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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: alee001
😳!! hum tum ek lift mai bandh ho!😳😳😳!!

superbbb!!!

update soonn!!!

or light chali jaye ...Thanks dr..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Love this..
Ariya iis too much..
And also love Samya.. 😊

Thanks manuuu dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lola123
Lovely...
Sooo romantic😳
Precap...😳😳

Thanks dr

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: pihu_angad
precap is indeed interesting..😳😳😳
continue soon

Thanks u dr

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: madmadona
nice... great start
haha riya is so funny
lift scene superb
precap is interesting... looking 4ward
cont soon

Thank u my dr

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: fatima15
awesome OS :) loved it
awww rathore saved siya from falling :) how cute
loved ariya's scenes in the lift😉
lol she called him prince charming and he heard everything😆
lights went off in the lift and she hugged arjun😳
she is scared of dark and was holding his hand :)
love the way arjun was teasing riya
precap seems awesome :)
ariya's kiss and sameer proposed siya😳
can't wait to read more
continue soon

Thank u so much my dr fatiii..
just wait few more minute dr

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Part=3
"Jajabaat hat jo dil ke..
aaj tumhen baata don..
Mahsus ker sako to aaj..
tumhen suna duin"

Scence-ariya r stil in lift..
sitting very close n holding each other hands.
riya again rested his head on arjun shoulder.
Arjun ye lift kab chalegi.
i m getting bore.
Ar-u bore..how sweet.
ab kya tumhen gana sunayon..
Ri-wao not a bad idea..
Ar-i m just kidding..ab kya sari umer yahin rehane kya erada hai..
Ri-what sari umer or vo bhi tumhare sath..

Ar-
mujhe bhi koe shok nahi tumhare sath rehne ka..i meen lift se bahar nikalna hai ya nahi..
Ri-haan nikalna to hai.
arjun observing here n there..he saw up..there is small exit window..
Ar-to chalo meri help karo..
arjun without her permision lift her by her waist n say push that window..
Ri-oh oo . hh ye kya ker rahe ho utaro mujhe niche.
.ahhh ...
Ar-ehse hilna baand karo verna gir jaogi..jaldy se window ko kholne ke koshish karo..vaise bhi (in teasing way) tum etani bhari ho main tumhen jayada der tak pakad nahi sakta..
Ri-what..? u meen i m fati..leave me leave me..
Ar-are rree ye kya ker rahi ho..main koe film ka hero nahi hoon.. jo tumhen girane se bacha loon ..
ager gir gaye to choot lag jayegi..
unfortunatly arjun lost his balence..n. riya slide his arm over his chest..
Ri-Ahh Arrrjun..
but very next instent..
arjun hold her again..
n slowly put her on the flor..
Ar-r u ok
her eyes almost filled with water..
when arjun put her again in flor..she hug him tightly..
how dare u ager mujhe choot lag jati too..
she is breathing havely..arjun feel his shirt his wet..
Ar-heyy r u crying but she didnt reply.
arjun hug her back.
n pathes her back.
when riya feel his tuch..she pushed arjun away from her.
on the other side-
when siya goes her room she found riya is not there..
she searches her in whole room

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Sabia Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Ya Allah...! Itna fast kyun chal raha hai? Jan-pehchan hua nehi aur direct kiss pe pauch gaya?????

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

but she is not there..
so she call her no..but her no. is swichoff..on the other sameer also search arjun..
sameer think may be he goes outside..
so he decided to go out..
Sa-ab ye arjun kahan gaya..
kahin ye uske piche to nahi chala gaya..
per vo hai kahan..sameer is lost in her thought sudenly bang with somone..
Ahhoch..Ahhh..
Tum ..app
Siya-sorry vo mera dhayan..
Sa-nooo its my mistake..
app kuch pareshan lag rahi hai..
Si-vo..aa..nothing..i hv to go..
she took only two three step but stop after hearing sameer word..
kya tum apni fr ko dhund rahi hoo..
Siya turn n ask enqurily..yes but how u kno
Sa- guess kiya..
Si-guess ..?? ask enqurily
Sa-haan bez my fr is also missing..
Si-ur fr or tumhari fr ke missing hoone se meri fr ka kya relation..jaror kuch hai jo aap chupa rahe hai..
(upss ab to sam ke chori pakdi gaye)
siya waited for his reply.
mujhe sach sunana hai sirf sach..
Sa-vo hamen comissioner sir ne riya ke protection. ke liye bejha tha..
ham goa mai ese liye aye they..
Siya-what uncle ne ..
per uncle ko kaise pata hum log goa ane vale hai..
Sa-vo main or mera fr arjun we both r police officers ,or hum dono aap per najer rakh rahe they..
Si-whatt..ohh no uncle yahan bhi..uff poor riya..per es waqt vo hai kahan..
Sa-ab ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata..per vo jahan bhi hogi..arjun uske sath hoga..
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Riya pushed arjun away from her..
ek to mujhe girate ho ,or uper se gale lagate ho..dont u dare to tuch..
ager mujhe choot lag jati to..tum jante nahi mere papa ko..
Ar-heyy dont cry..i m sorry..he took step toward her..n put his hand on her shoulder..tum to bilkul bachon ke tarah roti ho.
Ri-i m not a kid samjhe tum.
arjun remove her tears by his thaumb.
his tuch on her face again make a shiver on her body.
Ri-voo
Arjun put fingers on her lips..shhh
riya close her eyes

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

OTHER SIDE-
Siya-sameer mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai pata nahi riya kahan hogi..
Sa-dont warry siya main hoon na yahan or arjun bhi to hai riya ke pass..
Si-how u kno ke arjun riya ke pass hai..
Sa-vo last time jab meri arjun se baat huye to vo riya ko follow ker raha hai..
so mujhe lagta hai..
take a deep breath n look in siya..vo dono jahan bhi honge sath hongen..
both together searces..ariya in whole hotale..but they didnt even thinks once time about lift..(Lolll)
~~
riya close her eyes..
but very next moment she oped her eyes n hug arjun tightly..
arjun..mujhe bahoot dar lag raha hai..es andhere main. mera dam ghut raha hai
ab main. or es lift main nahi reh sakti..
mujhe gher vapas jana hai..
its all my mistake..
arjun encircled her in his arms..n consoling her.
Ar-hey darne ke jarorat nahi main hoon na.
Ri-ager main yahan nahi ati to shayad ye kabhi nahi hoota.
esae achha hoota..main shadi ke liye yaan ker deyti
Ar-u getting marrige.
still hugging arjun.
Ri-no my dad wanna..now i got married..vo chahte the ke main unki pasand ke ladke ke sath marrige ker loon.
Ar-to tumne shadi ke liye haan ker de.
Ri-haan ker de..haan ka to sawal he paida nahi hota
how culd i say yes..if i dont even kno anything about him..
Ar-what to tumhare dad ne mere bare...(Slip tung but kantrol)
riya lift her face up n saw in his eyes.
Ri-tumhare bare..matlab
Ar-vo i meen us ladke ke baare main kuch nahi bataya.
Ri-batate kaise maine unhen chance he nahi diya.
akhir ye meri life ka sawal hai.
Ar-humm to tumne kya kiya.
Ri-karna kya tha shadi se bachane ke liye..main. apni frs ke sath goa chali aye
per yahan aker es lift main phas gaye
Ar-to tum shadi nahi kerna chahti,
Ri-kerni hai per dad chahte they ke main polish vale se shadi karo
per main kise polish vale
se shadi nahi kerna chahti
Ar-kyun

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago