Ariya OS: Apology

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

superrr duper romanticc love stryyy

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

mindblowing os
just love it☺️

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

That was wonderful!
You wrote down their feelings soo well.
I loved the way you described Riyas insecurities and loved the way Arjun explained to her that how much he loves her 😳
Sooo glad you continued this. Thank you for writing so beautifully!

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Shilpa Di 🤗thank you for writing such a beautiful OS :) loved it

felt so bad for riya :( she thought arjun would leave her

love the way arjun apologized to her

their kiss was so romantic ❤️

loved when riya said "By the way i forgave you with the first kiss but jsut wanted to see if you would break your rule of no romance at work" :)

loved their scenes in kitchen :)

riya was so excited when arjun told her they are going away from city

the description of the place was beautiful

he gifted her a black sari and he was wearing black slacks and blacks shirt

arjun was lost in here when he saw her in that saree

love the way he was feeding her food

love everything he did for riya

love the way arjun cleared riya's doubts and admitted that he loved her was awesome :)

riya's insecurities were very well written

awesome job 👏

thanks for the pm

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

this is awesome so romantic😊

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hey ..
That was soo beautiful ...
Loved it ..
Great work ...

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow awesome...👏

so hooottt...bari garam OS thi...

loved it to bits...

loved the way arjun apologized...

keep up ur gud work...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

superb romantic os di...!!!

very beautifully written...!! riya's emotions and insecurities are very well portrayed...!!

and love the way arjun manofied her in the beginning and then took her away for the surprise and cleared all her doubts...😳

it was very cute...!!

loved it...!!!

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

superb os
it was beautiful nd romantic
loved it so much

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

such a butiflllyy pennd work di

its too touchng

aftr rdng da sm part of dis i hv a feelng it may gng 2 b a

hottyy stryyy

bt as da stry gs its bcm dfrntt soo realtyy in it ..

yet it shws hot ness wid all emotion s tooo

insecurtss r harmfull 4 anyy reltionshp

whn it cm btwn a mard couple it can b a tsunami any time

u handl it vryyy butifllyy

riya s insecurits r soo prctcl cause

if 4m da man s prspctv mrg hppn onlyy 4 physcl attrctn

so any time 1nc he gt bord wid her he can abandnd her

to save hr mrg ..she thought 4 a baby is vryy normal

bt arjun allrdyy fall 4 her ...poor doll dnt know dat

da way he mnyfi his ladylove iss drmyy

his srprc 4 her iss awsmmm

bt der moments r drmyyllyyy descrbd

n atlst dey bcm 1

lv dis work di

pllzz wrt more like ds

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