ARIYA OS: Jalthe raho mere pyar mein-(deleted)

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Omg Yaar i know ye Arjun kuch aisa hi karega Riya ka fasa hi ulta kar diya .

Love his last sentence.

"Mujhe jalene chali thi ,, ab jalthe raho mere pyar mai." 😆😊

Fantastic & romantic..

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: dia121
Awww that was so romantic diii...
awsome fiery...
set the os on fire really i mean that way of arjun was so superb...
That was so so romantic can't express
the song selection tooo awsome..
plz on request usko tohra or barhado diii😉
superb⭐️

agar time miley, toh iss OS ko SS banaane ki khoshish karungi...

pehle Tina ka feeback toh mil jaaye!

i am happy that all of u liked the gift and the ending! 😊

thanks!

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

so hwaaattt😉

lovd it

yeah arjun bi na 😉

bechari riya apni hi chal main phas gayi

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Seenavas
so hwaaattt😉
lovd it
yeah arjun bi na 😉
bechari riya apni hi chal main phas gayi

valentine week hai na?? socha kuch hot hot ho jaaye!

waise bhi punch dialogs toh Arjun hi maar saktha hai na?

isiliye twist in the tale laana padaa!

ek chota tadka...😳😉

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

😆 Late as usual😳

First thanks to Vidya for writing such a lovely and so romantic OS as challenge😳

Dil Khush huwa😃

And now commenting on your two updates:

Well Riya and Rehaan, and a jealous Arjun, haye too cute, specially when Riya didnt waste one minute to leave Arjun and go with Rehaan, acha huwa Arjun ke saath, kuch zyada akdu hein humara Arjun😳

And now your last part😳😳

Still blushing

So Arjun thinks that this is a simple way to make her stay quiet, by kissing her😆😳

It was so lovely...

I had asked an OS with Arjun burning with jealousy, and you ended with a Riya burning in the flames of desire☺️

Haye too good👍🏼

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

hi di...🤗 lovely os...riya tried to make him jealous but she forgetted that he is a super cop 😉...awesome update di...n his last sentence: mujhe jallane chali thi na ab jalt raho mere pyaar mein was beyond ma imagination di...👏👏👏👏👏 thanx 4 such a lovely os...

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: BDCTG

Uff...sumu...! Ankita aapi ki UNKO samajhkar mai kya karungi bolo? Jisko samajh ne ki zarurat hai pehle unnko achchi tarha se samajh ne do (winking at Ankita aapi!)... Aur mujhe samjhane ke liye mujhe kissiki JUNO ka zarurat nehi hai...meri hot-shot ACP rawte sahab hai na?

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sabu!!!
rawte tumhara akela kaha, wo to hazaro ka hai..
Par JUNO...*dreamy look * Haye!! MERA JUNO!!!

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

haye!! JUNO!!!
Tumhari wardrobe ki to raid karni parhegi...

OH MY GODDD!!!!
tumhe black mei soch k mai to LAL hogayi...
_______
pls koi mujhe vidu di se bachao pls!!
She writes 2 kill!!!