kal..
plz leav ur comment n hitt like button..
hop aliya ke chelange ko..kuch hud tak poora ker paye,
litle romence n case.

realy sorry if i bor with my
story



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice dear . Just loved the whole story . Please continue writting on ariya:)
Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome, loved the whole story!
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Aww lovely..jaldi jaldi padliye maine,pora update karne se pahele😆
awesome tha yaar..i loved it..ariya😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Oh it was so amazing
loved ariya
happy holi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Di maje aa gye
happy holi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Piya Di,it was really superb and beautiful.
I was imagining the whole scenario while reading the story.
Ending was great.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
i read it one go , Diii.awsome.thanx for pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awsum update yr...!!
mazze aagye...!!
ariya rang hi gye ek dusre ke rang mai...!!!😉 love the way he applied color on her face😉

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