Arni OS: Once every year, Part 2,3 Pg 2-Completed - Page 4

Awesome...beautiful...poignant...made me cry...give him back Roshni! that was my thought!

so sad n beautiful os... thanks dear for penning it down..

Dear Tina,

Yes you have, and in full measure.

The portrayal of Arjun's undiminished agony, haunted as he is by the memories of the beloved wife, whose murder he was unable to prevent, rings true in every word. In that sense, you have succeeded. Your choice of songs is also impeccable.

This said, I feel that the time has come to let Roshni's soul rest in peace. Let us have no more harrowing descriptions of the knife being driven again and again into her body as Arjun flails around in impotent rage and anguish. It serves no purpose, and at least for me, it makes me sick, and totally reluctant to read any more such accounts of Roshni's end.

Let us move on to happier times and more of the real work of the ETF, which is crime solving. This never seems to feature other than in passing in 90% of the fan fiction in this forum.Maybe the time has come to change that.

Shyamala Aunty

so here's the final part, hope i have been able to do justice to this Arjun and his dead wife😭

read all d parts n its awesome 👏

awww awesome
tht was emotional bt beautiful

that was such an emotional OS :) loved it

Beautiful story lovely ArNi movements poor Arjun but liked the story a lot thanks for written ArNi story

superb
very well written...
loved every bit of it...
read it in one go...
thanks for pm
sorry for commenting late

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Part 2
di u made me cry ...
fb was awesum
so touching
loved it di
very heart wrenching sng di..

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Di...
final part
so emotional
arni..!!
feeling very bad fr arjun bro...
di pls write more on arni pls
beautiful sng di
loved it
claps
hats off to u di...
Love u di
tc
hugs!~