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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

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arjun and riya were in there dreams of each other ...


THE NEXT DAY ...


riya woke up late that day it was 10 already ..

..but that day she was feeling really lazy so turned sides in her bed .

...and found a bouquet near her's bed ...

suddenly a voice came from out of nowhere .

...she was really surprised to hear that voice

" hey ...sleepy head good morning ??.

..were r u looking at huh!!..?? ...its late now get ready soon

.hey don't waste time sitting there go!! hurry

..and don't forget to wear the dress in the next stand

.then close ur eyes and go to arjun 's room there is a gift waits just for u ...".

.she was wondered abut the source of the sound

and she searched every were on the time being

and found a tape recorder in the bouquet

but she couldn't identify the person by the voice

.she was so excited to see wat will happen next and who is doing

this ??so she dressed and went to arjun's room

..even if she got hard time finding his room .

{arjun's room is just next door of riya's} .

.she followed the instruction of the tape perfectly !!! ..

...the room was a mess when she got there but she didn't mind

that at all she was busy searching for the next clue .

...again she was searching for a tape in the room but she couldn't find that at all

...but ...that time she found a dove flying towards her

from the balcony n standing there looking at her .

she took the dove in her hands and she found a letter on the leg of the dove .

"hai darling tho tum yeha thak toh pahunch hi gayi ...

..!!! Muchey dekhna keliye itne bechanin ho rehi ho ..

..bas ek .do kadam aur !!take the gift in the next stand ..

...&...ur next clue: go to the study don't make me wait kkk ??

darling "

She flew the bird away and looked around and

she was surprised to see empty room of arjun even if it was Holiday

...she thought of staying der for a while

and went near the stand and found the gift it was a "thale."

. Seeing the perfect gift she was a bit surprised

...then she continued to search her way to the next clue .

.."THE STUDY". there she.she saw a glass of vine and a bottle

and next to that there was a laptop showing her the next clue

"hi darling why did u took so much time ..!!!!

hav a sip and enjoy ur self its ur favourite year wine ...:)

and don't forget to take the...note next to u stand

..and give to the driver and wait ...na na na !!!!

Don't open it darling kay ? ..

..& ur next clue :there is a car waits in front of mansion just for u !!! ..

as the note on the lap says she went to check if there is a car

infront of the mansion or not .. there was a car before she could

say any thing someone tied her eyes n garbed her hand

and threw her into the car..whole time being she was guessing

who this person would be ???

and all she could n't thing of any one who would do this !!!! ...

suddenly the car stopped and opened her eyes ..

..it was a really wonderful place.

...nature's sound was here in her ear the sweet smell of flowers

was der in her nose n the wind was der in her hair the

place was filled with clam and charm ...

She looked around but didn't saw anyone mean time the car

returned to some were she didn't noticed that coz she was enjoying

the nature that much ...she was a bit worried .

.that she is in a unknown place with a thale.

..and the way back to the mansion is a mess she didn't got time

identifying the path .while she was in the car ...

..then also she decided to move on with the path ...


.. ...to be continue ...


I hope every one liked this part ...srry for the

mistakes ...thankz for reading ...

Edited by Alexandrarose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all welcome backdr.

I hope that nw u r absolutely fine.

Thanks for this wonderful update.

Its really awesome.

All the clues r perfect. So well-planned.

Is this all really happening or she is dreaming????

Who iswas doing al this?????

Loved it!!!!!!

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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if u guys hav any sugguestions how to improve this ff thenn plzzz tell me then oly i can improve the story really well
i would to love to hav ur choices too
i hope every one help me


thank u for reading this ff and for ur suggestions thats alot for me ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ress??? watz that ???😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res ??? can any one help me understand wats this plzzz😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexandrarose


ress??? watz that ???😕


Reserved. I already unres my comment dr.

Welcome back dr. Hw r u feeling nw?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexandrarose

res ??? can any one help me understand wats this plzzz😕


It means reserved.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexandrarose

if u guys hav any sugguestions how to improve this ff thenn plzzz tell me then oly i can improve the story really well

i would to love to hav ur choices too
i hope every one help me


thank u for reading this ff and for ur suggestions thats alot for me ...

I m really enjoying it. U r going great!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aks13


It means reserved.

reserved ??? for wat ??😕?? i think i missed a lot in here ...😆


thankzz yaar for reading this ff
am fine ...thanks yaar how r u ???



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexandrarose

reserved ??? for wat ??😕?? i think i missed a lot in here ...😆


thankzz yaar for reading this ff
am fine ...thanks yaar how r u ???




For comment dr. Yep 😉 😆.

Thanks to u sweeti for writing this one.

Thats great. Me too good.

Take Care.

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