Ariya ff-DAY AFTER TOMORROW updated part 7 pg 13

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1st part :-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3449542/new-ff-of-our-one-and-oly-ariya

3rd part :page 2 ...
part 4 :page 3
part 5: page 6
part 6 :page 10
part 7 :page 13


Part 2

Shreya: yaar '.that is my cousin ACP Arjun surya kanth rawte '''the person I '.told u while we were chatting ''don't u remember ???

Riya : ohh ''''.yeh I remember ''.

Flash back :

Few months ago '''.

While Shreya and riya chats Shreya

Riya :hai shre!! howz ur bf and ur "dammit" brother doing??

shre: ri'''my brother 's name is not ' dammit . he has a perfect name Sameer rathod 'got it ???

Riya :ha baba ''I was just joking '..i know ur brother the most perfect brother in the world '.so how r u ???

Shre: its ok !! I really miss u yaar !!! when will u come back ? in here so many things r going on ''.

Yeh sree is fine .too bad that I didn't got the chance to introduce them to u ''.he is really techno geek '..and riya u know in there a new ACP has taken charge his name is "ACP Arjun suryakanth rawte " yaar he is so rough ''I don't y I have this feeling that I know him before ''that was I first though when I first saw him '..when my bro saw them there was a long hugging and all '..then I got remember that's our Aju'.

Riya : aju???...(trying to remember )

Shre: yeh ..aju don't u remember '.??? My cousin he was when to New york when he was 12 ''

Riya: yeh aju . u have told me '.before ..so he is back huh????

Shr: yaar u don't know him is so intelligent than'and soo rude ''.i think he don't remember his childhood friends any more ..he have changed a lot .'..

Riya : ohh '''..wow''shre don't exaggerate I am sure he is a human 'and I don't think a person can be so intelligent and rude in the same time and "gal take a chill pill" '..'.I will return to u soon .then lets see who is intelligent and who is not '..k??

Shre:yeh my super pc '..u r intelligent 'so watz up there ??.. ''

Riy: ''.shre now I really have to prove u that am the intelligent one ''

"don't mess with the gal " I really miss u yaar ''.here its snowing '..i really wish now if u were here '.it would been have really great '..

Shre: ohh 'me too miss u 'if u miss me that much then close ur eyes and I would be there '.

Riya :ok will ''..

Shre: ''..so when will u return ..???

Riya :sooonnn''''''.

Shr: I will be waiting ..bye ya bro calling 'nowa days my bro is getting so weird '. '

Bye ri'.miss u and love u '

Ri: bye ya 'love u too take care ''.when I return I will give medicines for ur bro ''.

Shre: ri''''yaaa'''.

Riya laughs and the goes offline ''.and thinks "Arjun ha ''!!! Fascinating!!!mr ''Arjun suryakanth rawte ..beware '..!! riya would be there "'hahhaha.!!!. '.

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Chottu take a sudden break 'and riya jumps forward and return from her'z flash back '..

Riya : chottu ''..wat happen ? '..ha '' don't u know how to drive??

Ch:srry ''.riya ..thats a cat jumped infront of the car that's y ''

Riya :oh then wat happen to the cat ?u killed it ??

Ch : no ''it ran away '.

Ri: chott ''hu !!! thank god '..u really have to focus kk '.don't repeat it '.

Ch : yeh ri .. I won't

Riy: shr''..so howz ur brother weirdness and all going ???and information of that 'and do ur bro knows about sree too

Shr: blushes'.that .aju found us in the beach '.and ''.now bro also know all '

Ri: ohhh ''..so wen is ur engagement ??

Shr: I don't know .when my bro tells me mayb one thing that bother me is that u know sree tells that is still a child he didn't got in the age to get married and settle'and in this though will he say that he can't marry me now when my bro finally say me to get marry '..oh god'.'

Ri: wat the???oh really ???is he nuts???

Shr:I don't know '..hey yaar can u help me plzzz ''

Riy: then tell me shre .where did u got him???i will try '

Shr: ri 'u know all '.then y are u saying like this ' ''

Riy: yeh I know'.all '..!!!!'1st when he followed u and u made a condition that u would be his girlfriend ..when ur brother is married and all '..that na '.i know !!

Shr: yeh 1st I didn't though he would take that all serious .and hey look he even made my marriage over brother's wedding '..'.thatz wat I like in him '..

Ri:hm ''..hey look we r here !!!!

Atlast the car got in to rathod parivar mansion '. .


The car was slowly getting in to the mansion .then riya noticed a well-known suv there

Before riya could ask Shreya that howz suv is that '..shreya became bc calling her bhabhi ,,,,

Chottu took all riya z bag and all ''they both came to the door and waited for Shreya to come '..

