ARIYA OS: Jalthe raho mere pyar mein-(deleted)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Ariyans...sorry to disturb u ppl with another crazy story of mine...this is actually in response to Tina's challenge[Riya purposedly trying to make Arjun jealous so that he can reveal his feelings] to me as part of WOW grilling sessions...So i thought, why not make it a full fledged OS and yes I have planned to make it my valentine gift to all of you...I dont how much justice i can do to this OS...but i guess, i will make it as romantic and interesting as possible...Again, I am not giving importance to the actual case here...its full focus on ARIYA! 😉😳

please do read and comment...I am not sending PMs for this...and yes, will try to finish the OS in 3 parts basically and also try to end it before the weekend!

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So here it goes..."Jalthe raho mere pyar mein.."


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di 🤗
Yahoo me first..
loved d title di..
gud start
riya distance herself frm arjun gud..
shree dj
chotu bodyguard
ariya couple wow
rathod driver hehe
perfect di
case very interesting..!
happy wala vday in advance di lol
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Wowww!!! Loved it!!!😊
Interesting ...very interesting 😉
Riya trying to stay away from Arjun...let's see kab tak 😆
Arjun Babu...gussa kyun ho rahe ho...abhi toh bas shuruat hai 😆
Update sooon 😳
Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum os vidya di luvd it👏
i always luv your writing..
the way u express every characters feeling,emotions
m a fan of ur writing nw
keep updating
i wud luv to read next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Vidya...

Arjun jealous...Nice Task Tina..

Shree DJ...hoping to get some songs again..

Ariya as couple...waiting for valentine romance and love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res...
Nice concept,Vidya di.
Just loved it.
Next part jab update karogi,mujhe PM zarur karna.
Title suits the concept...
Kitne dino baad Vidya di ki OS parhi hai.
I am so happy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start

liking d part

Arjun ria making couple entry👏

thanks Tina for wonderful task

Vidya di continue soon

PS: i will read later parts after sunday 😉
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaawww... Rathod as Driver...??!!! 😲 😲 😲 😲

ufff,,, inke driving ka shauk bhi na... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start :) loved it
riya is trying to stay away from arjun and arjun is jealous..
awww arjun and riya going as a couple :) nice
rathore as driver and chotu as bodyguard 😆
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waaaooo Vidya aapiii! Tooo good! I'm vry vry excited. Lovely concept of the story...waiting 4 more eagerly.
Btw, how dare u to tell that u r disturbing us...huh????!! It is always a treat 4 me to read your stories on ArIya. Kya karu, mai to aapke jaisa likh nehi sakti, Allah ne itna achcha quality diya nehi mujhe...to mai to sirf mu 'aaa' kark padh hi sakti hu! Agar aap log nehi likhenge to mai karungi kya? Aainda ye disturb wala formal baatein maat karna...mai keh deti hu...haan!

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