HOLI OS:~Mere Rang Main Rangne Wali~(PG-1,3,5) *COMPLETED* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
just read both the parts...
awsum updates...
wow arjun riya in tub... apne sath sath arjun ko bhi rang mai gira hi diya... 😆
wow arjun ke shirts ke button open aur he picked riya in his arms cool...
omg hostage situation??
continue soon...eagerly waiting for the next part...
happy holi in advance...enjoyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
hi piya🤗...happy holi dear...😃😃😃😃... wow piya kya os likha hai...ariya scene fabulous hai😉😉😉😉😉😉😉...poor ree hamesha phas jaati hai... jaldi se update karo...😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
HAi Ariya scene was so hot
bechare Riya daant diya
the case is interesting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Great updates :) please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
fantastic OS :) loved it
riya and shree making fun of chotu 😆
chotu was busy in eating food 🤣
awww riya was missing arjun
ariya fell in the color water tub
riya holding his shirt :)
eyes to eyes romance 😆
poor shree thought ke his eyesight is getting more weak
he picked riya in his arms :)
eagerly waiting for last part
continue soon

Happy Holi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Fab update di
omg rofl sam modeling~!!!!!
aww etf ko holi bi ni mnane dete lol
happy holi di yay..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awesome update dr.

loved it so much.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
good going till now dear
read all together
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
PART=2B
"MERE RANG MAIN RANGNE WALI.."


SCENCE-
tum logon ko hamen dhundane ke koe jarorat nahi,bus tum hamari demand poori ker do ,hum khud ba khud yahan se chalen jayege..
few goans came n spread all over,
(un sab ke hathon main choti choti pistal the or face color se cover tha)
one goans to commissioner -
ye batao tum main se comi kon hai
(bez all face covered with color, n ariya to..)
.
before comissiomner could say..arjun told,
Ar-Main hoon,pr tum log kon ho..or hamse kya chahiye
.
(Riya n all shocked)
Ri-ye arjun sir kya kerna chahate hain,
Ra-ye rawte ke dimag main chal kya raha hai,
Commi-lata hai arjun ke dimag main koe plane hai..
Goans-Rana case main jitane bhi saboot tumne jama kiye hai,chup chap hamen laker de do,or sath main das karor rupaye..
varna yahan jitane bhi log,
holi ka maja lene aye hai,
vo apne he khun ke holi main rang jayenge,
Ar-vo file tumhen kabhi nahi milegi..
Go-sonch lo commi,en logon ke moot ke responsible tum hi hoge,
Ar-noo kuch maat kerna ,main tumhen vo file deta hoon,vo mere room main hai,
(arjun marched inside commisioner house n one goan poining gun n follow arjun)
rukiyeee..somone shout from behind..
all looks toward the voice, arjun n goans also turned,
it was riya..
Ar pov-ab es ladki ke kya problem hai,her baar mare kaam main tang adane ke jaise aadat se paad gaye hai eski..
Riya's pov-arjun sir aap hamesha ehsa kyun kerten hai,aap ko apni jaan ke phiker ho ya naa ho per koe hai,jise aapki phiker hai,
jiske her shubhaha(morning) le shuruat aapke salamati ke duya se hooti hai,

~~~
Goan-aab tu kon hai,or tujhe kya problem hai,lagta hai jine ka shok nahi raha,
Ri-Are aap mere bina loker kaise khol sakten hain,
aab loker ke keys to maine rakhi hain,kyun ji main thik keh rahi hoon,
(pointing her eyes toward arjun)
Go-how u kno ..?

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Ri-ager mujhe nahi pata hooga to kise pata hoga..
(she took step toward arjun)
kyun honey sahi kah rahi hoon na (hold arjun hand n say)
are enaki wife hoon or es gher ke head,yahan meri margi ke bagare kuch bhi nahi hota(arjun fuming with anger,ye riya aab ye kya natak hai,ager abhi react kiya to en longo ko shak ho jayega..)
~~
Ariya goes inside..leaving shocked comi n etf members..
Sh to liza-ye ri to aaj paka aaj marne vali hai,
Liza-haan specky ager goan se bachh bhi gaye to arjun sir se pakka maari jayegi..
~~
INSIDE COMISSIONER HOUSE-
Goan -kahan hai loker ,or vo file..
Ar-etani bhi kya jaldy hai,
(the goan is alone arjun took that advantage)
giv two three punch n the goan is almost died,
(arjun exchane is cloths with goans n in between riya stood outside)
after ten minute-
Ri to arjun-sir ab aap kya karne vale hain,or aapne aapne kapde kyun change kiye hai,but arjun dont reply..
Riya again ask the same Q,which irretate arjun more,
arjun hold her tightly by her shoulder almost shaking his body,
Ar-akhir tumhare problem kya hai,Jab dekho mere kaam or meri personal life main interfare kerti rehati hoo,
Ri-Ahh sir u hurting me,
Ar-me hurting u me,tightend his grip more,door raho mujhse door,mujhe vo log bilkul pasad nahi jo meri life main interefare kareten hain,
Riya's eyes gets moised..she look him with moised eyes,
One drop fall on her face,
(Arjun remove his hold n turned his face, n say)
lets go hamen bahar jaana hai,berna goans ko hum per shak ho jayega,
riya wiped her tears n nodded in yes,
(but befor leaving out arjun searches somthing in room..N finaly he found that,it was color plate)
arjun took that plate n aply some color on his face,now his all face covered with color,
After twenty minute both comes out,
(goan arjun ko apna he sathi samajhate hain)
Gona to Ar-file mili ya nahi


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