Then Shreya and her bhabhi came with a talli and welcomed riya inside '.

Shr:so ri this is my bhabhi '..u couldn't got the chance to say hai in the wedding '.and bhabhi this is my best friend riya '.she gone US'.in the night of ur wedding ''

Riya: hai bhabhi 'shre..told me every thing about u ''

re: :hai riya ''don't bother calling me bhabhi I am ur same age ''so call me pooja, ''.thats my name '..she have told all about u and howz ur studies going ..????

Riya: yeh pooja '.its going well '.and nice to meet u ''''!!!woow Shreya '..nice structure yaar '..when did this built ??

Shry: ha ''!there u go ..riya have started it .for the millionth time I don't know I think 19th century'..

Riya: woow''nce work .i really have to view the blueprints '..can I see that all ??

Shr: u just got there '..!! first go and take a bath then we can talk '..i will be back ''.

Shreya went to see if rathod when office or not 'and pooja went to the kitchen '.

Riya : but ..shreya ..were '.is..not again ''now we have to find out '..kk 'mission taken ''wow wat a building !! before bath I would like a tour '..

Ch:riy'.wat will I do ''???? Ur mother just called '..

Ri: ha! U return home and tell mom I will stay with Shreya '..for 2 ,3 days and will go home ..kk!

Ch: kk bye ri take care '.

Ri : I will'.. u too take care !!!

Chottu returned to riya's home '.

Riya started to wonder around the whole place '.

Woow'..there was soo many beautiful place in the mansion ''horse and all ''

After 2 hrs 'she was soo tried of viewing all '..then she started to look for the way to the front room '

Then she realize she have lost the track '..and it was noon 'she was soo hungry '..

Were ever she gone they were dead ends 'suddenly she started hearing noises '.and someone was chasing her'.she ran soo fast 'and she was so scared ''at last she got in to a room there was no light and she found the shadow was catching up to her and found her ''she closed her eyes and moved to a corner of the room ''.she was so soaked with sweat '..and then she took her full courage and when for a fight '.

Mean time ..

When Shreya when to look for rathod she realize she didn't told riya where's her room '.then she thought pooja would tell her ''.after some time later Shreya asked pooja did she told riya about her room 'pooja was surprised to hear that and they found she may be lost some were ''then Shreya was searching for riya ''..and found Arjun '.he was going in to his room in urgent matter ..1st she told of asking were is riya then she decided not to '.and continued searching for riya '.

Arjun was so tried due to the whole night time work so he was going to take a hot bath.his room was in a corner of the mansion.. and suddenly he felt someone talking though the whole place it he had a doubt that '.some spy is came to steal the important documents of the case from him ''

he decided to follow'..they run so long and he lost the person 'he searched all the place and at last he came to this room '.and stepped inside and found some one standing in font of him and started a demo fight with him at last he managed to conquer the spy he put the lights on 'and both got surprised ''..

And they for a few mints they stayed like that and viewed in each other eyes 'and suddenly her heart beats raised and she fel butterflies in her stomach '..all '.suddenly his cellphone rung 'and arjun let go of her

Riya :arju: u ???she thought Arjun followed her and tried to kidnap her '.and he thought she is a spy and she followed him '..

Ajun :riy: yeh me !

Riya: watz ur problem?

Arjun :my problem ??? hey watz ur problem ?

Arju:riya:'..y r u following me ?

Arjun:riya:me following u ? who r u ?

Arjun : who r u ? y r u there ?am ACP Arjun suryakanth rawte ''.

Riya : am Riya Mukherjee '.why r u following me ????(riya was forgotten about whole Arjun Shreya 's cousin suddenly she remember all that )

Ajun: hey am not following any body u r the one that flowed me and got in to my room ''

Riya: once again the name '..arjun????????????right !!!

Ajun: tell me the truth why did u followed me ???and whom do u work for ??

Riya : hey mr ' am not a spy and the guest there ''shreya is my friend ''kk '..

Ajun : so be with Shreya why r u so interested in being in my room and all ??

Riya ': 'I ' I 'that I was lost '..

Arjun: wat '???u were??

Arjun found her soo interesting and understood she was lost in whole place and scared from hers looks all so he decided to tease her a little '..

Riya: nothing non of ur business'can u call shreya ..????

(arjun though how stubborn she is '.and he liked it )

Arjun: called Shreya ''..shreyyyaaa''''

Shry: yeh aju ..am coming '.

Shreya saw riya '..

She: hey ri . u were here ?? I was look all the mansion for u 'come I will get u to the room'

Riya: that I was looking at the pets and got trapped there '.

