Ariya OS: Apology

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shona14

@shona14

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awesum part ggrt just loved it👏 shilpa di
aww arjun was really aplogetic
shaitan shree and chotu were had bet over dem
riya and arjun went for a holiday dats sweet and he gifted him a black sari😊
aww loved the first part
and about the second its perfect
watever arjun did for riya its lyk dream come true for any girl
their luv is pure and soulful or i shud say its eternal😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Whoa!! my behna.. My heart is still pacing..
You've done wonders with this one.. ⭐️

Riya's insecurities, Arjun's realisation and acceptance was beautifully portrayed.. And I'm still sighing with awe.. An ordinary day in a married couple's life turned out to be super- special all thanks to you..

And the hotwa bits, i soo wanted Ri to tear off the shirt when she first saw him.. 😉

P.S. If this is how you intend to portray romance in BL as well, I'll go crazy with tears and smiles on my face all at once..

And I've fallen for Arjun ji a little more.. 😳

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wow shilpa di its such a wounderful os,

i loved it 😃, arjun's apologizing was too gud 😛

the way he talked in dinner was gud and

it was romantic me blushing 😳

it was amazing update 👏

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

such a wonderful love story

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Loved it! That was amazing! Thanks for the OS and PM. :)

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was simple SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mahi

@_mahi_

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

how adorable.!! loved it to the core.. !!😳

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844858

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Hayyeee Shilpa Di🤗

Amazing Os!👏

A little too hot!☺️☺️☺️

But loved the romance part...LOved how Arjun made Riya believe that he was there with her in the long run!

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

it was amazing head's of to you dear

you made me speechless kuch lik hi nahi pa rahi after read your OS lovely concept dear

starting was amazing that arjun run behind riya and the trio grinning on arjun at ETF office wow what a seen

this is for u dear

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