SS: Oh Mere Humsafer *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiii fr back with new os-
hop u like-n sorry if i waisting ur time
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"MERE HUMSAPHER"
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story basicaly depend on ariya ,sameer n siya~~
concept-two girls(riya n siya,best fr) meet two boys(arjun n sameer,best fr) in goa ~~
N how they fall in love for each other~~
hop u enjoys~~to story shuro karen-


Two girls-so finaly hum goa pahunch gaye,
Riya-haan or kguli hava main saan le ker kitana achha lag raha hai..
siya tumne hotale main booking to karwai hai..
ya her baar ke tarah bhul gaye..
Siya-dont warry riya..maine es baar koe mistake nahi ke hai..
Ri-ohh thank god..tun jaker room conform karo ..main bus abhi ati huin..
siya goes inside hotal sunsine..but unfortunatly..the flor was litle slipery..due to this..she lost her balence..
Ahhh..she screamed n closed her eyes..befor she fall on the ground..somone come imedeatly n hold her by her waist..they share a beautiful eyes look..
App thik to hai na..
man ask siya very politly..she nodded in yes..
man help her to stand her proper..
thanks ager aap nahi hote ho..
he giv her litle smile..ohh its ok
someone call his from behind
sameer vahan. kya ker rahe ho tum..he excuse himself n left..
Siya-ohh to sameer naam hai ..nice name
Ri-sab thik to hai na..
tum kahan khoe huye ho..
any way tab. tak tum sari formality dekh lo main room main ja rahi huin..
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riya talk to herself..
chalo riya ab room main jaker aram kerte hai..
she waited outside lift..
ufff ab ye lift ke kya prob hai..kitna time le rahi hai open hone main..finaly after ten minute lift open..riya enter inside lift..
but there is one other man..
riya looks toward man ..just for enquier..in mind..face se to thik thak lag raha hai..
per aaj kal kise ke face per kuch likha nahi hota..
Man-kuch laga hai..
Ri-man r man (In mind).



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start!! so samya met.. i think the man on lift is arjun!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ye kabhi nahi sudher sakte,
She turn her face,
Man-lagta hai apne thik se suna nahi,
kuch laga hai,
Ri-what do u meen..?
man-yahi to main aap se puch raha huin,
kuch laga hai mere face per jo tum etana focus ker ke dekh rahi hoo
(|in mind)girls r girls ek bhi moka nahi chodate,
hunnn..
both turn n stoop oposite,
Ri-mumered~samajhata kya hai apne aap ko,
yahhk kuch laga hai mere face per,
bol to ehse raha tha jaise kahi ka prince charming ho,
on the other side the man stood in very cool style..cross folding his arms across his chest..wearing white shirt n black jeens,look cool n handsome,
take a long breath n smile,ye ladki ye sonch rahi hai..ye jo bhi bol rahi hai ,
mujhe sunaye nahi pad raha hai,
per ese ye nahi pata,
acp arjun shuyakant rawte se kuch bach pana,
etna aasan nahi,
prince charming..humm not a bad..
Riya look his with cornner of her eyes..poor..apne aap main he hus raha hai..
lagta hai pagal ho gaya hai..
ar-pagal..she call me mentle..how dare she..vaise khud bhi kise pagal se kam nahi..he looks her from top to bottom..she wear red tight shirt n black jeans..open long hair..n sunglasses on her head..she looks more beautiful n gozious,
humm not bad..per akad kuch jayada he hai,
sudenly lift stop in mid,
n after few secong light also gone,
Riya screamed...
ohhh no ..!!!!.
she is shivering like a hell,
there was totaly dark,
plz helllppp,
by mistake she hold arjun hand..n hug him in one side TBC-
PR-ARIYA MOMENT IN LIFT

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INDEX-
PART=2
PART=3
PART=4
PART=5
PART=6A
PART=6B
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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

nice start!! so samya met.. i think the man on lift is arjun!!

Hummm yes he is arjun..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab!! so lift mein kuch hone wala hai!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Hmmm...very interesting!
Lift mein kya hona hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice start

mast hain

Sia always creating problems ..hehehe...

Sia was helped by Sam

Arjun n ria first meet in lift

waiting to know more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 loved Ariya's scenes in the lift😉
was too good when Riya was cursing Arjun silently and Arjun heard everything😆
please continue soon, akhir lift mein kya hone wala hein😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: haruhi26

😆loved Ariya's scenes in the lift😉

was too good when Riya was cursing Arjun silently and Arjun heard everything😆
please continue soon, akhir lift mein kya hone wala hein😆


Thank u tina..lolll lift main...hummm..kuch hoga ya nahi...
i m happy u like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start. and also loves sam .?so cute

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