Shrya : so now I don't hav to introduce u to '.each other'(Arjun said shake his head like yeh'with a weeping laughter )

Riya : sherry'''were is my room (she was so angry )

Shr: kk ..come '..bye ajun '.

Ajun : bye shr''(with a wrinkling to riya )

(Riya was so angry with him '.so she stared at him)

And Shreya dragged riya before she start a fight 'to her's room ''

When they both got out for the room '.arjun started laughing '..

And started to see the flash back when he first met her in the road '.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.'.to be continued


Hope u guys like this part ...😳😳...don't forget to comment ur feedback ...:)😳😳😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
great update :) loved it
flashback was amazing :)
shreya and riya's conversation was really funny :)
riya lost in mansion and arjun chasing her 😆
loved arjun and riya's nok jhok
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
ariya is so funny
loved their nok jokhs😉😆
damn it brother😆🤣 hehe riya
wow palace is so beautiful
she was lost in the palace & arjun mistook her as spy & chase her🤣
loved the way arjun tease her😳😆
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
superb start

do pm me when you update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!!
loved it...!!!
flashback scene was nice...!!!
lol riya lost on mansion and arjun following her thinking herto be a spy...!!!🤣
ariya nok jhoks were amazing...!!
continue soon...!!
cant wait for the next part...!!
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hope u guys like this !!!

part 3



when they both got out form the room...arjun started laughing ..
and started to see the flash back when he first met her in the road ...
...

riya was so angry at arjun that he teased her ...and all
shr: ri leave that he is like that
ri: yeh like that my foot !!!
how dare he!!!
shreya made her clam down after a long time talking and talking ...
ri: leave that damn thing ...so were is my room ???u didn't shown me too ...
shr: srry that i went to look for my bro na thats all !!!srry
so here is ur room ...now happy ???

shreya brought riya to a beautiful room like in the pic below !!






ri: da its sooo beautifull ...wooow ...i really loved it !!! thank u !!
{riya hugged shreya }
shr: yeh i knew u will love this room ...thats y i brought u here !!!
mean time pooja came to the room
po:shr u r still chatting with ur friend ????
sh: yeh baabi that we see after this whole 5 yrs later...so chatting is really important u know hhehhe
po:shreya!!! stop acting like a kid kkk!!!! u can talk to her later.. now poor thing she must be tried in this travel and all
ri: its okk pooja !!
sh:hey... am ur friend kk !!! so riya take a warm bath and take some rest kk that u r goning to be pretty bc aftwards...
shreya then runs witha wrinking smile and run off from the place
ri:shr...wait wat wat r u saying i didn't got wat u saying ????bc??
shreya then stops
sh:wait and see riyu ...
ri: its riya not riyu !!!!
sh: i know !!!!
ri :...shreya bina !!!...
riya then trun smiling and when to take a bath ...

mean time ...

ratthod was getting ready for ETF...then arjun comes to rathod laughing...
rathod trun to arjun with doubtful face that why is arjun laughing ???
ra:they ratwe wat happen ???nightduty made u this much laugher ...so..now on night duty ???.
ar:samee...stop ur lame jokes kk !!!
ra:yeh my jokes r lame now ...and ur jokes r so high class that nobody understand that .hhahha...
ar:samee...
ra:seriously ratwe wat happen ????
arjun then covers his smile and try to act that nothing happen
ar:wat ????u never saw me laughing before ??
ra:just tell me wat happen ????
ar:nothing...its human nature u know!!!
ra: u are here for the last 8 month now u r smiling . wat happen to the human in between huh???

then arjun understood its not going to a gud driection so he changed subject by a resent case they r solving ...
arjun with series face towards rathod and thought srry rathod i can't tell u the reason now .
.first i let some thing to improve kk then u see i will tell kk ..
.otherwise my plan will be a flop !!!
but mean time rathod smiled at arjun and
rathod thought ...ohhh changed topic huh!!! so there is something !! bachu ETFcheifhu !!! i will find this out !!!

rathod acted like he didn't got wat his idea of changing the subject and arjun acted like nothing happen ...
they both smiled at each other and when in two direcion arjun went to the varanda to read the news paper and rathod when to take care to go ETF before he on the car rathod looks at arjun with a winking smile and left to office ...

