Ariya ff-DAY AFTER TOMORROW updated part 7 pg 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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is it a discont work?!
coz no update from months
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sooo srryyy guyss i was sooo bc in my studies ...n sry that i cant update now it will take some time to update that i am studing in +2 sooo i hav to study for the entrance n stuff soo plzz guys this work i will complete it but not now ...i hope u understands this ...


:) love ya guys ...alex ...<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexandrarose

sooo srryyy guyss i was sooo bc in my studies ...n sry that i cant update now it will take some time to update that i am studing in +2 sooo i hav to study for the entrance n stuff soo plzz guys this work i will complete it but not now ...i hope u understands this ...


:) love ya guys ...alex ...<3

ALL THE BEST FOR UR STUDY 👍🏼 👍🏼
but plz come back soon & update story 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

Riya n Arjun walked for 3 hrs straight n got really tired

. Riya was dreaming to hav a seat but couldn't all coz of AYM Arjun

... they both walked like they r on a secret race without any finishing line ...hhehe

..they both show anger in face but some how they were enjoying each other's company

in deep inside their heart ... but atlast riya made a attempt to ask arjun abut the secret

gifts n to hav a seat ...

...

Ri: arjun ... Can I ask u something???

Ar: no ...

Ri: (wat am I thinking ?? this akkudu??? Oh plz ...which time da ...) { she started walking In a upset n angry way ...but then a shocking event occurred .

Ar: I was joking tell riya .. wat do u want to ask me ?

Riya got surprised n shocked to see arjun smiling n telling her this instead of shouting ...she couldn't hide the shock she stood der for 5 min then arjun was waiting for her reply .but she didn't got any response s when he look back she was not der she was staring at him ...he started laughin seeing her facial expression ...

Ri: wat did u say ???? I think I heard something else !!!

Ar: wat did u heard?

Ri: I heard u said me wat I was askin u ?

Ar: idiot !!! I was asking u the same!!!

riya started to blushin n forgot the que ...then she tried hard to recover from her shyness ..but then arjun heard the sound of the water fall ..

ar: I think the water fall is near by ...come fast .

ri: kay ...( she couldn't ask her doubts n got depressed )

they walked for 30 mints n got the water fall it was really beautiful place .

.as they got der there was a mob n ETF team was present der .seeing the

mob arjun got ready for a serious entry with a gun

Mean while

Rathod , pooja ,sherya all were tryin to gift riya a surprise party rathod wanted arjun's help so he faked a crime and called arjun .

While setting all the things sree saw arjun n riya comin to give a serious look sree n chottu give the whole place a look of criminal's layer . it was a party in ETF style ...the real party is begin the water fall ...

Sree ran to rathod to report that they r here

Sree: rathod sir they r here ...

Ra: kay lets begin the show ...heheh (devil's smile ) pooja u stay away ok as the whole play starts u just sit back n wait kay .

(excpt ETF members n riya every one was begin the water fall )

Po: ok ...all the best ...sameer ...

Ra: I really need that pooja ..hhehe ...

Rathod n sree goes to the crime scene as part of the play

As ariya got near sree n rathod started act

Sr: sir arjun sir... the trackers cant track him ... Am so worried .

Ra: got dammit this Rawte always on a mission to give me a head ach ...u call the headquarters n bring more backup the situation is getting more n more worst . even if wat happens we hav to fine this criminal master mine kay ...go n hurry ...

( rathod acts as der is a very danger situation goin on n they r in under high pressure

n criminal's layer is begin the water fall )

Rathod got ready for a showdown then ...

Ar: rathod...(arjun called rathodn ran towards him)

Riya: bayi ...(riya also ran to rathod )

Rathod : riya ??? wat r u doin here ???( with a surprised look ) n wat is this dress ????

Riya: am so happy to see u bayi ... I don't know how I got here some one kidnaped me then got me here I was lost then I saw this AYM .srry arjun ... n he told u called him n u guys will be here ...

Rathod: rawte ...thanks for bring her too... y r u so late I called u 3 hrs ago ...

Ar: that my SUV's tyre got puncture.. So what's happening here ?

Rathod: remember the case of miss. durga . well shree got the real killer but couldn't catch the shooter but some how he planted a tracker in this dress n now the tracker got us here .

{every one gets ready for a shoot shree want arjun's gun }

Sre: arjun sir do u need any bullet

Arjun: shit I forgot to take my gun ...

Shree: (happily ) its okey sir I got one extra

Shree gives arjun a fake gun .

Ra: riya come behind me okey u staying here is very dangerous.

(riya gets a little spark of fear in her heart by seeing all shoot out n getting ready for a fight then also she agreed with rathod n went behind him )

Arjun heard wat rathod said ro riya

Ar: rathod ... it's a bad idea to bring her inside .as we don't know wat will happen inside ...

rathod : (oh god this rawte ... this party is for her wat will happen if she didn't come inside this rawte will spoil every thing I know) no way rawte it's a bad idea ...inside we could protect her n its getting late too

before arjun got say any thing rathod ordered arjun to bring riya n protect her.

Arjun started at her like if she were a chicken he would hav eaten it alive ...

Riya: (even if riya was so scared of shooting she was thinking f having a gud time der ...as the prince will never let his princess to die ...wait ... Wat if this all feeling is oly one sided ...ohhh god wat am I thinking this AYM will kill me for sure )...

riya smiled at arjun's killing stare

ra: ok team its time u know wat to do catch alive...

arjun: kay

arjun made the 1st move inside ... n got surprised ...by hearing claps ...

...to be continued ...

Thanks for waiting guys I hope u guys liked this part am soo glad that u guys liked this ff srry if der is any mistake ...n don't for get to pm me abut ur suggestions so then I could improve my work ..thankxx guys n love all ......

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Posted: 11 years ago
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love it..

awesome update..
plz continue soon
n plz do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg they planned a surprise party in this way
pakka etf party lol
awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks guys ...:) srry i could oly update a small part ...:(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
finally u update it
it was awesome update
ariya moment was cute 😉 😉
so all ETF made plan party for riya 🥳 🥳
poor riya got scared with fight 😆 😆
update soon

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