ARIYA OS: Jalthe raho mere pyar mein-(deleted)

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

superb dear!!!

It was so romantic...

One phrase from don2

aakhir dil ne dimag ko sheh aur maat de hi diya!!

Arjun ne Riya ko surprise de diya!!

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

god it was so romatic😃
cant believe arjun did all that😛...but u know its nice to read such stuff once in a while😃...i toh loved this gift of yours completely😃
n u did complete justice to your challenge😊
great job👏

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Hey ...

That was fantastic 👏

I'm still smiling and blushing 😃 😳

I just loved Arjun 😉

But oops ... The end 😲 Jalte Raho mere Pyaar Mein ???

Now I want more 😳

I'm dying to see what'll Riya do ????

Plz continue 😉

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Awesome OS yaar...loved it...
Especially the end wala twist, it seems someone is getting expert in bringing twists..lolzz😆
If possible please do continue the story, would love to see Riya's reaction...

Thanks for the PM!

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

thanks a ton...

i am happy that u ppl liked it so much

yeah my mind is cooking up Riya's reactions to it and Arjun needs to explain himself!😉😳

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: prava55663
superb dear!!!

It was so romantic...

One phrase from don2

aakhir dil ne dimag ko sheh aur maat de hi diya!!

Arjun ne Riya ko surprise de diya!!

kiska dil aur kiska dimaag prava? lol 😳😉

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Sia

@satanslove

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Hi Vidya ,

I am the latest joinee of this forum and just saw you OS as a challenge for WOTW...

I have just completed Kismat Connection and looking forward ro read your other works ..Kindly add me to your PM List ...

coming to this OS ...plz dont let arjun have the last laugh ...let our poor Ri win once ...😉

U 'll see me more once i catch up with your works ...

P.S - do you have a Index of your writings ??

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

fab job👏

kya dhassu os o my god

aag lag gai ... uff kisko chup karane ka naya tareka damn awesome

loved it...loved it ...simply mesmerized

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: littlebrat
fab job👏
kya dhassu os o my god

aag lag gai ... uff kisko chup karane ka naya tareka damn awesome

loved it...loved it ...simply mesmerized

lekin tum try matth karna...ok? 😳😉

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: sips_crazy
Hi Vidya ,

I am the latest joinee of this forum and just saw you OS as a challenge for WOTW...

I have just completed Kismat Connection and looking forward ro read your other works ..Kindly add me to your PM List ...

coming to this OS ...plz dont let arjun have the last laugh ...let our poor Ri win once ...😉

U 'll see me more once i catch up with your works ...

P.S - do you have a Index of your writings ??