HOLI OS:~Mere Rang Main Rangne Wali~(PG-1,3,5) *COMPLETED*

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Aaliya....

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Superb precap!
Its very good rani..jaldi continue karo..:)

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesum di
precap int
very gud title..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Upsss thoda jaya bada ho raha to to esako bhi two part main divide ker diya..
not complustion to any one..
jiska man ho vo pado..
bura na maniooo holi haiii..
so bardash ker sakte ho to ker lena..,,

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART=2A
"MERE RANA MAIN RANGANE VALI..
"

SCENCE-
he didn't notice her n she to,
Riya udane ke koshish kerti hai but she slipt
(n suport ke liye kuch pakadane ke koshish kerti hai)So by mistake she hold
his shirt ,
her hand almost touch his bare chest,
sudden touch of bare skin sending a vibration in her body,
Man wiped water on his face,n try to remove her hold,
(In this prossess he touched her soft hand n when he
touched her hand its conformed she is girl try to saw who is she)
riya also feel his rough bare chest its conformed that he is man but who..?
she hold his shirt tightly n manage to look up..
Finaly both looks each other,
Tum..Aap..
Both looks each other eyes..
They share a beautiful eyes look..
Ar-Hud hoti hai lapervahi ke jab dekho bachpana..
Ri-realy sorry sir vo maine jaan bujh ker nahi kiya,vo shree or liza mujhe rang lagana chahate they,to main to bu...s..
again looks his brown eyes..
Riya holding his shirt n arjun hold her hand
(didnt notice liza n shree both notice this)
Sh to liza-dekh rahi ho arjun sir or riya ka eyes to eyes romence,
Liza-humm vo to dikh raha hai mujhe spekcy..tumhare tarah chaar ankhen nahi hain mere..
~~
(arjun moved his other hand on his hair try to avoid riya)
Ar-ager tumhara ghurana band ho gaya ho,To meri shirt chodogi,
riya feel shly (her face changed red )
she lower her graze,n remove her hold..
(due to this she again slept,so she try to hold his shirt again in this prosess arjun all shirt button is open )
but before she fall inside water, arjun hold her imedeatly by her waist n pulled her toward him,she hits his brare chest ,
unkoningly her hand moving his back,n hug him tightly...
~~
(LOL)shree n liza both shocked..
liza hits his sholder,hey spekcy main vahi dekh rahi hoon jo tum dekh rahe ho,

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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(moved his head unveliveble n start to clean his specks)
Sh-kuch keh nahi sakta ,lagya hai mari ankhon ka no badne vala hai,
Riya to aaj gaye samjho..
~~

Arjun (bit angrly almost shouted, focused all atentention toward them)
Ar-riyaaa what r u doing ,just leav me,ye kya ker rahi ho tum,
now rathor,ayesha,comii n all gest also watching all this,
riya parted that hug,
(when riya hug him,that time arjun controlled his best ..to dont loose his control)
Arjun manage to get up ,riya wanna to get up but arjun stoped,
Ar-ager phir se phisalgaye to mujhe koe interest nahi,tumhare sath dobara pani main girane ka,
samjhe ya samjhayon saying this he lift riya in his arms
n comes out the water tub..
~~
Stil holding riya in his arms..
riya shly smiles ,looking his face n say thank to god..
Ri-(in mind)arjun sir ko bhi meri care hai per vo dekhate nahi,per aaj to sabke samne..
what sabke samne..??
she lift her head here n there n found all watching them ..n somone smile n wishpering somthing on them..
(Riya feel imberrenced)
Ri-Sir plz mujhe niche utariye sab dekh rahe haii..

~~~
Tabi sab kise ke chilane ke avaj sunte hai,
Are koe dekho us aadami ko kya ho gaya,
arjun imedeatly droop riya on the ground,
all peple n etf run toward the voice n arjun to,
(Rathore n arjun pehale pahunchate hai)
there was one man lying on ground..
Arjun touched his neck n found he is dead,
Ra-Door rahiye sab yahan se,yahan ek marder ho gaya hai,or katil aap sab main se koe hai,
Chotu sari security bada do,main gate ko bund kerva do taki koe yahan se bahar na jaa sake,
arjun moved her head here n there to recognised the area..
He wanna to say somthing to rathor but rathor spok first
Ra-modling baad main ker lena ,pehale case solve ker lete hain,
to behtar hoga Pehale apne shirt ke button band ker loo
Liza-Sir boby ko dekh ker .

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Raha hai jaise,ese kise ne jaher deker mara hai,
Ayesha-Eska matalab khane ke koe chij..
Ch-per ehsa kaise ho sakta hai,maine to sarakhana test kiya hai,eska matlab main bhi marne vala hoon,
Ra-ohh shut up chotu..
hum sab. me kuch na kuch khaya piya hai,ager khane maim jaher hota,to hum sab bhi yahin pade hote,
shree n riya gigleddd n wishper slowly
Sh-bechara chotu,usane kabhi sapne main bhi nahi soncha hoga,jis khane se vo etana pyaar kerta hai,
ek din use ke vajaha se daan khane ko milegi..
Riyaaa main tujh se baat ker raha hoon or tera dhayan kahi or hai..tu thik to hai nai..
Shree lift his face the same direction..Ohh to ye baat hai,
Sh-wishper in riya's ears ..
ri tujhe nahi lagta aaj ke liye arjun sir ko ghurana kaphi ho gaya..
baad ka couse kal pura ker lena,verna tere samjhaye samjhayon samjhane baide jayenge..
~~
Liza-mujhe lagta hai poission colors me milaya gaya tha..or vo color lagane se es adami ke moot huye hai,
Ar to commi-Commi sir kya aap es adami ko jante hain,
Comii-are ye to hammara security gard shambhu hai,per esko kisae mara or kyun..
Ayesha-koe gard ko kyun marega sir,or vo bhi es tarah,
Ar-kuch to choot raha hai,
kuch to lena dena hai,
Ri-Sir statics ke hisab se jab koe aanjaan log gher main entry kerna chahte hoon,
to 78 cases main bechare gard ehse hi mare jaate hain,
Ar-tumne aapni statics ke theory phir se..but stop in mid,as he was thinking somthink,
Ar-yes ehsa ho sakta hai..
Eska matlab es function main kuch bina bulaye mehmaan bhi hai..
shree mujhe turant sare mehmanon ki list chhiye..
SH-Shree hand over list to arjun,
Chotu check fast kya es list ke alava koe or log bhi es function main shamil hain,
but befor chotu culd do..they heared one gun sound..
~~
tumhen hamen dhundane ke takleen leni ke koe jarorat nahi,
tum log hamri demand poori ker do
TBC-

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Last part(2b) kall likhungi dr..
gud nighttt..
n happy holi in advance...
pm late

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Beautiful update,Di.
Ariya romance was at its best.

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

nice start
omg arjun is in holi function
ariya fell on color water tub😳 lovely
cont soon

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

nice update
ariya romance superb
hehe he lift her in his arms😳 lovely
rathore's comment about modeling🤣 superb
there is a murder in holi function hostage demands
oops etf is not free even in holi function😲😆
nice... cont soon