After a long time ..

arjun was leave that day so he was taking a nice relaxing time in the garden and al the places in the manision...
rathod finally solved the case and was relaxing in the office and then he went in the thought of arjun and
why did he didn't thought rathod the reason for his laughter ...then he thought of finding it our all by his self .riya was taking her beauty sleep after watching thriller movie ...
the rest of the day was a case free time so gave every one hoilday and came back home ...


rathod came to home arjun was in the garden ...arjun saw rathod ...he was curios to know y he came so early ??and wat happen to the case???so he goes to see rathod ..

just in time that arjun opened his mouth to ask rathod...they thought it was in their thoughts ...

ra:rawte did u heared that or i just imagine that ???
ar:r u talking about the scream ???
ra:yes !!!
they both looked at each other 's face
ra: RAWTE RUN!!!
they both run toward which the sound was heard ...
{they both though may be some enemies of them r attcking the house or the family memeber's so they got so frightened and gone to search wat happen }

rathod and arjun got inside the hall
ra:ratwe u go and search in the left and i will look in the right if any thing is found just call kk !!!
ar:okay!!
they both run in different direction to look wat happen !!

IN LEFT ...
on that direction rooms were really grave so he was checking every room . he decided to check his room .while he was going to his room's direction he heared some wried sounds from the next door of this room .
then slowly stepped in to the room . ...then he got a kick in his stomach in the same time .then a really heave thing fell in his body .and he couldn'tt get the balance of his body so he fell dowun the floor


IN RIGHT
on that direction library study and kitchen so run all the way as his way of searching for any enemies ...and he called sree and chottu to as a back up ...

mean time in riya's room
riya was dreaming about the triller movie she was watching before sleeping.she dreams the movies as she is the herion and her hero is arjun {even though this feels wrong to riya then also she likes arjun as her hero} and rest of the roles r her close friends and their family {rathod,pooja ,shreya ...}. In that dream she sees villan kills her arjun infront of her so she sreams so loud {that scream is they heared in reality} and she started walking towards the villian to take her revenge but in reality too she was waliking but towards the door with her eyes all closed

when the door was opened in reality .In her dream she got near to the villian to take the revenge she kicked his face with her's pinpointed heels and the villian and herion fell into a hole .mean time in reality too {as the villan in her dreams}she kicked the person infront of her .but luck or no luck that person trun out to be arjun .and she couldn't balance her weight and the force of the kick so she fell on top of arjun ...same time she woke up from her sleep too ...

then she couldn't understnad wat happen .and riya saw arjun's face infront of her and they looked at each other's eyes for some mints .{every time she sees arjun this close she feels butterflies in her stomach and goes in a dream }..suddenly she realized its not her's dream and she looks around ...
ri:were am i ?? {surprised}
ar:god!!!!!!!
ri:{shocking to see arjun}u??? wat r u doing here ??
ar:here ???wat r u doing my back !!!!
riya then notice that she is on top of arjun ...
ri:wat am i doing here??? hey did u ??? {she pointed at him with doubted look }
ar:me ????r u kidding ???u r the one kicked me...and fall on top of me ...!!! and r u thing am crazy to make a 60kg weight to my stomach ???and can u plz stand up? it hurtz u know !!!
ri:huh????how dare u ??? am not 60 kg i have oly 40kg weight !!
then riya tried to get up but she couldn't she cloth all were stuck ...
mean time shreya was helping pooja in kitchen they both got frightend becze of this loud scream then they both run towards riya's room on the way shreya saw rathod looks all around the place something ...
ra: r u guys all right ???
sh:yeh we r fine...baai wat r u searching here ???
ra:then wat was the whole scream about ??
sh:we r fine ...it may be ...riya ...
ra: riya ???
po: yeh riya was sleeping in her room may be ...
ra:come fast lets check ..for her ...

they run to riya's room !!
ra:dammit were is this rawte ???
when they got there they all surprised to see them both in the floor .mean time chottu and sree also came coze of rathod 's emergence call they were so shocked to see them like that .riya some how managed to get up .before riya and could explain the whole situation they all misunderstood them and smiled at them like they had found every secret of them ...:)


...to be continued

percap

arjun wat is this feeling ???i couldn't understand??arjun outside in his balcony looking at the moon and stars ... meant time on the otherside riya thinks looking at the moon wat is this feeling ???god help !!!



...

hope u guys would liked it !!! srry for the mistakes if any !!!and don't 4get to give a feedback for this part !!!!

thankz for reading !!!



Edited by Alexandrarose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update :) loved it
poor riya was so mad that arjun was teasing her
loved rathore and arjun's conversation
riya was dreaming of arjun and she was the one who screamed
she kicked arjun and fell on top of him 😆 poor arjun
everybody misunderstood them
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg it was so funny,
poor arjun he got a kick by riya
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet, nice n funny concept.

continue soon dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...
samjun convo was lovely...
omg riya kicked arjun and fell on top of him😆
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

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