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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Omg! This was so bloody romantic
Read this in my study break aur usske baad padhai pe dhyaan hi nahi hai😆
And can I say...I loved this Arjun and how!
😳😳
Thanks for such a wonderful vday gift😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
...I am Speechless... The update was AMAZING!!!! Please I want more of ur stories with more and more ARIYA!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: haruhi26

😆 Late as usual😳

First thanks to Vidya for writing such a lovely and so romantic OS as challenge😳
Dil Khush huwa😃
And now commenting on your two updates:
Well Riya and Rehaan, and a jealous Arjun, haye too cute, specially when Riya didnt waste one minute to leave Arjun and go with Rehaan, acha huwa Arjun ke saath, kuch zyada akdu hein humara Arjun😳
And now your last part😳😳
Still blushing
So Arjun thinks that this is a simple way to make her stay quiet, by kissing her😆😳
It was so lovely...
I had asked an OS with Arjun burning with jealousy, and you ended with a Riya burning in the flames of desire☺️
Haye too good👍🏼


Arjun ko jealousy mein jalaaya na?
phir Riya ko kuch toh dena padega na? isiliye...ek chota twist dhaal dhi...i hope u didnt mind it!
ab confession mein kuch toh farq chahiye na?
woh kisses hi Arjun ka pyar ka iqraar hai!
I am glad that all of u liked it...

will try to write something more soon...tina ideas deh dho! lol 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sumuZAMAN

haye!! JUNO!!!
Tumhari wardrobe ki to raid karni parhegi...

OH MY GODDD!!!!
tumhe black mei soch k mai to LAL hogayi...
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pls koi mujhe vidu di se bachao pls!!
She writes 2 kill!!!


oye...Aliya sunegi toh maar dhaalegi!
writes to kill! i like that comment...agli baar likhthe waqt yaad rakhungi! 😉
u made me laugh out! 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Hee...hee...hee...chahe koi kuch bhi kar le, aakhir me jeet hamesha humari akdu ACP rawte sahab ka hi hota hai!
Excellent update aapi! Kya dailog mara Arjun ne! I'm still in a 'aawww' position!
Edited by BDCTG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: BDCTG

Hee...hee...hee...chahe koi kuch bhi kar le, aakhir me jeet hamesha humari akdu ACP rawte sahab ka hi hota hai!
Excellent update aapi! Kya dailog mara Arjun ne! I'm still in a 'aawww' position!


aur nahi toh kya...aakhir hum sab Arjun ke die hard fans hai...unne kaise haarne dehthe! 😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Omg...it was soo romantic...n the last dialog of his..
Maar dala humain b or bichari riya ko bhi..
Hatss off to u vidya...one of the best writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Amazing update. Made my day. Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awesome !! One more part may an epilogue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.. I had decided that i will comment only when u finish updating the whole story.. So here it is...
Jalte raho mere pyaar mein is such a cute tittle..
Riya showing indifferent attitude towards Arjun n he in turn wondering WHY but obviously nt making it obvious.. The whole setting is such that i could actually imagine it happening in front of me n me munching on popcorns...
Ur writing is so real that it makes the whole story so real..
I loved the last part of the story.. Nice song selection.. The last line was superb..
Thanx for the wonderful valentine day gift...

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