Holi: Rang day mujhe apnay rang mei Pt 4 pg 9 2-04 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
wow..
Great OS dear ..
Frst ariya wala was so sweet..
Md raesha was awesome.. Bichara sma ayesha k kiun kiun se tang aa gaya... Lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: lovvinit

hey nice update.bichara sam. is aisha ki to. damn it. itne ache mauke par yeh aisha ne mud kharab kcntinue jaldi.ar ia. iski to.


my next part based on Shriza please wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: aroojarain

wow..
Great OS dear ..
Frst ariya wala was so sweet..
Md raesha was awesome.. Bichara sma ayesha k kiun kiun se tang aa gaya... Lol


abhi Ayesha nay saam ko tang kiya hai, ab liza Shree k sath kiya karti hai,
just wait
thanks for your comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: princess_pari

👏👏
lolz aisha...😆
kyun? kyun? kyun? inhe paani mat do. lolz... that was soo funny...
awesome continue soon...


thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Thanks you all for liking this part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Aisha's kyun? kyun?
Funny one..
Liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
great OS :) loved it
aisha was sitting in the middle of the road 😆
love the way aisha was behvaing
she is so adorable
poor rathore was so irritated by her kyun
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
hayee aisha was so cute...!!!!
road ke bheej mein baith jaana!!!!
ghar nahi jaana ka raat lagana...!!!
the pani puri was nice one!!😆😆
it was very sweet of sameer to take such a good care of her...!!😃
the last thought of aisha was good...!!!😊
waiting for ur next update:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
poor sam said kaha phas gaya haha
awesm dr
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
HOLI OS on Shriza

Shree try to control lIza but she is not under his control, He holds her tightly ..

Shree: Liza please control your self.

Liza: No Shree , dekho na kitna maza aa raha hai.

Shree: Liza ye road hai yahan par ye sab karna zarori hai kya.

Liza: nahi bikul nahi…

Shree: mujhe ye bottle do tum aur thandai nahi piyo ge

Liza: no Shree She start singing.

" Hum ka peeni hai peeni hai hum ka peeni hai."
Shree: Liza hum ghar par nahi hai please ye bottle mujhe do, pata nahi ye bottle tum sath kyun lay k aai ho.

Liza: " Barsat k mosam mei tanhai k aalam mei,

Mei ghar say nikal aaya bottle bhi utha laya,

She raised bottle in the air.

" Aaj zinda hunt oh jee laynay do, thori barsat mei pi laynay do"
Shree take bottle from her hand and threw bottle on the road.

Liza: ye tum nay kiya kiya Shree mujhe meri bottle chaheay.

Shree: tum nay already itni pee rakhi hai aur piyo gi toh kiya hoga,.

Liza: nahi mujhe aur peeni haimujhe meri bottle do, She slipped.

Shree: Liza Sambhalo khud ko he hold her.

Liza: " Idhar chali mei udhar chali janay kahan mei kidhar chali ,

Pisal gai"

Shree: enough is enough Liza buhat hogaya ab chup chap say ghar chalo.

He waves his hand infront of auto rickshaw and sigal the driver to stop. They sits in the auto rickshaw. Liza puts her head on shree's shoulder and hold his hand. Shree try to free his hand from her grip but he fails to do this.

Shree: Liza are you fine?

Liza: hummm

Shree: ok.. He closes his eyes and rested his head on the corners of rickshaw.

After the silence of few minutes a voice disturbed him it's liza's voice.

" jay jay shiv Shankar kanta lagay na kankar

Mei nay paila tere naam ka piya.

Mei gir jaunge ( She falls infront of Auto rickshaw but shree holds her)

Mei mar jaungi tu nay mujhe tham na liya,

Soo rab di ha soo rab di"

Shree: kiya kar rahi ho liza driver dekh raha hai please control yourself.

The driver stares her.

Liza: bhaiya ji aagay dekh k chalen warna accident ho jaey ga phir mat kehna k

" na mei nay signal dekha na tu nay signal dekha,

Accident ho gaya rabba rabba"

Shree: liza hum is waqt Auto rickshaw mei hai kisi garden mei tafree nahi kar rhay hai.

Liza: toh kiya huwa shree I loveee singing

Shree: aab kaisay sambhalun isay ye toh full taali hai.

Liza Smiles with joy: Taali mujhay ek gana yad aaya.

Shree: no liza no.

Liza doesn't hear him and start singing.

Liza: " mei taali mei taali mei taali ho gai"

Shree put his hand on her mouth she shouts.

Shree: bus buhat kar liya tamasha aab kuch nahi bolo gi tum. Uff ye larki bhi nashay mei pagal hai.

Liza: " Nasha ye pyar ka nasha hai ye meri baat yaro mano

nashay mei yaar dob jao, raho na hosh mei dewano,

She pointed to shree " Mei nay jab say tum ye dil day diya hai,

Meetha meetha sa dard lay liya sunno oh shree"

Liza smiles : aacha hai na .

Shree: hunnn buhat aacha hai aab khamosh bhi hogi ya nahi.

Liza: bus ek baat kehni hai.

Shree: no liza..

Liza: please.

Shree: ok bus ek baat, kaho kiya kehna hai

Liza waves her duptta and hand outside the rickshaw and says " I love you shree, I love you"

Shree: liza hath andar karo pagal ho gai ho kiya , kiya bolay ja rahi ho tumhain pata bhi hai jo tum keh rahi ho, tumhain pata kaisay hoga nashay mei jo ho kal jab nasha utray ga phir pata chalay ga..

Liza: nahi shree mei apnay dil ki baat keh rahi hun is dil ki ( she pointes her heart)

Shree: bhaiya bus yahen rook dyn

He pays the charges to the drivers and pick her up in his arms.

Liza: shree naraz ho.

Shree doesn't answers . liza again asked him but he still quite , Liza inquires him third time , he drop her down infront of her door.

Liza: tumhari himmat kaisay hui mujhe giranay gi (she try to stand but she fails)

Shree opens her house door and push her on her bed and cover her with blankets, he is about to leaves, her voice stop him in middle.

" I love you shree please don't leave me like this, I really love you, please forgive me, I need your love I need you in my life, my life is incomplete without you, I am not able to play hide and seek more I love you"

Shree turns and give a smile to her " I am always with you, you are my past , present nad future" and turn off her room light , close the door and leave her home, she close her eyes and take a sweet dream of their future.


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